Photographer Story

[matto123]

I was thinking of writing a story involving a photographer
Some story lines include

- Sam catching his sister Laura fucking his best friend mike so he's pissed and shows the vision to mikes mother Sara and to get revenge be fucks her on mikes bed and shows to vision to him.

- Matthew catches celeb Ashley Tisdale in a bad position and in order to get the pics back ashley fucks him all the time until his wife Katie finds out and they have a Hot sweaty threesome

- Mark is at the beach one day taking beach shots then realises that his old high school teacher is there in a bikini. Be takes many pics and goes and hide and jerk off over them. Claudia catches him and threatens to call the cops but realises how big he is so she takes him home and rides him all night long

What do people think I'm open to feedback or more ideas

Thanks

Matthew

 

[Sean Renaud]

I guess I've heard worse ideas in my time. Here's the problems as I see them.

1. I'm not really sure first they are called pictures or photographs, not visions. Unless he's a psychic. Moving right along why would his best friend's mom care her son was fucking you? She should have more questions for why you're taking pictures of your nude sister than taking revenge on her son. (Unless there is a really interesting relationship there)

2. Nobody knows who Ashley Tisdale is. That aside why would she have sex and why would the wife join in instead of being pissed?

3. I guess there are worse popcorn ideas than this last one you put out

 

[robertreams]

Matto, I concur with Sean Renaud, the story lines are thin at best. Where would be the punch to excite me? Why would I bother to read. You need stronger motivations for your characters.

I almost like the beach one, but I don't believe most adult women would take a man home merely because of the size of his dick How about she is excited because she has never seen a man jerk off AND his cock is big? It is her excitement, not his dick that brings it together.

 

[Sean Renaud]

The beach scenario is certainly the best of them. I'd probably cut the threatening to call the cops, and skip straight to her being flattered. This is porn and nobody is going to call you out on how she finds it hot that some guy is taking pictures of her on the beach, she is turned on by his size, skip the going home part though.

 

[matto123]

so i will go with the beach one

what if she had a massive crush on him at school and always dreamed of fucking him

 

[Nuff_Said]

I guess, it could be better, if Mike (photographer) is still at school, and catches his young and sexy school teacher in too skimpy bikiny. Or even topless - it is a beach half across the county, so she thought that she couldn't meet someone who knew her. When the school year begins, Mike asks her for extra classes (he's not so goot in her subject), and then asks her for a harder "incentive" (nudity/sex), blackmailing her with photos.
For more chapters, he might make some more photos (or video) and continue the blackmail, demanding that the teacher made Mike's favorite girl in school trade lesbian sex for marks, and films them both...

 

[matto123]

i like that idea

 

[sr71plt]

I agree that the beach scenario has the best potential. It could be a case where he's wrongly assumed the former teacher is a prude when she actually turns sexually aggressive on him. (Might even have made her dumpier when he took classes from her and she's shaped up since and it takes him a little while to realize who she is).

The first scenario is a little "ho hum, there's a million of those." Re the second, I think writing any celebrity stories--especially making them do something out of their known character--is lame and invasive.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

If you can imagine it people do it, especially females; so go for it.

 

[Horny_Aussie_72]

Matto, I have read your ideas, and the comments, and I agree with most of them. The biggest thing you are missing is the hook. You need bait to catch a fish, and in this pond there are plenty of fishes.

I also suggest you get yourself a good editor, they can make subtle suggestions that can greatly impact how your stories are received.

Hope this helps.