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Strangebuddy
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There's been this idea that's bounced around my head today. Essentially, a girl gets out of Juvinille detention, either due to turning 18 or getting out out when she's 16-17 and planning revenge on the people that put her in there (which of course would pay off only when she became 18)
The two twists I have on the idea (and PLEASE feel free to share your own spins and ideas, I love a good brainstorm) are thus:
1: Our lead is put into Juvie when she's 15 going on 16 and gets 2 years (which is on the high side for anything that isn't going to get a hearing for when she's 18). She has a twin sister who visits her once but then finds every excuse she can to avoid her when visiting days come up or the lead gets a pass to visit her family (I figured it would be a mix of snowballing guilt over avoiding her sister, in addition to her school reputation, which she fears will take a plunge at her school if anyone found out about her sister). When the lead gets released a little before their birthday, the twin panics and tries to avoid her sister again, only for the lead to corner her,where one of two things happen.
a. Instead of being the rage-fueled ex-con the twin was expecting, the lead is actually very polite and affectionate with her. The lead just states she wants to rekindle their relationship and wants to spend more time with her. Glad that her sister isn't angry, the twin starts spending time with her and soon they're as close as they used to be. The only thing that's bothering the twin is that her sister is overly protective and verrrrrry affectionate, and it seems like she always wants to be touching her, whether it's holding hands, putting her arm around her shoulder, or kissing her on the cheek a few more times than she's comfortable with.
This comes to a head on their birthday, where the twin gets woken up in the middle of the night by her sister, who slips into bed with her and starts running her hands over her, commenting how much the twin has grown and how beautiful she is. It turns out that instead of being angry about getting shunned by her sister, the lead has actually spent the last two years creating an idealized version of her, a girl with soft skin, who's perfectly innocent and needs her twin sister to protect her, and loves other women...but needs to be taught by her more than willing sister.
b. The Lead is ticked at being avoided by her sister and takes it as a personal offense which she promises she will make her sister pay for. It starts small, with the lead setting her twin sister's alarm clock to a couple of hours ahead/behind, or hacking her Facebook account to flirt with her classmates, but it progresses. She manages to worm her way back into her parents' hearts and even gets to shift the blame of her missing curfew (which could get her thrown in jail since she's on probation) to her sister and then starts telling her sister that she'll have to make things "interesting" if she doesn't want her to break curfew while her sister is suppose to be watching her (leading to some mild to moderate humiliation). When she's no longer on probation, the lead starts leaving her sister alone, though her sister starts noticing that absolute strangers (and some of her classmates) start coming up to her, asking about lewd acts that she's never done...turns out the final revenge is her sister taking advantage of the fact their twins to impersonate her.
2. The lead, only 14 at the time, is given a harsh sentence sentence not because she did anything too bad (the idea I had was that she burned down an old shack that no one was using...but it was on public property) but because the judge was planning to use the case to show he was tough on juvenile crime, which he planned to use as a selling point for a future political campaign. The lead breaks down right in the courtroom and begs for mercy...only to have the judge smirk and make a snide comment (off the record of course) about how she should make the most of her time in detention as he sees her spending most of her life in institutions.
Four years pass and the judge has completely forgotten about the girl he unfairly locked up. Then his 18 year-old daughter comes up to him and says she wants to introduce her girlfriend, a genius who got her GED when she was 15, is already completing a majority of her pre-requisites for her college degree, is an entrepreneur...and "Oh you just have to meet her daddy!"
The judge isn't completely comfortable with his daughter being a lesbian...though accepting her has allowed him to drag her along with him to rallies to hopefully win some points with the LGBT community. He goes out to meet his daughter's girlfriend and while he winces whenever they show any kind of affection to each other, he has to admit that his daughter could do worse...though her name sounds familiar.
Doing a not-so-legal background search on the girlfriend, the judge remembers her and what he did. He tries to stop the relationship subtly at first, telling his daughter that she needs to focus on her studies, planning impromptu family nights whenever he finds out about his daughter's dates, etc. Eventually, he flat-out tells his daughter to stop dating the lead.
Fast-forward to the next day at his office where the lead strolls in with a smirk on her face. She tells the judge that she will keep dating his daughter and let's slip a few lewd details to suggest how serious the relationship's gotten. She also states that she's planning on working her way into his wife's panties and is already seeding the idea of a three-way into his daughter's head.
When the judge tries to call security, he finds the lines don't work and his secretary has decided to take an early lunch. Turns out the lead has made VERY good use of her time in and out of detention, making enough friends on both sides of the law that getting enough material to crush a small-time circuit judge only took a couple of e-mails. After she drops her bombshell, She then lifts her skirt and points to her bald pussy. As the beaten judge gets on his knees to begin a life of submission to the same girl he put behind bars, she pulls out her cellphone and calls his daughter up, describing their planned date in very graphic detail.
The two twists I have on the idea (and PLEASE feel free to share your own spins and ideas, I love a good brainstorm) are thus:
1: Our lead is put into Juvie when she's 15 going on 16 and gets 2 years (which is on the high side for anything that isn't going to get a hearing for when she's 18). She has a twin sister who visits her once but then finds every excuse she can to avoid her when visiting days come up or the lead gets a pass to visit her family (I figured it would be a mix of snowballing guilt over avoiding her sister, in addition to her school reputation, which she fears will take a plunge at her school if anyone found out about her sister). When the lead gets released a little before their birthday, the twin panics and tries to avoid her sister again, only for the lead to corner her,where one of two things happen.
a. Instead of being the rage-fueled ex-con the twin was expecting, the lead is actually very polite and affectionate with her. The lead just states she wants to rekindle their relationship and wants to spend more time with her. Glad that her sister isn't angry, the twin starts spending time with her and soon they're as close as they used to be. The only thing that's bothering the twin is that her sister is overly protective and verrrrrry affectionate, and it seems like she always wants to be touching her, whether it's holding hands, putting her arm around her shoulder, or kissing her on the cheek a few more times than she's comfortable with.
This comes to a head on their birthday, where the twin gets woken up in the middle of the night by her sister, who slips into bed with her and starts running her hands over her, commenting how much the twin has grown and how beautiful she is. It turns out that instead of being angry about getting shunned by her sister, the lead has actually spent the last two years creating an idealized version of her, a girl with soft skin, who's perfectly innocent and needs her twin sister to protect her, and loves other women...but needs to be taught by her more than willing sister.
b. The Lead is ticked at being avoided by her sister and takes it as a personal offense which she promises she will make her sister pay for. It starts small, with the lead setting her twin sister's alarm clock to a couple of hours ahead/behind, or hacking her Facebook account to flirt with her classmates, but it progresses. She manages to worm her way back into her parents' hearts and even gets to shift the blame of her missing curfew (which could get her thrown in jail since she's on probation) to her sister and then starts telling her sister that she'll have to make things "interesting" if she doesn't want her to break curfew while her sister is suppose to be watching her (leading to some mild to moderate humiliation). When she's no longer on probation, the lead starts leaving her sister alone, though her sister starts noticing that absolute strangers (and some of her classmates) start coming up to her, asking about lewd acts that she's never done...turns out the final revenge is her sister taking advantage of the fact their twins to impersonate her.
2. The lead, only 14 at the time, is given a harsh sentence sentence not because she did anything too bad (the idea I had was that she burned down an old shack that no one was using...but it was on public property) but because the judge was planning to use the case to show he was tough on juvenile crime, which he planned to use as a selling point for a future political campaign. The lead breaks down right in the courtroom and begs for mercy...only to have the judge smirk and make a snide comment (off the record of course) about how she should make the most of her time in detention as he sees her spending most of her life in institutions.
Four years pass and the judge has completely forgotten about the girl he unfairly locked up. Then his 18 year-old daughter comes up to him and says she wants to introduce her girlfriend, a genius who got her GED when she was 15, is already completing a majority of her pre-requisites for her college degree, is an entrepreneur...and "Oh you just have to meet her daddy!"
The judge isn't completely comfortable with his daughter being a lesbian...though accepting her has allowed him to drag her along with him to rallies to hopefully win some points with the LGBT community. He goes out to meet his daughter's girlfriend and while he winces whenever they show any kind of affection to each other, he has to admit that his daughter could do worse...though her name sounds familiar.
Doing a not-so-legal background search on the girlfriend, the judge remembers her and what he did. He tries to stop the relationship subtly at first, telling his daughter that she needs to focus on her studies, planning impromptu family nights whenever he finds out about his daughter's dates, etc. Eventually, he flat-out tells his daughter to stop dating the lead.
Fast-forward to the next day at his office where the lead strolls in with a smirk on her face. She tells the judge that she will keep dating his daughter and let's slip a few lewd details to suggest how serious the relationship's gotten. She also states that she's planning on working her way into his wife's panties and is already seeding the idea of a three-way into his daughter's head.
When the judge tries to call security, he finds the lines don't work and his secretary has decided to take an early lunch. Turns out the lead has made VERY good use of her time in and out of detention, making enough friends on both sides of the law that getting enough material to crush a small-time circuit judge only took a couple of e-mails. After she drops her bombshell, She then lifts her skirt and points to her bald pussy. As the beaten judge gets on his knees to begin a life of submission to the same girl he put behind bars, she pulls out her cellphone and calls his daughter up, describing their planned date in very graphic detail.
