Poor little stranded motorist...

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[Axeltheswede]

Set up

Your scenario is the set-up for many dirty jokes. That doesn't disqualify it as a basis for a good erotic story. But, you would have all the baggage of remembered jokes in many readers minds.

 

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[Axeltheswede]

stranded motorist

Or, you could neutralize the baggage. Have your protagonist acknowledge his situation as the set-up to a thousand dirty jokes.

Sometimes a trick like that works for dealing with cliche or "done a million times" situations.

 

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[SpaceToast]

In the spirit of avoiding the expected, perhaps you could do this. Write the story in an amusing, self-aware first person, as the man breaks down on the side of the road, mocks his brief attempt to fix the car, as per his expectation is without cel phone battery, remembers the farm house back half a mile, and sets off. Of course, he's expecting to meet some beautiful, lonely woman there (only thing that could save the night, he figures), only to be disappointed. He calls, says thank you, and leaves.

Then, what if the tow truck driver is female?

Play with the expectations, and it might work. Make her a fun, random character -- the sort who'll be huffy about having to get up at 2AM to help a thankless AAA member, then realizes there's one way to salvage the night, and kind of gets a wicked idea in her head. I have to say, I see a fair amount of Neil-Simon-esque comedy in this, and I like it. Good luck, at any rate-

-M@

 

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[Axeltheswede]

stranded motorist

Nice twist, Space Toast.

On the way to the farmhouse, he encounters the PI he hired to find his daughter. Results are in. The daughter is a tow truck driver and he has a picture. No wait... Wrong story. The lady at the farmhouse has a pussy that goes side to side instead of up and down. No wait... Sorry, I'm really mixed up now. Must lie down and sort this out.

 

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