phcyce_b_muse?: Heart of Stne!

[Quesla]

Hello, Sphsyce_b? I'm sory, I may have confused your author name withSphinxE. I am LOVING! Heart of Stone I can't wait to find out what a hybridhuman/Gargoil child wil look like and how one is going to meld into the realism of modern England! Wanna know what Daren is if He ISN'T! human!? Can't wait to find out where Esme wil fit in when she's woken. Who will wake her and how? Keep up the GOOD! WORK! Love & Light: Quesla.

 

[psyche_b_mused]

Thanks!

Thanks for your Compliments and interest in Heart of Stone. I'm having a great deal of fun writing it and I think some of your questions will be answered in the next few chapters. Others........you may have to be a bit more patient.

Thank you for reading, I hope you continue to enjoy!
psyche b

 

[Quesla]

at the othr estate?

Thanks for your Compliments and interest in Heart of Stone. I'm having a great deal of fun writing it and I think some of your questions will be answered in the next few chapters. Others........you may have to be a bit more patient.

Thank you for reading, I hope you continue to enjoy!
psyche b

I am getting quite curious in the Twin's background! I want to know now, what's haunting the twin's suite!? I like Mary's strength as a firm no nonsens woman who can't be led around by the nos like some of the loving wives of the LW category on Lit' LW category! Love & Light: Quesla.

 

[psyche_b_mused]

I'm glad your're still enjoying! The twins are interesting...you will learn more about them in upcoming chapters...and more about the painting. I dislike female characters who seem to have no ideas of their own...and if they DO have an idea it comes from between their legs. Liking sex is great...being a bit submissive to the one you love is fine....but when one becomes too compliant...the story isn't really fun anymore.

I hope you keep enjoying!
psyche b

 

[JackLuis]

Wonderful Story

Heart of Stone is wonderful. Or full of wonder, I guess.

There are a few quibbles I have however; You often confuse me by mixing your dialog and descriptions of two different people.

Aidan says "I do not know. Is there more than one that might fit?" She showed him the three keys, and he agreed that the one she was going to try was the most likely candidate."
( not a good example but the best I could find in a hurry)

It makes it difficult to keep the characters straight. I think it would be better to seperate the Dialog and any tags and subsequent actions by another character.

You left out a few words in a couple of spots and I had to reread to figure out what you meant. In at least one case your structure left me cluless as to what you meant.

However it is a marvelous story and I eagerly await the next chapter(s) and hopefully the ending of story. Please don't let your fans wait too long.

I gave you a five on all chapters.

 

[psyche_b_mused]

Hi JackLuis *S*

Thank you so much for your comments and observations! Unfortunately i always know what i mean so seeing it from the reader's perspective is difficult for me. I muddle through mostly, but knowing the technical aspects of what others see is so helpful. The missing words...well...what can i say....i'm kind of a bad editor for myself.

Chapter 14 has been submitted for approval already so no chance of fixing that now. I will try and put some of your suggestions into practice for chapter 15 though.

Thank you for reading, for quibbling and for the fives!
psyche b

 

[darkfaer]

Heart Of Stone

Oh now I am interest in this story but I have few questions. Is it interracial? Is it threesome? What type of genre is the story? Where is the sitting? If it not too much trouble the link to the story.

 

[psyche_b_mused]

Hi darkfaer

If I had to classify this story, I would call it magical fantasy with an erotic flavor. It's set mostly on a rather large and very old estate somewhere in England in a slightly altered version of the present. It's not interracial (in the ordinary sense) and there are no threesomes. The main characters are a young woman and the gargoyle she wakes from a cursed sleep. The link follows.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=387287

If you choose to read it, I hope you enjoy!
psyche b

 

[JackLuis]

Hi JackLuis *S*

Thank you so much for your comments and observations! Unfortunately i always know what i mean so seeing it from the reader's perspective is difficult for me. I muddle through mostly, but knowing the technical aspects of what others see is so helpful. The missing words...well...what can i say....i'm kind of a bad editor for myself.

Chapter 14 has been submitted for approval already so no chance of fixing that now. I will try and put some of your suggestions into practice for chapter 15 though.

Thank you for reading, for quibbling and for the fives!
psyche b

Try changing the font and re-reading to spot the errors. It works for me and I self edit too. My storys have the same types of errors and my readers give me a little shit about it but seem to like the story enough to still give me good scores.

 

[psyche_b_mused]

I hadn't heard about changing the font before....but it sounds like a good idea! I'll try it. I've heard of reading it backwards, but that just tends to confuse me. *L*

 

[darkfaer]

thanks

Thank you I will read it but do wish it was interracial. *hint*black woman and gargoyla hey that sound fun.