Please browse my unfinished story

[Priapism47]

I can't seem to get any volunteer editor to respond to any type of response. Which leads me to believe the editor page does not work.

So I'm posting my story here


It's open to critique, criticism, editing, or any new ideas. Anything that would make it more interesting or enjoyable to the couple that will be reading it. Also If you are interested in co authoring for fun it would be awesome if you want to pick up where I left off.

As long as you stay in context. Anything is acceptable except for anal and any further hints of homosexual tendencies.

Thanks

 

[Learin]

Blatantly posting links to other personal websites is called spamming out here. Please remove it and try the Editor's Forum to find an editor, Beta-Reader etc. You'll definitely find someone who would like to help.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Plus it sux.

 

[Priapism47]

Have a nice day