poems from one line

wildsweetone

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Choose one line from another Litster's poem, write a poem including that line and post it here. Please ensure you post the poet's name and the poem the line came from.

Happy writing!

:rose:
 
4degrees said:
a song playing
drowing out invisible
breath, i imagine its heavy
my own came fast,
in heated gasps for
those minutes
connected unlike the norm,
i saw your name there with
the ring, it jerked me up
to attention
and i thought
that then i'd hear
something more
i did too,
but not with my ears

another solar circle
night and day presides
and dictates a pattern
as predictable
insipid facade seems to shroud
my sun, light and dark are one
rain comes at a perfect time
soul cleansing forensic
and leaves fall where they may
won't you always
just stay
right here in my pocket
go with me, be my constant

three years is what i hear
a long time to think
and hear echos of
the other, better way
a shame all the same
but some people never learn

like me.
repeat.
i will not get it, you see
no matter how ya lay it out,
just keep my dream alive.



Another solar circle
welcomes the moment for wine
and song where men belong.
Rubbered souls lean on brass
as eyes catch eyes in polished
glass. Lowered necklines tempt
and take the toll of men
who stroll and seek
the solace of silk and lace.


(needs fiddling)
 
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One Line ?

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Now where have I seen this challange before ??? <WG>

Guess I'm gonna have to find something :rolleyes:
 
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