Poetry by Neteru

[Neteru]

making love is a beartiful thing
but tonight Iwanna scream
I wanna fuck you until you're
weak
fuck you until you can't speak
I want to do things
to you, vanessa del rio
would be ashamed to do
making love is sweet and tender
but tonight I want to surrender
all of me
Bewitch your senses
Ensnare your mind
take you through the portals
of time
all that you seek
is between my thighs
or would you rather
slip between these
big lucious lips
take you to places
you've only imagined
as you slide between my hips
or would you rather have me
on all fours
slipping in through the back door
making love is wonderful
but tonight Ii want to hear that thunder roar
I want to fuck, in the tub, in the bed
from the bed to the table
from the table to the floor
anywere that we are able
tonight I want to fuck
til we just can't fuck no more

 

[Neteru]

DO YOU DESIRE THE ULTMATE FUCK
the type that will suck you dry
Where you have no control
no matter what you try
and no i am not talkin about usin my mouth
this can be accomplished by takin a trip down south
and meetin MZ SNAPPER
She will greet you with southern hospitality
as she invites you in
by taking the head of your dick and slowly
work her way down the shaft
pullin you in takin you away from reality
NO baby dont move
just lay still and let
MZ SNAPPER
get in her groove
She can grip a dime with her lips
take you to heaven
without the slightest movement of the hips
so baby relax as you
take this journey to
ECSTASY
right now its all about pleasing YOU
you can show be what you are working with
when I'm through
let MZ SNAPPER handle this
as she grips, pulsates, immulates and
surpasses the best blow job you eva had
Even anal sex cannot compare to what
MZ SNAPPER
has to share
OH BABY SAY WHAT
you did'nt wanna cum
yet.................MY BAD
but that's what happens
after MZ SNAPPER has had
her fun
WANNA TRY TO HOLD ON
TO ANOTHER ONE

 

[Neteru]

I need that
take yo time kinda lovin
the kind of lovin
that brings out
the freak in me
on my knees
lookin' back at you
sayin' yes baby please
dont stop
as you do a slow bump and grind
from behind
or me on top
slidin' up and down
your dick
hot, tight and slick
I crave that take yo
time kinda lovin
where your face is my seat
and your tongue meets
my chocklit clit lickin'
my honey dew
I desire
the passion and fire
of that ultimate fuck
but slow and easy
as I suck you
to euphoric heights
the kinda lovin that
makes you lose your will
while you ignite me, excite me entice me
wit your skills
I need that take yo time kinda lovin

 

[Neteru]

Phone Bone

Listening to your voice soft and smooth
setting the scene for a lovemaking mood
I hear you whispering sexily
how much you need tp be
inside me
juices glistening
on swollen lips
as I touch myself
and arch my hips
fingers swirling
round my pearl
these feelings taking me to another world
fingers gently enter
the spot that is my center
as I hear you urge me on
baby come for me come strong
inhaling, exhaling, moaning and groaning
lips throbbing, pulsating, can't hold it no longer
baby I'm in that zone
orgasmic pleasure over takes my senses
as my body tense and
mmmmmmmm damn that was good
never thought I ever could
phone bone©

 

[Neteru]

Can you stay the night

We have been seeing each other
for some time
I think now I can say
what’s been on my mind
its time to take
the relationship further
I’ve thought about us making love
After stepping out of the tub
And all the things I want to do for you
may I strip for you
I've imagined us together
Holding each other tight
bodies intertwined
laying on our sides
in that sixty-nine
you deep in my mouth
your head buried between my thighs
our tongues probing and seeking
leaving both of us weak and
Baby, can you stay with me tonight
I've fantasized over and over
of making love by candlelight
of you deep inside me
my legs over your shoulders
calling out your name
as I come again and again
anything you want.....whatever you want to do
inhibitions have been burned away
by this fire
and my desire
to savor the flavor of you
Baby, can you stay with me tonight

 

[wildsweetone]

Hi Neteru and welcome to the poetry forum

Interesting poetry you've put up here. Are you wanting feedback/critique or just to share your poetry?

Check out the Sticky threads at the top of the page, and you have the ability through your Submissions page to submit your poetry to be published on Literotica. Just shout if you need help getting around. Plenty of people here who will help.

 

[Neteru]

Hi Neteru and welcome to the poetry forum

Interesting poetry you've put up here. Are you wanting feedback/critique or just to share your poetry?

Check out the Sticky threads at the top of the page, and you have the ability through your Submissions page to submit your poetry to be published on Literotica. Just shout if you need help getting around. Plenty of people here who will help.

I would so appreciate feedback, and any assistance would be welcomed.

 

[wildsweetone]

okay, choosing just one (as i have to go off to a meeting shortly), here's my scrambled thoughts.

i am still learning about poetry and critiquing and make mistakes. i fyou find anything i say useful, then feel free to use it. if not, then no problem - you got it free anyway.

see my thoughts in bold

Phone Bone

l(L)istening to your voice soft and smooth
setting the scene for a lovemaking mood(nice near rhyme)
I hear u('you') whispering sexily
how much u(you) need the(to) be
inside of me(i'd delete 'of')
juices glistening
on swollen lips
as I touch myself
and arch my hips
fingers swirling
round(around) my pearl
these feelings taking me to another world
fingers gently enter
the spot that is my center
as i(I) hear u(you) urge me on
baby kum(come or cum) for me kum(come or cum) strong
inhaling, exhaling, moaning and groaning
lips throbbing, pulsating, cant(can't) hold it no longer
baby I'm in that zone
orgasmic pleasure over takes(overtakes) my senses
as my body tense('tenses'?) and
mmmmmmmm damn that was good
never thought I ever could
phone bone©

your poems sound almost musical when i read them. are they songs?

sorry have to rush off now. hope some of this helps. will check in tomorrow.

 

[Neteru]

Seasons

New love
eyes meet, smiles exchanged
tentative introductions
hearts aflame
spring love



love in bloom
cultivated and fertilized with feelings
full heart
summer love

love has grown like wild flowers
become well known
warm and comfortable
autumn love

love in limbo
how could something so wonderful go so wrong
using half a heart to keep love strong
full moon in winter soltice
ending of love.

 

[Neteru]

poet reborn

I thought it was dead
The voice in my head
That allowed me to manipulate
word into song
For what is poetry but a song
without music
I'd pick up my pen waiting for
the voice from within to sing
and hear nothing
A cancerous melancholy
metastisized my mind, my heart
taking it's toll
as I put away
my book and pen
THEN
a familiar sensation, a voice
my muse infusing passion from my pen
ink flowing across the page
speaking of souls and hearts bound by
passion, by love,by lust,
singing of injustice, trust, the thrills one receive from a lovers thrust
of heaven and hell, of souls for sale, of innocence misused and turned
to rage
singed by an inner fire to pour my thoughts, my words, my soul
across a page
All this I put to paper and pen
A poet reborn again.

 

[Neteru]

I belong to thee

I belong to thee
totally completely
bound to thee for eternity
only you can take me away from here
away from pain sorrow and fear


I have found my place within thee
and it fondles me gently
a place that allows me to be free
to share the love i have held on to
to be given to you and only you


I marvel at your magnificance
bask in the resplendence of you
and all that rest between your
thighs
bliss awaits me there

I wonder at the splendor of thee
as i find your groove and it
cradles me tenderly
soon magic will be made
you will feel me deep within thee
I want to lay there play there
stay there

I have found a place within your light
where my wings can take flight
Your beacon guiding me into the night


And like a kite I fly
into the wisdom of your eyes
my soul soars
knowing that you will never set me free
nor do i want to be free as long as you are a
part of me

 

[Neteru]

Masturbate

As I lay in a bath full
of bubbles
soaking away the days stress
and troubles
with a glass of wine
slightly chilled
listening to the soothing sounds
of
Kim, Nancy, and Will
2 pieces of chocolate
on my plate
I think of you
as I masturbate
thumb circling my pearl
fingers deep inside
imagining you between my thighs
seeing you with my minds eye
feeling you move inside
with that smooth way that you
glide in and out
making me shout
your name
having me cum like
water from the spout.
leaving me well sated
As I think of you and
masturbate.

 

[wildsweetone]

hey Neteru,

you might get more constructive criticism by submitting your poetry into Literotica. check out your submissions page.

 

[Neteru]

hey Neteru,

you might get more constructive criticism by submitting your poetry into Literotica. check out your submissions page.

Thank you wildsweetone, I have done so, waiting.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v335/sarrkastik/smileys/icon_sweatdrop.gif

 

[wildsweetone]

Thank you wildsweetone, I have done so, waiting.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v335/sarrkastik/smileys/icon_sweatdrop.gif

i love that smilie - hope you're not sweating it out too much!

i may not get a chance to comment on what you've submitted until my Monday. it's a kind of busy weekend here for me.

 

[Neteru]

HelllllllllllllllllllllllOOOOOOOOOOOOO?

I was told that this was the place to showcase poetry.

I was told that all poetry was accepted, from abstract to absolute, from demure to dark, from pussy to politics.

I was told that this forum was the place to be, if you wanted your poetry, critiqued.

I have put up several poems, and although they have been viewed and some have voted, there are no comments, no criticisms, nothing.

I truly do not care about my rating, what I do care about is your input, if you do not like the poem, explain why, if you do, I'd like to know why also.

If it could be better, if editing is needed, if it makes no damn sense to you whatsoever, I'd like to know

Thank you.
Net

 

[BooMerengue]

I was told that this was the place to showcase poetry. It is.

I was told that all poetry was accepted, from abstract to absolute, from demure to dark, from pussy to politics. It is.

I was told that this forum was the place to be, if you wanted your poetry, critiqued. It is.

I have put up several poems and although they have been viewed and some have voted, there are no comments, no criticisms, nothing. Several is the operative word here. Usually one poem is posted here and then those that can will critique/comment.

I truly do not care about my rating, what I do care about is your input, if you do not like the poem, explain why, if you do, I'd like to know why also. I, myself, do not read erotic poetry. Especially when the fuck word and others of that nature are prevalent. Sometimes there are challenges here daring folks to write erotic w/o using those particular words, and the results are interesting. I do not speak for others, though. Just for me.

If it could be better, if editing is needed, if it makes no damn sense to you whatsoever, I'd like to know. See above.

Thank you.
Net

Welcome home.
Boo

 

[Neteru]

Welcome home.
Boo

I have written erotic poetry without the use of the fuck word, I put up the ones here, because there are not many places on the net, well to my knowledge, that will accept them.


Thank you BooMerengue for your input and insight.

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

I was told that this was the place to showcase poetry.

I was told that all poetry was accepted, from abstract to absolute, from demure to dark, from pussy to politics.

I was told that this forum was the place to be, if you wanted your poetry, critiqued.

I have put up several poems, and although they have been viewed and some have voted, there are no comments, no criticisms, nothing.

I truly do not care about my rating, what I do care about is your input, if you do not like the poem, explain why, if you do, I'd like to know why also.

If it could be better, if editing is needed, if it makes no damn sense to you whatsoever, I'd like to know

Thank you.
Net

Once it was.
I've been told this is the place to gladhand your friends and then stab those that criticize the crowd fav's with low scores and call them names.

A place to walk like a dog on two legs dragging it's tail on a white carpet, and your friends tell you how witty the lines are.

You can
always pucker up and join the yeasay crowd
Or you can
pay attention to the few who know