Poetry Suggestions

WickedEve

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There's a thread on the story board for ideas for new stories. I think it's somewhat different for poetry. Poets are inspired to write a poem. Though some suggestions for a poem may get a poet's creative juices flowing (I know that's cliché! lol)

So... any suggestions? Is there possibly something out there poets haven't yet written about? (I doubt it.) Let's see, there's a bunch of poems about flowers, storms, trees... Has anyone done a poem on what it would be like to be a woman's locket? Inside you hold the picture of lovers. You're around her neck most of the time. You see and hear, or maybe just feel, everything that goes on in her life.

Anyway, if you have any ideas, post them. You may help out someone with writer's block.
 
Oh, Such A Lovely Locket

Inside the locket,
The pictures kiss
But get broken apart
When their love
Becomes exhibition!

A snap with chain dangle
Only sets them between
Jiggling bouncing breasts
As they promenade within the
Elastic satin cage.

In the dark,
Kissing, necking, longing -
The pictures dream of
Delicious pink Heaven
Where their bodies dwell.
 
How about the lust a tree has for the coming heat of springtime? Or, the sexual thrill of sighting a breast accidentally exposed? Maybe a little pondering on the semi-realistic world our mind takes us when masturbating. What if all the masturbating people were taken to the same room? Hmmm? What if they are those who occupy that space with us?

Yep, that is what is going through my mind at that moment...

;)
- Judo
 
JUDO said:
Oh, Such A Lovely Locket

Inside the locket,
The pictures kiss
But get broken apart
When their love
Becomes exhibition!

A snap with chain dangle
Only sets them between
Jiggling bouncing breasts
As they promenade within the
Elastic satin cage.

In the dark,
Kissing, necking, longing -
The pictures dream of
Delicious pink Heaven
Where their bodies dwell.
Well, hell girl!!! How did you write it that fast? You are a poetry freak!!! lol
 
JUDO said:
How about the lust a tree has for the coming heat of springtime? Or, the sexual thrill of sighting a breast accidentally exposed? Maybe a little pondering on the semi-realistic world our mind takes us when masturbating. What if all the masturbating people were taken to the same room? Hmmm? What if they are those who occupy that space with us?

Yep, that is what is going through my mind at that moment...

;)
- Judo
"What if all the masturbating people were taken to the same room?"
Uh... umm... an orgy where you only touch yourself?
 
No, more like the room that Woody Allen suggests all our lost socks end up in.

The imaginary people in the room with you. That faceless hunk that pummels the heck out of you from behind at just the right moment. That brunette at the bar who just flashed her teeth over her drink in your direction. The anonymous tongue that reaches...oh! just the right spot.

You know...those people who are there with you.

All you have to do is masturbate to be taken to that room with them.
 
Oh Judo, I have a bed reserved in that room! It's a place I go where everybody knows my name.
 
I don't know about men, but as a woman, I can't get off if my mind is a blank. lol I have to create a scenario. There has to be someone there touching me, or peeking out from behind a bush. :rolleyes:
 
Absolutely! Gotta be livin' the dream.

Now, this room wouldn't be called "Cheers," I know. Frankly, there is no way I could get off sitting next to Norm. Yowch!

But speaking of Cheers, there should be a blessing that goes with having a good orgasm. Now what would that be?
 
Hey, you're the High Priestess, you cum up with a blessing. lol
 
Over the flesh
Between the lips
Look out pussy
Here it cums
 
WickedEve said:

Well, hell girl!!! How did you write it that fast? You are a poetry freak!!! lol

I put myself in the locket's place and looked around.

Inside the blouse

"It's such a lovely sunny day out, the rays of sunshine cast through the linen above us creating their criss-cross patterns over the shoulders, breasts and brassiere of our lady. Inside the metal it's somewhat warm, but steamy thoughts permeate our heads as we kiss. As if to knock sexual inspiration into us, our lady starts strutting towards work in bouncing long strides, jiggleing us like a birdy in badmitton between her two heavy mounds strapped in their lovely confines...etc, etc, etc."

It's like writing a travel logue. Just put your mind there and observe with those sensative senses of yours.

;)
- Judo
 
Looking at my AV

I'm a rectangle of cardboard,
holding the juice of a bovine.
Who's mug is on my jug?
Little boy lost,
misplaced poet,
find him and give him a hug.

Well, that's what you get when I write a quick poem. lol
 
I like it. Make it longer.

How about this POV? Put yourself in a little boat on that pearly sea inside the box in the midst of someone pouring themselves a glass.
 
JUDO said:
I like it. Make it longer.

How about this POV? Put yourself in a little boat on that pearly sea inside the box in the midst of someone pouring themselves a glass.
You like it? This is be nice to Wicked Eve Day, isn't it? lol
But I do like the "misplaced poet" line. I may work a poem around, under, and through that.
 
Reverend REDWAVE again

Blessing for a good orgasm:

"May the satisfaction which suffuses both your bodies bring you closer together and spread into all areas of your life. May sex no longer be a refuge from the harshness of everyday existence, but may sex and love broaden to encompass all."
 
Nice, Rev! I like that. Maybe I can get it painted over my fireplace.

;)
- Judo
 
Re: Reverend REDWAVE again

REDWAVE said:
Blessing for a good orgasm:

"May the satisfaction which suffuses both your bodies bring you closer together and spread into all areas of your life. May sex no longer be a refuge from the harshness of everyday existence, but may sex and love broaden to encompass all."
Well praise the pussy! I'm going to the church of the Big O, and cop a feel of the spirit, and ride on tongues.
 
Ah SO!

How about a poem about ben wa balls! I like balls. Especially downy balls. Ask Eve and Sweetwood. LOL....But I want one about gold, shiny, metal balls kept in a pretty red, brocade box, each in their own little niche, that sound like windchimes in a soft summer breeze....LOL hmmm maybe I've got the start of one here already..

But I really don't know what I'm talking about...I've just HEARD about them... <weg> Honest.

Kat~:rose:
 
ben wa balls, wasn't that a star wars character?

I'd write a poem about it but I don't have any balls. :D So I don't know enough about the topic to write about it... though, in the past that hasn't stopped me. :rolleyes:
 
WickedEve said:
ben wa balls, wasn't that a star wars character?

Why yes, I think you're right! In that movie where
Princess Lay-Ya would rather kiss Nookie!
 
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