SEVERUSMAX
Benevolent Master
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I was thinking of twisting some of the people from my past into characters for a story (where they will all be at least 18). Except my characters are a little wilder and bolder than they were in real-life (at least to my knowledge).
The main characters are: Dominic (a character based on me), Lisa, James, Jonathan, Michelle, Mike, and Robin. Mike is the Sunday School teacher at a fundamentalist Baptist church. Robin is his wife. Lisa is a tease and the female version of a "player", that is, one who pretends to be exclusive when she's not. She is simultaneously sleeping with Dominic, James, and Jonathan, all without the others' knowledge. Michelle is her 18 year old younger sister, who has a secret crush on Dominic, but is also currently having an affair with Mike.
I won't share too much, but that the action really begins when Dominic realizes that Lisa is two-timing him and drops her like a hot potato right before he joins the Navy.
When he gets back, he is considerably wilder, looser, tougher, and more cynical. He begins his revenge on the family by fucking Michelle. And having had his way with Mike's mistress, he is himself seduced by Robin, who wants to know what Michelle has that she doesn't, as she has just found out about the affair. It goes from there to get progressively wilder and more tangled.
Oh, and Lisa and Michelle are the pastor's daughters.
The main characters are: Dominic (a character based on me), Lisa, James, Jonathan, Michelle, Mike, and Robin. Mike is the Sunday School teacher at a fundamentalist Baptist church. Robin is his wife. Lisa is a tease and the female version of a "player", that is, one who pretends to be exclusive when she's not. She is simultaneously sleeping with Dominic, James, and Jonathan, all without the others' knowledge. Michelle is her 18 year old younger sister, who has a secret crush on Dominic, but is also currently having an affair with Mike.
I won't share too much, but that the action really begins when Dominic realizes that Lisa is two-timing him and drops her like a hot potato right before he joins the Navy.
When he gets back, he is considerably wilder, looser, tougher, and more cynical. He begins his revenge on the family by fucking Michelle. And having had his way with Mike's mistress, he is himself seduced by Robin, who wants to know what Michelle has that she doesn't, as she has just found out about the affair. It goes from there to get progressively wilder and more tangled.
Oh, and Lisa and Michelle are the pastor's daughters.
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