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Please let me know if I've got all the Emily's right in this bit. It's the FMC who goes by "Z" telling other characters what her first name is:
The MMC goes over to a house owned by the Harringtons. Is this correct?
Also:
“Okay. It’s Emily. I’m Emily Annette Zajaczkowski. When I was in kindergarten, there were two other Emilys. The school policy was when there are multiple kids with the same first name to call each student by their first and last name. But no one could pronounce my last name, so I was Emily Z. My classmates eventually dropped the ‘Emily’ and called me just ‘Z’. I liked Z because there are so many Emilys, but there wasn’t any girl who used their last initial as their name. I’ve gone by ‘Z’ ever since. That’s my story. Pretty silly, huh?”
The MMC goes over to a house owned by the Harringtons. Is this correct?
At nine, I went over to the Harringtons’.
Also:
Z told me Giselle stories until we arrived at the Harringtons’ house.