Poker Night - The daughter distraction

RicoLouis

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Not sure how to turn this one into an erotic story but seemed like an interesting idea for a start of one.

A guy is holding a late night poker game at his house with the rest of his buds from work. He isn’t doing too hot. His daughter comes home from a date upset at her boyfriend. She says hi to the guys and asks her dad if she can get him anything when one of the guys gives her some lip about she could make them some sandwiches, she of course gives it right back and makes him ask nicely. Before she leaves she fixes her bra strap and gives her head a little shrug as she looks at her dad before walking away. It takes him a second but he realizes she was signaling him that his buddy had a high hand so he folds which turns out to be a good call.

The next round she comes around with the sandwiches as she goes around the table offering each guy food she either touches her top. Playing with her hair or caressing her neck as she talks to each of the guys meaning they have a high hand or she slides her hand in her pocket or runs her hands along her pants adjusting her panty line meaning the guy has a low hand. The rest of the guys think her just flirting with them. As the night goes on she keeps the beer and the food coming as her dad racks up and the guys don't seem to mind. She teases them to make sure that they at least leave her a tip for being their waitress before her dad takes it all.
 
Not sure how to turn this one into an erotic story but seemed like an interesting idea for a start of one.

A guy is holding a late night poker game at his house with the rest of his buds from work. He isn’t doing too hot. His daughter comes home from a date upset at her boyfriend. She says hi to the guys and asks her dad if she can get him anything when one of the guys gives her some lip about she could make them some sandwiches, she of course gives it right back and makes him ask nicely. Before she leaves she fixes her bra strap and gives her head a little shrug as she looks at her dad before walking away. It takes him a second but he realizes she was signaling him that his buddy had a high hand so he folds which turns out to be a good call.

The next round she comes around with the sandwiches as she goes around the table offering each guy food she either touches her top. Playing with her hair or caressing her neck as she talks to each of the guys meaning they have a high hand or she slides her hand in her pocket or runs her hands along her pants adjusting her panty line meaning the guy has a low hand. The rest of the guys think her just flirting with them. As the night goes on she keeps the beer and the food coming as her dad racks up and the guys don't seem to mind. She teases them to make sure that they at least leave her a tip for being their waitress before her dad takes it all.

I've got an idea.

Even with his daughter, he's still losing, and he's almost out. Suddenly, though, he gets four of a king...but he has no chips. The other guys won't let him bet his shoes or shirt, but one of them suggests he put up a night with his daughter. She sees his hand, and agrees. But then, someone else has a straight flush...
 
Okay, the first story idea has some merit but the problem is two fold. First unless this is an incest tale and it doesn't really sound like it what's the pay off? I think it might be better if she comes back after a bad date, perhaps a bit tipsy and she's not trying to help her dad, she's just distracting and . . .yeah I haven't gotten past there yet either.

The second idea. . .you'd have to come in really heavy handed with the story. It's not that it's a bad idea it's just that you have to come at it the same way you come at the classic "Big Sausage Pizza" bit where the girl answers the door in lingerie and her friends are having a pillow fight. You know, throw reality so fucking far out of the window that nobody is complaining about it being an impossible scenario and they're instead focused entirely on if you can be entertaining.
 
I like the poker game idea........ being tipsy and pissed at her b/f. Describe the guys who are playing cards and let me know if she gets the 'tip' or the whole thing lol
Charlene
 
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