Peeping Jerry

lexium

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I would like ideas about this story. Here is an introduction:

After a nice hot shower, Kathy stands in front her bathroom mirror blow drying her hair. Her husband has just left for work after having his morning fuck. The morning sex wasn’t satisfying to her, but it was what her husband liked before getting off to a long day at work. She wished that he had more time in the mornings, so she wouldn’t be left feeling horny.

Out of the corner of her eye, she thought she was movement at the bathroom window. She looked out the window seeing the trees in her back yard blowing in the wind. She removed her towel and began moistening her skin with lotion. The sensation made her feel even hornier.

She went back into her bedroom and moved the cum stained sheets made by the quick fuck from her husband. She was happy that her husband still found her sexually attractive. As she began putting on the fresh sheets, she noticed movement at her bedroom window. A bit straddle, she looked at the reflection of the window in her dresser mirror. She was going crazy, there was someone peeping through her window.

She was completely naked and exposed. Being on display use to excite her when she knew someone was watching, but this was scary. She was determined not to let her fear get the best of her. She wanted to know exactly who it was spying on her.

She gathered her nerves and moved closer to the window. She figured that who ever was out there had already seen everything, because her curtains were open. She slowly turned towards the window and looked out. She looked down and show her next door neighbor crotched down under her window trying to hide.

Her fear was lifted, but she had to put a stop to this. Her neighbor Jerry was married and she considered his wife a friend, even though they didn’t talk much. She put on her housecoat and went to confront him.

When she came around the back of her house, Jerry was looking back through the window obviously thinking that she was still inside.

“Jerry,” Kathy called to him in a hushed voice and motioning him towards her. “Come inside, now!”

Jerry was stunned. He knew he had been busted and there was no where he could hide. Reluctantly, he moved towards her.

“Hurry up! Before someone else catches you!” she demanded.

Kathy lead the way to her back door and held it open for her neighbor. Jerry entered the kitchen holding his head down. He had know idea what she was going to do. Would she tell his wife? He didn’t know.

“What the hell are you doing peeping through my window? What would Doris think if she saw you? Are you out of your mind?” she questioned him without an opportunity for him to respond.

Any ideas….


Thanks
 
I like it so far. You can take it many ways. I don't think they should have sex right away. Begin with a ritual, shegets sexier stuff, silently models for him as he peeps. Then, one day, she invites him back in....eventually, Jerry's son finds out, gets involved. then Doris. then finally hubby.
 
Sirhugs

Thanks, that sounds like a good scenario.

Do you have any ideas about what Jerry could say in his defense. He thinks she's incredibly sexy, and seeing her naked is the closest he has come to having sex in months. His wife have become uninterested in sex. He shows his petiful state to her in hopes that she will forgive in intrusion.

His hard on thrusted in front of her in his pants, reminds her just how horny she is.

I would like to move the two into a rutine of morning sex after her husband leaves for work.

Mary-Anne could try to find out why Jerry's wife has turned against sex, and attempt to help her love sex again.

Jerry is to con Mary-Anne into feeling sorry for him and to help him out in his situation.

Maybe during the conversation with Mary-Anne in the kitchen he could start rubbing his crotch, stating that he needs to cum or he would go mad. His rubbing of his cock in front of her is turning her on and increasing her horniness.

The conversation that leads up her agreeing to open her rob, so he could jerk off while he is looking at her. The would lead to him removing his cock from his pants, because it is uncomfortable and it would make it easier for him to jerk himself off. Next, he gets closer for a better look, him putting the head of his cock closer and closer until the head of his cock is touching her hungry pussy.

She would be to turned on, not to give in and ask him to put it in her. Something along these lines.
 
" Yes, I'm out off my mind with lust for you."

MA:"Why, Dopris is a very hot sexy wife."

J: " But she's so busy with kids, her job, the house, she has no time for me. So I watch you. are you angry?"

MA laaughs. "No, but I won't have sex with you. I am faithful to hubby. I don't mind if you watch. just be careful so no one finds out. But, first, I want to see you cum for me."
 
sirhugs said:
" Yes, I'm out off my mind with lust for you."

MA:"Why, Dopris is a very hot sexy wife."

J: " But she's so busy with kids, her job, the house, she has no time for me. So I watch you. are you angry?"

MA laaughs. "No, but I won't have sex with you. I am faithful to hubby. I don't mind if you watch. just be careful so no one finds out. But, first, I want to see you cum for me."

I know that the action should begin quickly and I like that he is able to explain why he is not fucking his sexy wife. I would forget about kids, her career would be enough to go with what you wrote. I think beginning with the apology first and then the explaination. That way she could ask him a question like "What's wrong with Doris? She is very sexy."

Thanks for helping me out with the dialog. Sometimes, I get brain lock. Keep it coming.

I think he needs to convenience her that she's the only one that can help him out. She knows his wife and she cares about the both of them. Maybe the "just this one time" quote will work. What do you think?
 
I think they should gradually build up to sex. first, peeping outside, then in room, then masturbating for her, then she for him....build anticipation in the story.
 
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