pet peeve

[valntin69]

So far I have been very pleased with most stories I have read on literotica. I prefer the erotic adventure or erotic action type stories and those with the undead are even more of a plus.

However if you are going to write stories containing firearms do your research PLEASE. AR-15's are not machine guns and do not fire full automatic. Most modern firearms do not use clips they use magazines. Clips are what hold the cartridges until you manually feed them into a magazine. I am a bit of an expert on most modern and some ancient weapons if any authors want to use me as a reference or sounding board to ensure factuality in there stories please feel free to contact me with a pm here or an email to chad.wilson19766@ gmail. Com

 

[lovecraft68]

I agree with the advent of google any info you need is a click away. I recently used it for a couple of things on my latest story.

I'll add in....Please don't write fight scenes if you have no concept of how to describe them in a believable fashion.

I read one a month ago that reminded me of a very poorly written sex scene.

It was ....."wait, whose arm is where? Who just hit who? He did what? He jumped five feet in the air to deliver a spin kick

Keep it real folks....I suggest going out and getting your ass kicked as research

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

So far I have been very pleased with most stories I have read on literotica. I prefer the erotic adventure or erotic action type stories and those with the undead are even more of a plus.

However if you are going to write stories containing firearms do your research PLEASE. AR-15's are not machine guns and do not fire full automatic. Most modern firearms do not use clips they use magazines. Clips are what hold the cartridges until you manually feed them into a magazine. I am a bit of an expert on most modern and some ancient weapons if any authors want to use me as a reference or sounding board to ensure factuality in there stories please feel free to contact me with a pm here or an email to chad.wilson19766@ gmail. Com

Wrong.

Clips are internal ammo magazines, 'magazines' are external to the weapon. A caisson, for example, is a magazine. Many holsters are magazines.

 

[valntin69]

Wrong.

Clips are internal ammo magazines, 'magazines' are external to the weapon. A caisson, for example, is a magazine. Many holsters are magazines.

http://www.minutemanreview.com/2008/09/clip-vs-magazine-lesson-in-firearm.html?m=1

I like the way he describes it a magazine feeds the weapon a clip feeds the magazine

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I agree with the advent of google any info you need is a click away. I recently used it for a couple of things on my latest story.

I'll add in....Please don't write fight scenes if you have no concept of how to describe them in a believable fashion.

I read one a month ago that reminded me of a very poorly written sex scene.

It was ....."wait, whose arm is where? Who just hit who? He did what? He jumped five feet in the air to deliver a spin kick

Keep it real folks....I suggest going out and getting your ass kicked as research

I'll never forget when Gentle Ben sucker punched our Korean martial arts instructor. The MA instructor was bouncing about like a strange ballerina making weird noises when Ben put his beer mug atop the bar and knocked the MA guy out. Ben called the MAs performance a USO SHOW.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

http://www.minutemanreview.com/2008/09/clip-vs-magazine-lesson-in-firearm.html?m=1

I like the way he describes it a magazine feeds the weapon a clip feeds the magazine

Do your homework Sparky.

 

[Sugareee]

Ass holes and control freaks

 

[valntin69]

Do your homework Sparky.

I am not going to continue please you by arguing with ignorance but will inform you that you are infact a douche

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I am not going to continue please you by arguing with ignorance but will inform you that you are infact a douche

I'm a douche, and I'm right. Every fort and ship has a magazine. Next time you and your life partner visit a fort ask to see its magazine.

Here's a clue:

http://mitchellsonthetrail.blogspot.com/2012/06/fort-pulaski-cockspur-island-lighthouse.html

 

[valntin69]

I'm a douche, and I'm right. Every fort and ship has a magazine. Next time you and your life partner visit a fort ask to see its magazine.

Here's a clue:

http://mitchellsonthetrail.blogspot.com/2012/06/fort-pulaski-cockspur-island-lighthouse.html

Okay dumbshit we are talking small arms. Big difference between a 9mm pistol and a freaking battleship.

 

[TxRad]

Okay dumbshit we are talking small arms. Big difference between a 9mm pistol and a freaking battleship.

Ignore JBJ, he's our own private resident troll. Not that we want a resident troll but the AH has no moderator so we're stuck with him. He's been bounced off several forums already and he's scared to death of the GB. Every time he wanders over there, they hand him his balls.

Ignore is your friend in several cases and he's one of them.

 

[valntin69]

Yep already ignored. Can't deal with people who choose to be ignorant and rude. Read some of his other posts and decided he would be ignored till the apocolypse. Then when he needs information from someone who truly is educated and informed I might take him off the ignore list

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Ignore JBJ, he's our own private resident troll. Not that we want a resident troll but the AH has no moderator so we're stuck with him. He's been bounced off several forums already and he's scared to death of the GB. Every time he wanders over there, they hand him his balls.

Ignore is your friend in several cases and he's one of them.

I AM THE GB. You'd drown in all the roses I got from LAUREL. I'm a Rose Parade all by myself.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Yep already ignored. Can't deal with people who choose to be ignorant and rude. Read some of his other posts and decided he would be ignored till the apocolypse. Then when he needs information from someone who truly is educated and informed I might take him off the ignore list

Youre a poser.

 

[TxRad]

Youre a poser.

So are you but in a different way.

 

[StrangeLife]

Well, technically the M16 is an AR-15 - the army just like to rename stuff. Thanks to our paranoid legislators the AR-15s you buy in your local store will not fire full auto and cannot be easily converted, but that doesn't mean that they don't exist. Just that they are hard to get. You can get a Chinese knock-off AK-47 for a fraction of the price if you just need it for btb.

People use the words "clip" and "mag" frivolously so it is actually not out of character for a vengeful husband to do the same. I get more annoyed when I see a pistol called a revolver or vice versa...

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Well, technically the M16 is an AR-15 - the army just like to rename stuff. Thanks to our paranoid legislators the AR-15s you buy in your local store will not fire full auto and cannot be easily converted, but that doesn't mean that they don't exist. Just that they are hard to get. You can get a Chinese knock-off AK-47 for a fraction of the price if you just need it for btb.

People use the words "clip" and "mag" frivolously so it is actually not out of character for a vengeful husband to do the same. I get more annoyed when I see a pistol called a revolver or vice versa...

Anything used for ammo storage is a magazine...holster, clip, belt, can, bunker etc.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

So are you but in a different way.

But I look better doing it. No nasty ass mullets hid beneath cowboy hats.

 

[valntin69]

Well, technically the M16 is an AR-15 - the army just like to rename stuff. Thanks to our paranoid legislators the AR-15s you buy in your local store will not fire full auto and cannot be easily converted, but that doesn't mean that they don't exist. Just that they are hard to get. You can get a Chinese knock-off AK-47 for a fraction of the price if you just need it for btb.

People use the words "clip" and "mag" frivolously so it is actually not out of character for a vengeful husband to do the same. I get more annoyed when I see a pistol called a revolver or vice versa...

Technically you are correct theoriginal ar built by armalite is the same as an m16a1 whichwould fire on full auto however they realizedduringvietnamthat becauseofitsful auto capability it wasted way to much ammo and they removed the full auto feature and replaced it with three round burst. Withthree roundburst the weapon is much easier to control so shots are more accurate and less ammo is wasted. However what we know as an are 15 will only fire I semi auto with purity being modified.

Even the cheap knock off AK 's are seized only unless you have a class three firearms license or you find one illegally on the black market.

And I agree with the pistol revolver nomenclature screw up as well.

As I stated before I am a bit of a firearms expertas I have owned atleast one everyday of my life since I was old enough to hold one plus 10 years of military fur of which was spent as an armorer building and repairing firearms.
I dont say this to brag or pat myself on the back I just want to clarify my experience and again offer my services to any authors who need references or editing whendealing with modern weapons

 

[StrangeLife]

As I stated before I am a bit of a firearms expertas I have owned atleast one everyday of my life since I was old enough to hold one plus 10 years of military fur of which was spent as an armorer building and repairing firearms.
I dont say this to brag or pat myself on the back I just want to clarify my experience and again offer my services to any authors who need references or editing whendealing with modern weapons

If you get the time you might want to consider authoring an essay on weapons for use in stories. I don't think we have that in the writers resource, and it could come in handy for btb authors...

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Technically you are correct theoriginal ar built by armalite is the same as an m16a1 whichwould fire on full auto however they realizedduringvietnamthat becauseofitsful auto capability it wasted way to much ammo and they removed the full auto feature and replaced it with three round burst. Withthree roundburst the weapon is much easier to control so shots are more accurate and less ammo is wasted. However what we know as an are 15 will only fire I semi auto with purity being modified.

Even the cheap knock off AK 's are seized only unless you have a class three firearms license or you find one illegally on the black market.

And I agree with the pistol revolver nomenclature screw up as well.

As I stated before I am a bit of a firearms expertas I have owned atleast one everyday of my life since I was old enough to hold one plus 10 years of military fur of which was spent as an armorer building and repairing firearms.
I dont say this to brag or pat myself on the back I just want to clarify my experience and again offer my services to any authors who need references or editing whendealing with modern weapons

Not while I was in Vietnam. The military discouraged auto as it gave the enemy the idea they were dealing with an M60, but they left it as is. While I was there the M16 was a colossal piece of shit. Asshats love it and I roll my eyes.

 

[Handley_Page]

The snag is that it ain't merely firearms that should be researched by an author.
Every little detail of these "side issues" should (huh!) should be at least moderately accurate.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

The snag is that it ain't merely firearms that should be researched by an author.
Every little detail of these "side issues" should (huh!) should be at least moderately accurate.

When I evaluated Vietnam PTSD I usta test them with jargon common to Vietnam Vets; almost all of the contestants failed. Very few knew what a FREEDOM BIRD or ROUND EYE or DINKY DAU was. Another poser published a bull shit memoir of the war and threatened to sue me when I exposed him. In 1968 Florida had 2 induction centers: Jacksonville and Coral Gables NOT Clearwater. Your recruiter gave you a bus ticket and a hotel coupon, he didn't put you on an air plane or let you stay where you wanted. The plane ride was from the induction center to the airport near the boot camp. Some rode trains or buses.

 

[sr71plt]

True it's good to get the details right, but the anal retentive on small details in a story come prepared to miss what's important in most stories.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Oh! Nothing says BULL SHIT like fucked details.