Picking up the gauntlet

Countess DeWinter

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OOC: Okay, Renegade, I was inspired after watching a movie. It's been a while since I was 18 *giggles* but I think I can remember the important stuff.



IC: I sighed as I looked in the mirror. Today I was 18. Not that it mattered. In two days, I was going to a party where my brother Nick's best friend, Eric, was supposed to be. He's 20 and soooooo hot. I've had a crush on him forever, but he treats me like a kid. I guess it hasn't helped that I've been a prank pulling tomboy most of my life; pulling many of my best pranks on him.
I was sitting and agonizing over my frumpy boyish clothes and frizzy hair and braces when my mom walked in.
"Ready to go, Tiff?" she asked.
I smiled broadly and for real. One, because this was the last time my teeth would be covered with braces and two becuase....damn! This was the last time my teeth would be covered with braces!!!!

"Mom," I asked, "do you suppose we could go to the mall and get me an outfit to wear to the party on Saturday?"

"I had some plans along those lines, sweetie," she replied cryptically.

************

The day was a whirlwind! First to the orthodontist to get my braces off. Then to the mall where we first went to get my hair styled. It was usually just limp or frizzy. The stylist gave me a cut and style that made me feel almost pretty. And he put something on it that made it just beautiful. Mom bought three bottles of it for me. We then went to the makeup counter and for over an hour I sat and learned how to put on makeup and mom bought all of that too. I'd never worn makeup before, but looking at myself in the mirror after, I just stared.
"I always knew there was a beautiful woman behind that rough exterior," mom whispered.

The rest of the day was spent buying new clothes. No more boy's jeans. No more baggy jerseys. By evening, we were exhausted, but I felt wonderful. Walking in the high heels was still difficult, but I got a pair so I could practice. When we got home, I saw Eric's car in the driveway behind
Nick's car and started to get nervous. I didn't want to tell Mom about my crush on him, so I just grabbed my bags and hurried up to my room.
I was wearing some of my new stuff, a tight knit top that showed off breasts I didn't know I had and a pair of girl's jeans. I hadn't expected Eric to notice me, he usually didn't.

But he could hardly not notice me when I ran smack into him in the hallway. I dropped several packages and said "excuse me" and started to pick them up.
Eric bent down immediately and helped me. "Sorry. I wasn't looking where I was going," he said. "I didn't know the Anderson's had company."
"Company?" I asked looking up finally. "It's me...Tiff."

"Tiffany?"
 
Eric

I was walking down the hallway when I ran into her. The girl replied " excuse me." I tried to help her pick the packages and said " Sorry, I wasn't looking where I was going." I didn't recognize her and said " I didn't know the Anderson's had company." She looked at me and said " company? It's me Tiff." I finally realized who she was " Tiffany?" My jaw must have dropped to the floor. This was Nick's sister. I couldn't believe it. The girl with braces and frizzy hair, always playing practical jokes on me. She was wearing a tight knit top with tight fitting blue jeans. I stammered " Sorry, Tiff. I didn't recognize you. You look terrific." I thought she looks like a girl, not the tom boy that played football with the guys. I wished I had noticed her sooner. I asked her " I am just going out for some supper. Would you like to join me?"
 
Tiffany

OOC: Since Ren decided he'd have to wait to do this one with me, I was afraid I'd have to watch it die! *kisses*

IC: "Sorry, Tiff. I didn't recognize you. You look terrific."
I blushed and stammered out a thank you. No matter what I looked like, I was always tongue-tied around Eric. He was the subject of all my little-girl fantasies. And, as I got older, he became the subject of my grown-up fantasies. Usually, I pictured his face when I was in the shower and let my hand go where it wanted.

I turned to go to my room with all my stuff when Eric asked if I'd like to go to dinner with him. I felt butterflies erupting in my stomach, but managed to speak clearly - somehow!
"I'd love to. Just let me go put these down in my room." I looked at him, standing there holding a couple of bags. "Can you carry that for me?"
 
Eric

OOC: Yes, it seems all the threads I am in are dying too.


She said " I'd love to, just let me go put these in my room." I was mesmerized. She looked at me and said " Can you carry that for me?" I realized that I was holding some her bags that she had brought home. I smiled back and said " Certainly, Tiff. Lead the way." I followed her down the hallway to her room. Her tight jeans left nothing to my imagination. I began to think about her, what she was like in bed. If she had even been to bed with another man. She opened the door to her room and I followed her inside.
 
Tiffany

I said a silent prayer, thankful that in the last couple of weeks I'd cleaned up my room. Mom helped me change over from a little girls's ruffles and stuffed animals to a more grown up look. The bed was a little messed up, sort of like I'd been laying on it, but everything else was pretty clean.

"I just need to hang up some of these dresses," I said, walking over to the closet. "I don't want them to get all wrinkled. Hang on just a sec." I gestured toward the bed and he sat the packages he was carrying down. I blushed when I realized that one of them was from Victoria's Secret.

"So, what's new?"

I tried to pretend that having him here, leaning against the foot of my BED, wasn't totally distracting me, but when I stepped around him to get to a hanger, I tripped when I stepped backwards. Eric caught me, but we both ended up falling onto the bed.
 
Eric

She went to her closet and said " I just need to hang up some of these dresses. I don't want them to get all wrinkled. Wait a sec." She gestured to me to set the packages down on her bed. I asked " So what's new?" as I placed the packages on her crumpled-up bed. I noticed a package from Victoria's Secret. I thought that it would be nice to see her wearing what was in the package. I was trying to peek inside, when she stepped backwards and tripped. I managed to catch her before she hit the floor, but her momentum carried us onto her bed. She was laying on top of me and I started to laugh. She had fallen into me butt first and I had grabbed her around the waist to hold her. As she lay on top of me, I held her down on my body and whispered into her ear " If you wanted to get me into bed, all you had to do was ask." At that point, I leaned upward and tongued her earlobe.

[Edited by mr spikey on 01-30-2001 at 10:53 PM]
 
Tiffany

I squealed as I fell, but more so because of the shock of being held by Eric, my ass pressed against his crotch, one of his hands on my ribcage just under my breast.

"If you wanted to get me into bed, all you had to do was ask."

I sucked in my breath when I felt his tongue on my earlobe. He made no effort to roll me off him. I had been pinned by Eric while wrestling. I had been tackled by him playing football. I'd been fouled by him playing basketball. All of those involved touching just as intimate as this, but none of them made me forget my name and sink back against him.

"In that case," I began, but didn't finish. I was completely excited and aroused, but I just didn't know what to do. I didn't want to admit that all of the sexual experiences I'd had so far were nothing more than one stolen kiss and a lot of solo work. But I didn't want him to stop...
Instead, I twisted my head around and caught his lips with mine.
 
Eric

I knew she could feel my cock on her ass cheeks through my pants. One hand held her just under her breast. She made no attempt to move it. She said " In that case..." But she didn't finish the sentence. She turned her head and kissed me. I kissed her back, my tongue penetrating her moist mouth. She eagerly accepted my tongue and we french-kissed. My hand began to move up to her breast, massaging the soft flesh. I rolled her hard nipple in my fingertips, gently pulling on it. I used my other hand to roll her face first on top of me. I continued to caress her breast with one hand and let the other knead her ass cheeks. I knew she could feel my hard-on now. I kissed the side of neck, long flowing kisses. I reached her earlobe again and began to suck on her lobe. I whipsered " God, I want you now Tiff. But we might get caught."
 
Tiffany

I could hardly believe I was kissing Eric. It was a dream come true, but he was right. We'd surely get caught. Letting my tongue tangle with his some more, I thought it over then leaned back and looked at him, naked lust in my eyes.

"Why don't we take a drive?" I asked in a husky whisper. "The weather's nice. I'll get a blanket..." I let my voice trail off as I leaned down to press my lips against his again.
 
Eric

She kissed me back, our tongues swirling with each other. She whispered in a huskey voice " Why don't we take a drive? The weather's nice. I'll take a blanket...." She kissed me again. I grabbed both of her ass cheeks and kissed her back. I said " That sounds great, Tiff." I patted her behind as she got up to straighten up and smooth her clothes. I had to wait a second, to let my hard-on subside. I got up and smiled at her and said " Well, I am finally ready."
 
Tiffany

I spent just a moment to straighten my clothes, but Eric seemed to be just sitting on the bed looking at me. I wondered why.

Finally he was ready and we headed to his car, hollering to Nick on the way out. I was so nervous that my knees were knocking, but I finally managed to get them under control. Eric drove to a secluded little spot south of town and we found a soft patch of grass to lay our blanket on where we couldn't be seen from the road.

I laid down on the blanket and let the sun warm my skin. When I opened my eyes, Eric was standing over me, looking down at me. I got a mischevious look in my eyes and patted the blanket beside me...
 
Eric

I hollored at Nick on our way out. I drove to a secluded spot out of town. She layed the blanket out on a grassy spot. She layed down and closed her eyes. I couldn't help but look down and admire how beautiful she looked. She opened her eyes and smiled at me. She patted the blanket next to her and I layed down. I turned to her and said " It will be a beautiful sunset." I leaned forward and kissed her. I put my hand on her hip and pulled her closer to me.
 
With his hand on my hip, I rolled closer to Eric until our hips were just barely touching. I wanted to be forward, but was suddenly shy as I looked up into his eyes. I imagine that in years to come I would recognize the look in his eyes and the feeling in the pit of my stomach as naked lust, but for now, I was too inexperienced to know. He just looked like the wanted to eat me up.

Letting my eyes flutter shut, I tilted my face toward his for a kiss. When it came, I could only sigh into him. His lips were so soft but so insistent. So engaging, in fact, that I didn't notice his hand sliding under my t-shirt.
 
Eric

I rolled on top of her as we kissed. My hand began to move up under her t-shirt to her soft flesh. I found her hard nipple and began to roll it in my fingertips. Our tongues met and we kissed passionately. I began to lift her t-shirt up to expose her breasts. I whispered in her ear " I want to lick and suck your nipples, Tiff."
 
Tiffany

"I want to lick and suck your nipples, Tiff."

My heart seemed to stop beating for a moment when Eric said that, then it started again, double time. His lips nuzzled against my ear, his whispered words sending shock waves of delight to every part of my body.

"Yes," I whispered, arching my back to bring my breasts closer to him. His lips traced a hot wet path down my neck to my shoulder to my breasts. His tongue swirled around one taut nipple before he caught it with his teeth. My hips bucked against him from the shock.
 
Eric

"Yes" she whispered in my ear. She arched her back and I began the long slow trace down her neck and shoulder. I swirled my tongue around her hard nipple and gently bit it with my teeth. I could feel her hips prees against me as I flitted my tongue over her breast. I traced a wet line to her other nipple, as my hand slid down to her jeans. I rubbed my hand between her legs, applying pressure with my middle finger. I kissed my way back to her neck and then her earlobe. My hand was still between her legs, as I whispered " Tiff, I want to kiss you down here" and I rubbed even harder between her legs.
 
Tiffany

My heart was pounding, I was so excited and frightened at the same time. I didn't want to confess to Eric that I was utterly inexperienced at all this. Yet, I did not want to stop. I wanted to feel his lips on my nipples. I wanted to feel his had inside my jeans...I wanted to feel his lips there, too.

All I could do was nod when he said he wanted to kiss me THERE. Not really knowing what to do, I let my hands explore his wide shoulders, sliding down and up under his t-shirt, letting my fingers find and tweak his nipples.
 
Eric

I kissed my way down her neck, pushing her knit shirt over her shoulders. Her pink nipples swelled with excitement. I kissed her neck, sucking on her collar bone. My left hand unbuttoned her jeans and my right massaged her breast. I kissed down to her hard nipple, sucking the nub into my mouth. I flitted my tongue up and down, bringing a moan from Tiff. My left hand had unzipped her jeans. I could feel her mound beneath her soaking panties. My mouth moved to her other nipple and began to lick and suck on it. I moved my left hand under her panties. I traced the outline of her wet lips. I then inserted my middle finger inside her, as she arched her back again. I began to kiss my way down her stomach, pausing to flick my tongue on her bellybutton. I kissed down further to her panties. I used my right hand to push them down and began to kiss her wet lips. I ran my tongue down one side and then the other. I finally put mymouth over her wet pussy, my tongue wetting her lips and flicking across her clit. I could fell her fingers on my chest, as she played with my nipples. I pivoted so that we were almost in a sixty-nine position. I could feel her hand moving down my chest to my pants, as I licked and sucked her pussy.
 
Tiffany

I thought maybe my skin was on fire.

No, it was just Eric's lips and tongue touching and teasing me. When he slipped his finger into my pussy...oh sweet heaven! I think I came right then.

Eric sort of slid around so that I was facing his belt buckle. I'd seen some porn flicks - okay, one porn flick - so I had a general idea of what he was wanting, but never having done it before made me a little nervous.

Gingerly, I undid his belt and his jeans. With a little wiggling and tugging and giggling (on my part) I had that part of him that most interested me in my hand.

It was really big. Seriously big. Actually, it was so big, it scared me a little. I wrapped my hand around it and confessed in a breathy whisper, "Eric, I've never done this before. Please tell me if I get it wrong, okay." It was hard to concentrate, let alone talk, while his mouth and fingers were teasing my pussy.

I gently stroked his cock, slowly up and down until he groaned a little, then I leaned forward and took the head of it in my mouth.
 
Eric

She undid my belt and unbuttoned my jeans. She grabbed my cock with her soft velvet hands and began to stroke it up and down. She whispered " Eric, I've never done this before. Please tell me if I get it wrong, okay." I groaned out loud, as she took the head in her mouth. I rolled both of us onto my back and spread her wet lips apart. I pointed my tongue and darted it in and out of her pussy. I could feel her mouth sliding up and down the shaft of my hard-on. I could only whisper out loud " Oh, god yes, Tiff." I continued to flick my tongue over her clit. I wetted my middle finger and inserted into her pussy. I inserted a second finger inside her. I pushed in and out with both fingers, as she moaned out loud.
 
Tiffany

Going completely on instinct, I lowered my mouth onto Eric's cock. He was so hard and a little precum was dripping out of the head of his cock. I tentatively licked it up, then closed my eyes and filled my mouth with his cock.

It didn't take long before I was really enjoying it. I loved the way he tasted and the way he felt against my tongue. After a few moments, though, it became difficult to concentrate with his tongue on my clit.
I felt the most delicious sensation building in my body that wasn't like the orgasms I'd given myself. This was different. Eric's mouth was driving me higher and higher until I raised my head and cried out with the blinding pleasure that burst around me.

It took a few moments for me to get my breathing under control, but when I did, I went back to sucking Eric's cock. I wanted to make him feel what he'd made me feel. I used my tongue and even my teeth a little to tease and taunt him. My fingers gently cupped and squeezed his balls, caressing him all over.
 
Eric

I could feel the sensation of my orgasm building inside me. I continued to lick and suck her wet pussy. She threw her head up and screamed out loud as her juices exploded into my mouth. She was sucking my cock again. I could only lay there and moan with ecstasy. The tingling in my hard cock grew with anticipation of my orgasm. I began to thrust my cock into her mouth, matching her rhythm of sliding up and down. I thrust one last time and hot cum gushed out of me. I pumped my cock in and out of her mouth, as she swallowed every drop. I spurted one final time and then lay there kissing her thighs and pussy. She rolled off me and we looked at each other. I smiled at her and said " Tiff, I want to fuck you."
 
Tiffany

My eyes widened in surprise when Eric's cum started to shoot into my mouth, but I managed to swallow it all.
When he lay, spent, kissing my thighs and pussy, he whispered "Tiff, I want to fuck you."

My whole body trembled. "Yes, Eric," I whispered back. I rolled off him and lay back on the blanket, letting the warm sun shine on my naked body. I looked at Eric, seeing him naked and hard for the first time. How could he still be hard?? I was awestruck.

"Fuck me," I said, beckoning him with my eyes and my arms.
 
Eric

She looked at me and said " Yes, Eric." She rolled on her back and watched me as I moved over her body. I reached down with one hand and spread her lips apart and used the other to guide the head of my rock hard cock towards the opening of her pussy. I moved the head up and down between her wet lips and then back and forth on her clit. Slowly I pushed the head inside her. She arched her back as I penetrated her. I pushed inside her as far as I could go. I began to pull out slowly, until just the head reamined inside her, and then pushed back in as deep as I could. i leaned down and began to kiss and suck her nipples, first one and then the other. I began a slow ryhthm of pushing in and pulling out of her. Her breathing became more rapid and she started to match my ryhthm by thrusting her hips to match my pushing in inside her. I whispered in her ear " Wrap your legs around me and help pull me inside you." My ryhthm increased and I began to feel my body building to its climax. She was groaning with pleasure, as I pumped my hard cock in and out of her. She threw her head back and screamed in ectasy as her body convulsed in oragsm. the sensation of her juices pouring out of her sent me over the edge and I thrust one last time inside her and shot hot cum inside her. I collapsed on top of her and we layed there holding each other.
 
Tiffany

Not even in my wildest dreams was fucking Eric this wonderful. I came over and over again as his cock pistoned in and out of my pussy. I screamed and thrashed my head on the blanket until I was hoarse.
Finally, Eric's cock seemed to swell even more and I felt his hot cum shooting inside me. I closed my eyes and squeezed my legs tighter around him until he fell onto me, breathing heavily.

"Oh god, Eric," I breathed in his ear. "Thank you for making me a woman." Very content, I lay in his arms and soaked up the sun.
 
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