Peeking

[deaflepperd]

I'd like a story that mimics something that happened to me when I was about 12 or 13.
I was coming home from a friend's house after dark one summer night and as I took a shortcut between 2 houses I looked in the window to see this girl undressing. She had those mini blinds but they weren't closed all the way and being dark outside there was no way she could see me.
She was probably 15 or 16, and had GREAT titties!!! She undressed for bed or shower, then sat on the bed and watched the end of her TV program. I stood outside her window rubbing the front of my sweat pants, hard as a rock. my heart pounding because I was afraid I'd get caught. I pulled it out long enough to cum, then ran home.
It was one of the most erotic things I've ever experienced.

 

[LustiRusti]

Lit has this thing about stories with characters under 18. They don't allow them.

So, that being said, this story could *not* be about you at 13ish jacking off to a high school girl outside her bedroom window. You'd have to *be* 18, or she would, or both. (However you wanted the age differences, etc.)

But, do you want the whole story to be about a guy standing outside of a woman's bedroom, watching her naked while all she does is watch TV? I'm sorry to say, but that doesn't sound too exciting to me.

Perhaps he could be a "long time" peeping tom who has seen several things happen over weeks, months, years...?


~Kenzie

 

[LorriLove]

hiya

that's the problem with the 18 rule, to a 13 yr old watching a female half naked in her house is exciting enough to cause orgasm.

make them 18 and 20 and it's crap.

there have to be rules but they do fuck a good innocent childlike story up.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: hiya

that's the problem with the 18 rule, to a 13 yr old watching a female half naked in her house is exciting enough to cause orgasm.

make them 18 and 20 and it's crap.

there have to be rules but they do fuck a good innocent childlike story up.

there ARE innocent 18 yr olds still

especially if he just came back from 5 years living in Saudi where Dad worked the pipeline....

 

[LustiRusti]

that's the problem with the 18 rule, to a 13 yr old watching a female half naked in her house is exciting enough to cause orgasm.

make them 18 and 20 and it's crap.

there have to be rules but they do fuck a good innocent childlike story up.

So, adults aren't allowed to be voyeurs? An adult can't enjoy being a peeping tom? Why does it "have to" be a child to be "good"?

 

[LorriLove]

hmm

it doesn't have to be a child don't try to be clever miss quoting me.

the original request was for a kids story, it has been pointed out that this isn't possible, so a revision may be needed.

it would take a miracle to make a convincing story of an adult watching a half naked woman watching telly exciting and stretch to more than one page though.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: Re: hiya

there ARE innocent 18 yr olds still

especially if he just came back from 5 years living in Saudi where Dad worked the pipeline....

I know this one girl: When she was 15, she had some lesbian experiences including a dildo. She did some blowjobs when she was 18. But her first real sex with a guy came at the age of 27 (but therefore she also tried anal at the same night - but it hurt, she said)

So, an innocent 18 year old girl is very well possible.

 

[LustiRusti]

Lorri,

I wasn't the only one who quoted you. Sirhugs did as well. Often times it makes posting easier when you quote the person you are replying to. Sorry if I offended you by doing this.

By the way, just a reminder, I'm the one who mentioned reading about an adult watching another adult watching TV naked would be boring. Then again, I can imagine being a child watching a teen watching TV naked would be boring. This story needs a lot added if it's going to be good.

 

[deaflepperd]

Thanks for the advice and input. It is appreciated.
I never realized about rule breaking. I hope I did not come across as a pedophile, as I absolutely am not. But being an innocent little kid at the time, it sure was a big deal in my book. Maybe I can add a few things, and change the ages. I'll see what I can do.

Thanks again for all of your input.

Dave

 

[LustiRusti]

Dave,

Of course you're not a pedophile! You didn't say you wanted a story specifically about children doing specific things. You were reliving your own adolescence and sharing your feelings as a pubescent teenager experiencing one of life's "firsts".

But, yes, unfortunately some things will have to be changed for Lit's rules. I don't see why the story still couldn't be good with "legal adults" in it, though. Like Sirhugs said, there still are innocent 18 year olds. (I wasn't a whore at 18 and had only been with one guy, a long term HS boyfriend!)

But, as for the story's apeal... I don't think it should be about a peeping tom watching a young woman watching TV naked! Perhaps she's watching a porno she stole from dad's stash, or she's watching "soft core" on cable (gotta love SKINemax! lol) and starts rubbing on herself.

Or perhaps the peeping tom has been watching the woman over the course of weeks, months, even years and while he watches her he fantasizes about being with her. Ya know, maybe they're close to the same age and are therefore peers and go to the same school. Perhaps she's popular and snotty and he's a bit more of a quite loner so that's why he fantasizes about her?

And, if you don't mind the "non consent" theme, he could break into her room one night and simply take her. It could even be "revenge", at least in his own mind, if he was in fact the snubbed loner in school.

There's many possibilities for this story!!


~Kenzie

 

[LorriLove]

oops

Lorri,

I wasn't the only one who quoted you. Sirhugs did as well. Often times it makes posting easier when you quote the person you are replying to. Sorry if I offended you by doing this.

By the way, just a reminder, I'm the one who mentioned reading about an adult watching another adult watching TV naked would be boring. Then again, I can imagine being a child watching a teen watching TV naked would be boring. This story needs a lot added if it's going to be good.

take no notice dear, wrong week