Planning to add a few stories....

[SEVERUSMAX]

....from other sites, including the much delayed sequels to "The Training of Melissa", PTA, The Diversion, and "Zeus and Tara".

However, on another story, "Stockholm Syndrome", two questions: should I change the name, since there is already another story with that name on this site; and should I make the brother and sister fraternal twins or make them each 2 years older? Just wondering. I have to raise the brother's age from 16 to 18 to meet Lit's rules, but I was wondering if I should make them twins or keep them 2 years apart, with the sister older? It's a NC/reluctance story, not a BDSM one as such, but it has a lot of incest. And I want the young man to become more assertive in sequels, more of a head of the household. I just wanted some feedback on which would work better.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=339478&page=submissions

 

[Darkniciad]

If it were me, I wouldn't worry about changing the title unless it's in the same catagory as the existing story with the same title. If it will be in the same catagory, then you might consider changing the title.

I would probably ramp up both their ages so the one meets the criteria. You wrote them two years apart for a reason, and you should probably maintain that distance, unless you've thought of something interesting to do with the Fraternal Twins angle.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

If it were me, I wouldn't worry about changing the title unless it's in the same catagory as the existing story with the same title. If it will be in the same catagory, then you might consider changing the title.

I would probably ramp up both their ages so the one meets the criteria. You wrote them two years apart for a reason, and you should probably maintain that distance, unless you've thought of something interesting to do with the Fraternal Twins angle.

Thank you. I will consider what you said. You're right, I did make them too 2 years apart. I wanted her surprised at finding her brother to be so assertive and sexy. given that he seems like a typical high school nerd/bookworm. He finds himself, as does she. His mom will be stunned too.