Penny's Tale...At last I finished it!!!

[Fantasymaster]

Penny's Tale Chapters 3-4 concludes the story. When I first wrote Penny's Tale I had lots of positive feedback, including many from ladies which surprised me. Nearly all asked me to complete it, but for several reasons it took until now to do that. If any of you were amongst those who contacted me, I would love to hear from you again, and even if you weren't, I would still like to hear your opinion, especially comparing the two parts. Enjoy!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58493


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=191510

 

[msboy8]

Penny's Tale Chapters 3-4 concludes the story. When I first wrote Penny's Tale I had lots of positive feedback, including many from ladies which surprised me. Nearly all asked me to complete it, but for several reasons it took until now to do that. If any of you were amongst those who contacted me, I would love to hear from you again, and even if you weren't, I would still like to hear your opinion, especially comparing the two parts. Enjoy!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58493


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=191510

I R.V.C.ed on both parts of your story. Good job. Your story would be better if it had included her thoughts and reactions that she had. Keep Writing.