plausible story line?

jedisubmits

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Hello,
I am trying to write a story that could actually be plausible. I would like to run the idea past you to get your opinion. Do you think this could possibly happen?

A 17 year old boy wants to date a girl he met while working in the mall. He works at an Abercrombie and Fitch store, and she works at a goth type store. Her mother has one condition for him to meet if he wants to date her daughter. He must wear a chastity device while out on dates. Her mother checks to make sure it is properly locked on, and she must unlock the device at the end of the date. She has the only key.
The mother insists upon this because her two other daughters were knocked up at the same age as this daughter, and this mother is going to make sure this girl's life isn't ruined also.
The boy's mother discovers the chastity device hidden in his closet. She doesn't know if he got it from his best friend who is gay or what.
She finally discovers that it came from his girlfriends mother. His mother confronts the girl's mother, but she won't relent. The girl's mother says it's simply forces abstanence. The boy's mother confronts him and tells him he cannot date her. He says he's willing to continue wearing it to date the girl.

The slight alteration to the storyline: when they first start dating, the girl's mother goes over to visit the boy's mother and explain to her the one condition she has for the boy dating her daughter. She insists that he wears the chastity device. She woman shows it to the boy's mother, who is mortified by the idea. The girl's mother explains that she must verify that he is wearing it properly before she lets them leave for a date. The girl's mother says that if the boy's mother would like the other key to the chastity device, she can have it to release the boy if she'd prefer to lock/unlock him instead.
The rationale is that both mothers are in favor of abstinence and this chastity device enforces it. How could his mother object, especially if he were to agree to it.

As the story moves on, the boy would be forced to wear cock rings that keep his cock in place over his balls so that when he wears his speedo at the girls' backyard pool, he is unable to achieve an erection. The girl's mother again, insists upon him wearing the rings in such a way that his cock could not grow to full length and she insists he wear a speedo (or square cut bathing suit).

Plausible? Think this could ever happen?
Thanks for your feedback.
 
Plausible? Probably not. But non-plausible stories exist all the time, especially here at Lit. Just write it as if it exist in a universe where such things *are* plausible. Every author creates a universe. As long as your universe is internally consistent, and plays by its own rules, readers will accept it.

On the other hand, your inclusion of a 17 year old is NOT going to be accepted on this website. Make him at least 18, and you are good to go.......Carney
 
How about this: the dude is young, dumb, and full of cum like most horny teens, and can't get his erection to go down enough to get the chastity device on. So the mom (either one of them) has to blow him (maybe several times) each time they put it on him, so it will fit.
 
It would probably me more plausible if the three were a lot older, but even then it wouldn't be very likely. That would also get rid of your underage problem.
 
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