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Okay, I've reviewed several stories so far and most have been higher on the literary quality than they were on the 'H' factor.
This story definitely puts the 'H' in hot. There isn't a ton of story here, just a good sexual romp. However, it does go beyond the typical stories that are nothing more that sex scene descriptions that populate this site.
This story contains actual dialog and thoughtful characters. Peachy also does a good job of setting the atmosphere and describing the sex. You get a good idea of what sort of relationship the two characters have.
There is one negative I found with the story. It is second person. Now, it is better than most second person stories, but I think it would have been better if told from first person.
If you like stories about a man and a woman playing with toys, especially those where the man is on the receiving end, then you will probably like this story. Whew, I sure did.
Your New Toys by Peachy Keen
This story definitely puts the 'H' in hot. There isn't a ton of story here, just a good sexual romp. However, it does go beyond the typical stories that are nothing more that sex scene descriptions that populate this site.
This story contains actual dialog and thoughtful characters. Peachy also does a good job of setting the atmosphere and describing the sex. You get a good idea of what sort of relationship the two characters have.
There is one negative I found with the story. It is second person. Now, it is better than most second person stories, but I think it would have been better if told from first person.
If you like stories about a man and a woman playing with toys, especially those where the man is on the receiving end, then you will probably like this story. Whew, I sure did.
Your New Toys by Peachy Keen
