cincy4fun6
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- Joined
- Apr 24, 2017
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I know I took and abrupt turn in the series for some. But for those followers that like it I would welcome some real comments. Not just, Well you made some typo's.
I have 2 chapters posted to go up soon that I hope you like. The final one to Return to Paradise is a little bit of a lead in to another phase of the saga.
This was my first story line, it started out to be a spoof of a meatloaf song and it just grew from there.
I wanted to put more Adventure into the story and actually less sex. I might go back and rewrite some of the scenes in a more horror story fashion. I kept away from that to keep it more lighthearted and more on topic for this board. Would you want to read more of a story line with less sex or keep the sex level up?
I know I need to get into writing a better sex dialog too. I'm learning and trying. It's been fun and I've got a lot of great comments.
I have 2 chapters posted to go up soon that I hope you like. The final one to Return to Paradise is a little bit of a lead in to another phase of the saga.
This was my first story line, it started out to be a spoof of a meatloaf song and it just grew from there.
I wanted to put more Adventure into the story and actually less sex. I might go back and rewrite some of the scenes in a more horror story fashion. I kept away from that to keep it more lighthearted and more on topic for this board. Would you want to read more of a story line with less sex or keep the sex level up?
I know I need to get into writing a better sex dialog too. I'm learning and trying. It's been fun and I've got a lot of great comments.
