Pain Slut

petes478

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Jennifer sipped her champagne draining her flute and then moved on to Grey Goose Martinis.

She wore a white dress with spaghetti straps and red lipsticked lips that said "will suck cock for free".

Her stiletto heels made her look, when standing, slightly bent forward and legs apart as she always stood, ready to take several hard cocks up her pussy from behind, and this is just to Start The Day.

The main orhanizer of tonight's "get to know Jennifer" themed party was Alphonse, the New York City headquartered porn king and substitute Dom.

He stepped out to check with some of his guests, and he coudn't belive what he was seeing. Jennifer was on her knees in the middle of the dining room blowing some guy with a 12 inch hard-on apparently with no shame. She was moaving her head up and down, up and down, giving head to this well-hung stud who looked all of 22 years old, smearing her red lipstick all over his wide shlong and licking and tickling his balls till he erupted shooting gallons of white cum onto Jennifer's hungry looking face and tits. She finished him off th her hands pumping hic cock making it shoot 9 more times all over her dress, face and neck.

She walked away and Al followed her into the bathroom closing the door behind him and locking it.

Her face was red and she said "I'm sorry but I was overcme with lust for him" and Al smacked her across her jaw with his hand startling the poor young starlet. She began to get up and he whacked her again.

She felt her pussy fill with warm pre-cum juices and she instantly recognized that she was addicted to pain as part of her sexual arousal and process.

She smirked now, with this self-knowledge and she crawled towards him on her hands and knees begging him for some attention, eyes filled with tears.

He dropped trou and allowed her to suck his 10 incher and she wept at the sight of his heavy thick balls.

She wanted him in her ass and so as she licked his cock, she said she wanted him to force her to do things she had never ever done before.

She called him "Sir" and spread her legs wide for him as she leaned forward over the bathroom sink, jutting her tight little blond ass of hers upwards in the air in an eagerated 'fuck me" pose.

Al walloped her ass with force smacking her cheeks hard and making them bright red.

She waggled her ass at him in a taunting manner, and this only further incensed him spanking her hard and fast till she was reduced to a whimpering pussy/whore.

Al stuck his hand up her wet dripping cunt and manipulated her G-spot while he played with her clit making circles with it till she bucked her hips and started to shake her ass up and down rythmically as if in a convulsion. her muscles contracted and her belly quivered as she orgasmed hard while Al's hand was still partially inside her dripping slick cunt.

Al mounted her like a stud horse now, aiming his massive steel-like erection into her pussy from behind and rammed her mercilessly making her quake and cry in pain/pleasure as he spanked her sorry tight ass while he rode her into submission.

He reached around and pinched her nipples hard making them point straight out in arousal.

He licked and slobbered over her neck while his hipped moved rapidly making her feel the force of his manly cock ramming her pussy over and over and over again.

He erupted deeply inside her quim while he slid his forefinger into her tight round brown hole, feeling her inner heat from her rectum, pulsing.

He fucked her ass with his digit making her squirm even more and he marked her as his territory cumming again in her cunt as he fucked her rectum with his finger.

Now he could make some money renting her out to some of the dungeons and Doms, and they would know she belonged to him, was his property.

She went down on him several times that evening.

He fucked every hole of hers and came in each hole twice.

She would forever smell his scent on her.

Every time she grew aroused, she would crave pain to complete her in orgasm.

She would crave his large-ish sized cock in her ass every time she became aroused for any reason.

The hypnosis was complete.
 
You got it baby!

Yes-a critique will help me hone my writing skills and alert me as to what themes/concepts are arousing/interesting and what are turn-offs.

Fire away!
 
Just stop posting here. You clearly don't understand that this thread is for commenting on posted stories and you are just annoying everyone by not abiding by the rules.

Post, ask for comments and start a debate. Please don't stick short, unfinished stuff here and clutter up the place.
 
petes478 said:
Yes-a critique will help me hone my writing skills and alert me as to what themes/concepts are arousing/interesting and what are turn-offs.

Fire away!
Ok, Petes...

It's flash fiction. It lacks the basics of plot developement, characterization and readablility. It's a poor excuse for a story in a genre that is not even allowed on Lit.

Now go away and don't post anymore of this crap.
 
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