Pilot for a possible series

[Guest]

I would really appreciate it if "ya'll" would give Thesandman some
feed back on my newest story: Secret Desires. (link provided).

What I'm curious about is this, and thus would appreciate feedback on if you think its worth doing a series on which I am thinking about calling "Sex in the Office"

Have I created in this story a situation that is of interest, number one, to see a continuation of and make it worthwhile to expand the adventures of the characters in this particular story? Or does it lack something I am missing as far as the "Office" environment that you would like to see included in possible future installments.


I'd seriously appreciate the feedback and input on this one from anyone caring to read this and letting me know what you think.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=23301

To sleep.......perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I am...........

 

[Natalie Nessus]

 

[cyndiesweet]

It was a very hot story. I think you could easily make a series out of it.