Poll on the relationship

[PapelDoll]

Working on my story I had some feedback, many people like that he is the step dad but other people like for him to be the real dad.

Can you guys help me with the decision on which route to take

Thread 'The Dad I never had'
https://forum.literotica.com/threads/the-dad-i-never-had.1651910/

 

[NuclearFairy]

There are large groups of people that prefer it one way or the other, there are even people that would rather it be her friends dad. The real question is, which way do you prefer it? It's your story after all, and it'll probably turn out better if you write it to your preferences.

 

[PapelDoll]

There are large groups of people that prefer it one way or the other, there are even people that would rather it be her friends dad. The real question is, which way do you prefer it? It's your story after all, and it'll probably turn out better if you write it to your preferences.

Thank you that makes a lot of sense I would prefer not to be my dad

 

[NuclearFairy]

Thank you that makes a lot of sense I would prefer not to be my dad

Then leave it as the step dad. Remember, you are your first and most important reader. Sometimes, commentors will say something that sounds like a good idea, and if so, go for it. But, unless you're trying to make money, try to write stories that you would enjoy first. And even if you're trying to make money, a story that you like, will probably still be easier to write.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Some have an Ick-Factor about real parents but get past it with step parents even though the power dynamics are usually the same.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

You need a LOT of proofreading though:

"takes his boxes off to his ankels "

 

[Carnevil9]

The problem with real biological parents is, how do you explain that absolutely nothing happened for eighteen or more years? It seems implausible. Unless the parent was absent for a long time and just resurfaced. Or, like I did in a mother/son story, make the son/daughter the aggressor, which doesn't happen until they reach a sufficiently sexual age. Other than tricks like that, step-parents give you more leeway in terms of backstory.

 

[sister jenny]

The only way to write a story you yourself will like and be happy with is to write for yourself only.
If other people like it too, that is a bonus, but only write for yourself.

 

[dirk2024]

Working on my story I had some feedback, many people like that he is the step dad but other people like for him to be the real dad.

Can you guys help me with the decision on which route to take

Thread 'The Dad I never had'
https://forum.literotica.com/threads/the-dad-i-never-had.1651910/

There are large groups of people that prefer it one way or the other, there are even people that would rather it be her friends dad. The real question is, which way do you prefer it? It's your story after all, and it'll probably turn out better if you write it to your preferences.

As NuclearFairy pointed out, write for your wants and needs. Readers will pummel you with how THEY want a story to play out and they'll never agree. So you'll go nuts trying to accommodate everyone, which isn't possible.

 

[dirk2024]

You need a LOT of proofreading though:

"takes his boxes off to his ankels "

I am assuming you @PapelDoll were writing fast to make this a forum post. Make sure you take your time when writing this out into a story and read, then re-read it again. And maybe again. I spend a lot of time editing my story before I publish, trying my best to ensure there are no (okay...a few still sneak through) errors in my final product.

 

[PapelDoll]

I am assuming you @PapelDoll were writing fast to make this a forum post. Make sure you take your time when writing this out into a story and read, then re-read it again. And maybe again. I spend a lot of time editing my story before I publish, trying my best to ensure there are no (okay...a few still sneak through) errors in my final product.

Thank you , and yes I was writing it fast to make it here