Please read my lesbian story

[Lying Eyes]

Due to formating problems I had to pull my lesbian story from the site after the first day it was posted. Now that it is up fixed and no longer listed as a "new" story it seems I am not getting anymore views. Since I put some time and effort into this piece it distresses me how few people have read it so I would apreciate it if anyone intrested in lesbian stories would read it.

The title is "The Truth Shall Set You Free", discription would be: she reveals her love to her friend. It is a bit "mushy" so if you prefer a raunchy tale it may not interest you.

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=144101

 

[carsonshepherd]

Sweet. Liked it.

 

[Guest]

Due to formating problems I had to pull my lesbian story from the site after the first day it was posted. Now that it is up fixed and no longer listed as a "new" story it seems I am not getting anymore views. Since I put some time and effort into this piece it distresses me how few people have read it so I would apreciate it if anyone intrested in lesbian stories would read it.

The title is "The Truth Shall Set You Free", discription would be: she reveals her love to her friend. It is a bit "mushy" so if you prefer a raunchy tale it may not interest you.

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=144101

Read it, voted, and commented

 

[Samuelx]

Nice.

 

[Lying Eyes]

Re: Re: Please read my lesbian story

Read it, voted, and commented

Xtaabay, did you try to give a public comment for my story? If so can you try again since it didnt seem to go through.

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Re: Please read my lesbian story

Xtaabay, did you try to give a public comment for my story? If so can you try again since it didnt seem to go through.

It didn't show up??? Yes, I did leave a public comment. I'll have to try again. That's weird...

 

[anne27]

Very sweet and sexy. I read and posted. Good luck!

 

[Lying Eyes]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Please read my lesbian story

It didn't show up??? Yes, I did leave a public comment. I'll have to try again. That's weird...

Did you try again?

anne27's kind words came through so the public comment system should be working okay.

Did you remember to put in the security code or realize that the first button is to preview your comment and then another button has to be clicked on to submit it or edit it.

 

[fallon2]

Good

Good story, especially if it is your first. I would strongly suggest that you read "Rachel's First Woman" as it is not only well written but it should be a model for other aspiring writers. Look at the details as well as the dialogue. Everything "flows."
Good luck in your future writings!

 

[Lying Eyes]

Re: Good

Good story, especially if it is your first. I would strongly suggest that you read "Rachel's First Woman" as it is not only well written but it should be a model for other aspiring writers. Look at the details as well as the dialogue. Everything "flows."
Good luck in your future writings!

Thanks for the tip, I will check out the story you suggested.