Please help me choose a title for my first story

[kittybunny]

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[MelissaBaby]

Hello everyone

Please tell me which title makes you want to click on the story more. Or which one looks and reads the best.

I thought it was better for me to not tell the plot. This way I know which one of them attracts the most attention at first sight without knowing the story. That's actually how titles work right?

The only thing that I will tell is that "Kedi" is the name of the main character. Feel free to give suggestions too!

Below are the options!



Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat

Kedi Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat

Kedi: Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat

Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat: Kedi

Kedi Out of the Bag

Kedi Out of the Bag & Hat

I would go with Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat. The name of the character doesn't really mean anything to the potential reader at this point, and as it is an unusual name, may just confuse them.

 

[Rustyoznail]

I'm going with number 3, mainly because it can be easily used if you decide to write more with Kedi. It's would keep them all together, and your followers can easily spot the story.

Not exactly what you're after, I know...

 

[TadOverdon]

Knowing nothing about the story, I'd just go with plain "Out of The Bag."

 

[ElectricBlue]

I would go with Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat. The name of the character doesn't really mean anything to the potential reader at this point, and as it is an unusual name, may just confuse them.

Plus one. Although they're all a little too Doctor Suess for my liking. Erotica with coloured crayons.

Make good use of the story sub-title to provide more content cues. And wait for Doctor Doom, he'll have a word or three, being our resident Title Meister .

 

[SimonDoom]

What's the story about? Category? Summary?

What is out of the bag, out of the hat? What does it mean? What does it have to do with the story?

Who's Kedi?

Can't answer this question in the abstract.

If forced to choose, knowing nothing more, I'd drop "Kedi" and go with Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat ch. 1, because it at least has a certain rhythm to it.

 

[LAHomedog]

What's the story about? Category? Summary?

What is out of the bag, out of the hat? What does it mean? What does it have to do with the story?

Who's Kedi?

Can't answer this question in the abstract.

I was going to say the same thing. Some context please.

 

[PBAnnie]

Here Kedi, Kedi, Kedi!

...at least that's one way to get a pussy running...

 

[kittybunny]

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[kittybunny]

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[Nouh_Bdee]

I was thinking the exact same thing
But I'm afraid it's too long and looks weird, loses the clever rhyme. I love the first one but I really want the name too. Such a dilemma hahaha.

I think it depends on if Kedi will have more stories beyond the Out Of title. If so, you need the name. If not, I'd leave it off.

Although... what's the character limit? Is it 35? Because that may make the decision for you...

 

[kittybunny]

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[Nouh_Bdee]

Dang.. thank for bringing this up before I set my heart on it completely "Kedi: Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat" is 36 characters and the limits are 35 characters for titles and 60 for descriptions. I also have the chapters which makes it impossible. It will be one story with multple chapters. I managed to make "Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat Ch.1" 35 excactly.

so it's either "Kedi Out of the Bag Ch. 01" if I want the name or "Out of the Bag, Out of the Hat Ch.1"

but then I also have a problem if I want to exceed 9 chapters for the latter

Don't hold me to this, but I've heard mention of exceptions being made if chapter ten takes you to 36 characters...

 

[kittybunny]

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[Rustyoznail]

It should be Ch01 - just in case there's another 98 stories.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

If you check out the titles for my two 5-part stories, you'll notice that the titles are 33 and 34 characters long before the Pt. 0x is tacked on. In the instructions box on the submittal form, let them know that the story is part xx of a yy part story.

 

[kittybunny]

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