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Destiny of Desire
Kelsea was a hot vivacious brunette with the cutest face. Her body was beautiful, her ample breast and perfect tight round ass were a thing of magnificence. She was only in her mid twenties but had already birthed two children, not that you could tell. I had known her for many years but had only recently began to reconnect with her.
She was unhappily married as most are these days, humans just aren’t designed for monogamy. They are deceived by the status quo that they must reserve themselves to a life of monogamy to fit into society. But not Kelsea, she swore to herself that her happiness was worth something damnit and she would make herself happy. That’s when she contacted me. We had never dated or had an intimate relationship but there had always been a lot of sexual tension. It started off idle conversation just get to know each other stuff, but it wasn’t long though before topics changed to sex and the lack there of.
Now I am not usually one to take advantage of a situation, but she was a goddess to me and I had always wanted her. So I went with it. She tried to play coy at first pretending that she didn’t want to cheat. But I knew she wanted it, no, needed it badly. As topics of sex came up again I probed a little deeper. That’s when the flood gates opened and we tested the waters back and forth. She told me exactly what she liked, what she hadn’t done and what she secretly desired. She knew she could trust me because I already told her I would never want to harm her relationship with her husband. I meant it too I would never want the bad karma.
This went on for a few months. But then her latest email puzzled me though. She said that she didn’t want to talk to me anymore that she couldn’t handle it. She said that she really wanted it and that was the problem. She said explicitly do not contact her anymore. And right as I was about to close the tab on my browser I noticed she had left a link to a site. I clicked on it and that’s when I knew.
I woke up the next day in a daze. The link left no doubt what she wanted from me and I wasn’t going to let her down. I went for a morning run and then ate breakfast and showered. Then I knew I had to get prepared for the night ahead of me. I went to the store to pick up the necessary items. The clerk at the counter gave me a crazy look as I piled my buggies contents on the moving belt.
“Props for an indy film we are filming around here,” I said to break the tension.
“I was wondering,” he replied.
“You wouldn’t happen to know any other college kids wanting to be extras, would you?”
“Hell yeah I do!” he said with enthusiasm.
“Write your number on the back of the receipt and I will call you.” I said knowing full well I would never call this kid.
I exited the store and went to run a few more errands in preparation. By the end of the day my pulse began to race as the hour drew closer. I would do what she asked of me because she was my goddess. I had to watch a few videos to prepare me for what she asked. I knew nothing of it so I had to bone up. When I felt I had sufficiently grasped what I was watching I grabbed everything and loaded up.
It was time now and my heart never raced so fast. I waited for what seemed like an eternity, for her to emerge from the store she worked at. She knew I would know what time she got off work and that she would be closing alone again because they were shorthanded. I looked around and made sure no one was around it was dark and I knew no one would see it was me. I crept in the shadows along the wall and waited for her to lock the door and step down from the sidewalk. Before she knew what was happening I was behind her and I pulled her close and placed the already torn piece of duck tape across her mouth.
I whispered in her ear, “It would be best if you didn’t struggle.”
She flinched in my arms and I could tell that she now knew what was happening. She began to scream through the duct tape and broke her arms loose. I quickly grabbed them back and slapped the handcuffs on her wrist. I almost bought the zip tie handcuffs but decided best not to leave any marks.
“I was hoping not to have to do this.”
I dragged her by her hair back around the corner to the flat panel van I rented that afternoon and threw her in the side door I had left open.
“Now get in here and shut up,” I sternly said. “I don’t want to have to hurt you.”
I got in the van and drove off. I drove to a secluded place by the lake I knew no one would find us. I parked and put some nine inch nails on the radio and walked around the side of the van and opened the door. I was surprised by a swift kick to the gut.
“You should not have been a naughty girl. Now you will have to be punished.” I said still writhing in pain from the kick.
I jumped on top of her as she lay on her side and regained control of the situation. I pulled her up to her knees and uncuffed her from behind and as I pulled her arms back around she made another attempt to get free. I pressed her up against the wall of the van and snapped the one cuff to the straps along the side of the wall. I grabbed my other set of cuffs from my back pocket and snapped it into place still holding my body firmly against hers. Her breast felt so good against my chest. I thought to myself, My goddess now our fun really began.
I as gently as I could removed the duct tape from her mouth after I was sure she wasn’t going to scream any more.
I ripped her clothes off. She wasn’t even wearing panties. Her juices were flowing like a river. I reached my hand down to her moist pussy and stuffed two fingers inside her as she moaned gently. I pulled my fingers out and put them to her lips and she took them into her mouth and licked them clean.
“I knew this is what you wanted. I know you. Now I am going to fuck your brains out whether you want to or not. So fight as much as you want.”
I couldn’t wait any more I had to taste her. I slowly licked around her thighs and her stomach teasing her gently with promise of my tongue delving into her wet juicy pussy. As I ran my tongue ever so softly across her clit she moaned loudly. That small taste of her clit sent me into a fit and I couldn’t wait any longer I stuck my tongue deep into her as I stroked her clit slightly. She moaned loudly and started telling me to eat her pussy.
“I knew you wanted this you dirty slut.” I said “And you taste so fucking good.”
I began to lick her clit more vigorously now and she started to buck. I replaced my tongue with two fingers again and worked them slowly to her G-Spot. She really bucks once I hit it and she moaned even louder. I reached into my bag and produced a black dildo I had bought that day and slid it inside her now she yelled. I angled the dildo right against her G-Spot to keep her going still vigorously working her clit.
She began to scream as she felt wave after wave flood her entire body her legs shaking as she released an orgasm I am sure she had never felt before.
“Ooooooohhhhhhh mmmmmmyyyyyy Gooooodddddd!!!!!” She screamed.
I removed the dildo as her juices just flowed into my mouth and I was in heaven. She finally finished after about five minutes of aftershocks. I climbed up and kissed her on her lips and let her taste all of her juices on my tongue.
“I want you to fuck me now Max.” she moaned in my ear.
As I aimed to please I pulled her to her knees again and turned her around as her arms crossed from the cuffs. She now sat ass in the air facing the van wall. I pulled down my pants to find the hardest cock that ever existed. I mean we are talking gibralter here. I pulled up behind her and thrust my cock in her wet awaiting hole as deep as I could. She winced and I started to slide in and out of her gliding soft like silk. I reached around and pinched her nipples gently tugging at them. I slid my hand down to her clit and began to rub it for her as her hands were bound. I pulled her hair back as I thrust deeper and deeper.
I began to feel my load building. I knew I wouldn’t be able to hold it back much longer so I pulled out and stuffed the dildo back into her soaking wet pussy. I uncuffed one of her hands and told her to hold the dildo in place. I grabbed the lube out of the bag and generously applied some to her ass. My cock needed no lube as it was coated in layers of her female juices. I pulled back up to her and slowly stuck the head of my cock into her awaiting asshole as she worked the dildo in her pussy. Her ass was so tight it was unbelievable. After we both worked her holes for a while I could feel my nut building again. I could no longer hold it back I was going to drown this girl in cum. I pulled my dick and the dildo out and jerked her around facing me.
“Oh my God I am gonna blow. Yeeeeeaaaaaaahhhhhh Baaaaabbbbyyyyy!!!!!!” I screamed as I unloaded spurt after spurt of cum all over her face and down her throat. She loved every minute of it as she gobbled it up like a good girl.
Just as I had stopped cumming after what seemed like forever. The doors suddenly whipped open and I heard.
“Freeze don’t move! Oh SHIT HE’S GOT A GUN!”
And that is the moment time froze and I could feel every tiny millisecond go by as I felt the bullet enter my back. I knew that I was dead. But there was nothing I could do. I felt hopelessness built with helplessness. As I lay hunched over in the back of that van my life flashed before my eyes as they always say it does. The black dildo I was holding in my hand lay beside me as the police finally notice that it was not a gun. Then I was there but I wasn’t. I tried to interact with people but nothing. No one ever knew I was there. So I guess I am a ghost now I thought to myself.
Funny enough apparently Kelsea’s husband had been watching her as of late. He saw me abduct her and called the police as he followed me out to the lake. I had been so excited I hadn’t noticed that I had been followed. But I felt no discourse towards him, I would have done the same thing. I had no ill feelings towards her or the police either. I was destined to be a ghost with no one to haunt. So for some odd reason I became attached to the fucking rental van. It had been the place I had been with my goddess and it was where I stayed.
Of course as you might think haunting a rental van didn’t go very well. After accidently scaring the first drivers they ran into the back of a log truck and were all killed.
That was over a hundred years ago. Here I sit to this day attached to this van in a salvage yard.
The moral to this story is…always buy the pink dildo! 
 
The only thing I can say is indent and double space so it's easier to read!!
 
I hope you're looking for feedback and critique, 'cuz if not, this was the wrong place to post. There isn't just a magical button that the mods use to turn forum posts into hosted stories, you know; there's an actual submission process.

But anyway. The major points are as follows:

The clerk at the counter gave me a crazy look as I piled my buggies contents on the moving belt.
First off: "buggy's". Second off, at least 45% of your readers (the American demographic) used the term "shopping cart" to describe the object you're referring to... And don't use (maybe have never used) the term "buggy". So you might want to consider using a different word--or at least putting "shopping" on the front of it to aid in comprehension. The last thing you want is to snap The Reader out of the story by using a term she doesn't recognize.

“Props for an indy film we are filming around here,” I said to break the tension.
"Indie", actually. "Indy" refers to either a 500-lap automobile race or an adventure archaeologist.

Before she knew what was happening I was behind her and I pulled her close and placed the already torn piece of duck tape across her mouth.
It's "duct tape". Funnily enough, you got it right later in the story.

I parked and put some nine inch nails on the radio
Capitalize the band name, please, or people are going to think you left some actual nine-inch-long metal nails on your dashboard for some reason.

Her breast felt so good against my chest.
Where'd the other one go? Most women have two. Either she's one of those rare uni-breasted types, or she's had a total mastectomy due to breast cancer, or The Writer (ie. you) forgot an "s" somewhere. Please clarify.

I pulled down my pants to find the hardest cock that ever existed. I mean we are talking gibralter here.
1) "Gibraltar", two A's.
2) Sorry, but this made me amused instead of horny.

I had been so excited I hadn’t noticed that I had been followed. But I felt no discourse towards him, I would have done the same thing.
"Discourse" means "dialogue" or some other sort of verbal interaction. I am fairly sure it's not the word you're looking for.

And finally, the doozy:
She was unhappily married as most are these days, humans just aren’t designed for monogamy. They are deceived by the status quo that they must reserve themselves to a life of monogamy to fit into society.
Okay. Everyone's entitled to their own opinions. But demanding that people buy into them, by stating them as fact, is not going to win you readers. In fact, it will likely turn them away. Even worse, this particular opinion is quite off-putting. Regardless of whether humans are designed for monogamy or not, the larger share of humans either believe they are designed for monogamy, or (in some cases, such as myself) acknowledge that they are not but choose it anyhow, to promote stability in their families and in society at large. As such, these two inflammatory sentences run the risk of turning away a significant percentage of the Literotica readership.

(Obviously, you may not care, since Kelsea is the only person who really needs to read this. But if so, why did you bother posting it here? Our opinions are irrelevant. :confused:)

And yes, please think about using double Returns when writing for an online venue. It makes the story much easier to parse.
 
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