Over weight daughter

Sounds interesting.

But just to clarify: She is only chubby, not fat ? (Sorry, but here in Europe, we don't use pound and foot, so I had to calculate it, I hope my calculations where right)

I noticed this many times before: Some women are chubby or even fat, but still they have a beautiful face.

I think so far, the biggest problem is: how can the father seduce her ?

It sounds as if this girl is very insecure. I guess, she doesn't like to be nude.

Maybe her father could offer her to fuck her, just so that she is no longer a virgin. But I think this wouldn't work.

What about this: Her mother sits down to talk to her. He could tell her things like: Maybe she should change her dress style. So far, she wears big, wide clothes to hide her body. But instead, she should wear something that accent the good parts of her body, like her breasts

"Really, you should wear some tight tops. With this big tops, no one can tell how big your breasts are. But boys love big breasts."

"They aren't that big. There is no need to accent them."

"I think they are big. Take the shirt of and let me see them."

The daughter takes the shirt off, now she is topless.

"What about this skirt ? Take it off and let me see your thighs"

The whole time, her father was peeping into the room through the gap of the half opened door. (the mother told him to do that). He was naked and he had a hard one, since he just read a Penthouse magazine

The daughter takes the shirt of, now she only wears a slip.

"See, you don't look that bad. Now let's hear what your father thinks about your body. DADDY, COME IN"

He comes in and admires her body ....


Another possible thing: The daughter is sitting in the bathtub. Her father comes in. She is surprised, so she wants to hide her body under the soap foam that is floating on the surface. So she takes a deep breath and "dives" down under the surface. She expects that her father leaves so she can come up again in a few seconds. 30 seconds later, she has to get back to the surface to breath, but her father is still there.

"Oh, sorry, darling, I am just searching something".

She dives down again. Suddenly, she feels how her father put his arm into the bathtub and caresses her breasts ...
 
So, this young woman bitches constantly that, in her eyes, "she's fat", and her mother is pissed off and tired of the bitching, so the father fucks her?


:eek:



~Puppi
:kiss:
 
Sounds pretty rude. This sounds like: "O.K. I will fuck you, but you have to stop the bitching"

I see it more like this: This girl has problems because of her overweigth. She is really desperate.

But her parents aren't pissed off, they want to help her.

What about this: The mother wants to help her daughter so she gives her some advices on clothing and on makeup. Then, the father sees his daughter and becomes horny.

The father tells his wife that he wants to fuck the daughter. So they turn her into a good looking girl, and the father seduces her - but only when the mother is away.

Then, later the girl talks to her mother, how her father tries to seduce her, and asks what she should do. So her mother tells her to go one and do it with her father.

Or maybe the other way around. The mother tells her daughter, she should seduce her father, just by showing some nudity. Like, walking around with a short skirt ... if he gets aroused, other men will be aroused, too. Of course, the father asks for more ...

Anyway, the story could end like: Even though the girl finally has great sex, with a few nice guys, her father still has sex with her, many times ...
 
I would say, the beginning of the story was good, but at some point, it changed a little bit for me.

First, I think, the daughter should be a virgin. Just my opinion ...

Also, I thought there would be more incest. I mean, the daughter showed her naked boobs to her father. And she sucked his cock ... but nothing else.

And: I thought the daughter should be turned to a secure woman that goes out and dates.

In the beginning, you mentioned the daughter should be turned into a sexpot. But it seems more like she became a slut, ready for every man. I mean, if you look at a girl and the father asks you: Do you like her ... Would you say no ? The next thing you notice is, that the own father gives you a condome ...

But then, it was your idea ... maybe I should start my own story about this.
 
After thinking about it:

lexium, I think I found out what bugs me about the story


The father tells the daughter that she would have to fuck the guys that found her attractive.

Sounds almot like a non consent story. I mean, what is her motivation ? Does she agree because her father is so strict, or is she THAT desperate, that she agrees that everybody can fuck her ? I think this would be a sign of low self esteem. I doubt that she would enjoy it.

I think it should be more like: Her father really is sexually aroused by her, so he seduces her and fucks her. So the girl thinks: "My father fucked me, even I am his daughter. So normal guys should also find me arousing ... "

Then, she could go out and start to date guys and have sex with them ...
 
I'm sorry, but to me this idea just doesn't sound too realistic to me. Maybe I grew up in a more "normal" family than others then? Maybe not? I do know some of our incest fans have been complaining that the stories are all turning into one another and that they're not too realistic, though.


~Puppi
:kiss:
 
what about this:

she always felt that she was missing something, because she still was a virgin. But she never knew how desperate she wanted it.

Then, her father fucks her - so for the first time she has sex and she is astonished, that it is so great. So she wants more with many guys.

Maybe add something like: She was chubby since she was 12. Now she is like 23 or something like that. Nowadays, many girls have their first sex at the age of 16-18. She is 23, so now she has to compensate the last 5 sexless years ...

I mean: Let's say, an average girl at the age of 23 had 1000 times sex within 5 years. Now this girl wants to get her 1000 as quick as possible.
 
lexium said:

The father and mother both would have sex with their daughter.

I thought you just got done saying the mother would not have an active role in this story and that the father would "seduce" his daughter when the mother was away?


~Puppi
:kiss:
 
cry!

fat? 5 foot 6 inches 155 lbs is fat?! I'm only five feet and I'm at 140...what does this say about me?! I *know* that I am not fat!

Chicklet
 
Some people aren't good at measurments (height/weight)...


~Puppi
:kiss:
 
this is true, pup. very true. i suppose we can forgive some of them.

(my favorite writer...former favorite...described a girl as being "obese" who was 5 foot 4 120 lbs...i haven't picked up another of her books since.)

Chicklet
 
Size 10 over Size 5

A character I write about, based on a RW (real world) friend, is by no means a size five, more truthfully a size ten-size twelve and I find her a lot more attractive and desirable for just that reason. I can't understand why if a woman posses a bit of curve to her body and the softness that goes with that feature, she is to be overlooked as a sexual being and devoid of interest form others.
My experience has been that women of generous proportions have appetites and passions equaly to any anorexic waif and personaly, I prefer full swaying breasts over pre-adolecent appearing A cups, who says more than a mouthfull is wasted.....
 
lexium said:
Do anyone have any ideas to make this story better?


Learn how to spell. Learn grammar structure. Learn sentence structure. Write decent stories.
 
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