Parisian Train Adventure

Mrmcreamy

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Hello! Writing a story about a bisexual male from Chicago who meets a Michigan couple on a train in Milan headed to Paris. Would like to meet up in person or Zoom with the Michigan couple or a female to bounce ideas off of. Below is a short description.

The train from Milan to Paris hummed like a secret waiting to be told. Ben, a restless consultant from Chicago, wasn’t looking for trouble, just a drink and a window seat to watch the dark slip past. Then came Kayla and Brian, the kind of couple who carried chaos with them, fresh from a Venetian wedding and already flirting with the edge of reality. One round turned into three, and by the time the train pulled into Gare de Lyon, the air between them felt heavier than the Paris fog. The three met days later under red lights and soft rain in Montmartre, laughter fading into something that felt like danger. Three strangers, drawn by curiosity, pulled into a night that promised no answers but the kind of chemistry that leaves a mark.
 
Would like to meet up in person or Zoom with the Michigan couple or a female to bounce ideas off of. Below is a short description.
I think you should probably move this post into one of the Roleplaying forums, Story Ideas is for developing story plot, not meeting people for hookups😁

You can self-report your own post and ask a mod to move it to a more appropriate forum!
 
I think you should probably move this post into one of the Roleplaying forums, Story Ideas is for developing story plot, not meeting people for hookups😁

You can self-report your own post and ask a mod to move it to a more appropriate forum!

SRP isn't for hook-ups, either.

He's writing a story and wants help developing the story.
 
Hello! Writing a story about a bisexual male from Chicago who meets a Michigan couple on a train in Milan headed to Paris. Would like to meet up in person or Zoom with the Michigan couple or a female to bounce ideas off of. Below is a short description.

You posted this in the correct forum to begin with.

I doubt you'll find someone to Zoom or meet with to bounce ideas around. If you're looking to meet people, the Literotica Personals is a good place to ask.
 
The train adventure is a solid idea. It would be a very enticing setting as all involved know it's a one and done.

I'd change the characters to include at least one European character. Maybe the solo female character is a French native and the couple are visiting Americans or Canadians. Perhaps further spice it up by having them be an interracial couple which is always a yummy thought. This gives them ample reason to have dialog which could lead to other things.
 
Tell you what. Let's have it with some Europeans getting it on while on a train holiday in America... MUCH more interesting...
 
Tell you what. Let's have it with some Europeans getting it on while on a train holiday in America... MUCH more interesting...
Amtrak does not easily lend itself to sexy times...

but I have met some of the most interesting people imaginable in Amtrak observation lounge cars😍
 
I was referring to the fact that many Americans seem to view the whole external world as a US playground where exotic (to them) story settings are used... to impress other Yanks, mainly. The OP seems to have more than a whiff of that.

Sorry to shatter any storybook illusions but some of us actually live and work in Paris and Milan as a very everyday thing and find them in no sense exotic.

Little Rock, Arkansas, now...
 
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