Perils of Pauline

[oggbashan]

The cliff hanger approach works

I posted a story with a tease ending and I have had seven items of feedback in 24 hours. That is more than I have ever had on one of my stories. They want more ...

The link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=88374]Hypothermia[

I must try that again. But now I have to write the rest of Hypothermia and they are indoors with no sign of marmots. Sigh.

Og

 

[pop_54]

Ha

It appears the marmot's are in Canada at the moment friend.

Well done on the story, nice one.

 

[jfinn]

Excellent story Og, you deserve all the great feedback and more.

Jayne

 

[oggbashan]

Now I'm blushing.

I intended the story foi the Earth Day contest but perhaps you can only have one and I'd already posted Damp Start.

I don't like getting cold and wet so I spent most of my teens and early twenties doing just that.

Og

 

[hiddenself]

It was a very good story and motivated me to read a couple of your other ones -- your poems too. Re sequel to Hypothermia, there doesn't REALLY need to be one. The story can definitely stand on its own. But if there's a continuation already pushing to come out, then by all means bring it on...
hs