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[geronimo_appleby]

Will I ever learn... Loving Wives (again!) A score of 2.33 and the comments have begun.

 

[Black Tulip]

Have a hug. Brave man.

 

[S-Des]

Will I ever learn... Loving Wives (again!) A score of 2.33 and the comments have begun.

I have been posting there since the beginning and I still run all my stuff by a couple of authors who also post there. At the same time, even my best results have gotten a lot of twisted comments, so join the club. It's a big group, you're more than welcome.

 

[FallingToFly]

RCV'ed and a 5, which I thought you earned.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Dedicated to Geronimo Appleby, who boldly rode into the valley of the shadow of Loving Wives, and emerged, bloody but unbowed.

Anons to right of him,
Jerks to left of him,
Ass Holes in front of him
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly he wrote and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the brave writer.

Jerks to right of him,
Anons to left of him,
Ass Holes behind him
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While critics and no-talents fell,
He that had written so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of him,
Left of Geronimo the writer.
​

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Good story. Gave it a 5. Fuck um if they don't like it.

JJ

 

[MaeveoSliabh]

Eet's a Geronimo!!!!

uh... didn't read the story, but just had to do it. It's a thing.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Have a hug. Brave man.

Thanks BT.

I have been posting there since the beginning and I still run all my stuff by a couple of authors who also post there. At the same time, even my best results have gotten a lot of twisted comments, so join the club. It's a big group, you're more than welcome.

Some of the comments are worth a chuckle.

RCV'ed and a 5, which I thought you earned.

thanks FtF. saw your comment there too... not one of the twisted ones!

Dedicated to Geronimo Appleby, who boldly rode into the valley of the shadow of Loving Wives, and emerged, bloody but unbowed.



Anons to right of him,
Jerks to left of him,
Ass Holes in front of him
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly he wrote and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the brave writer.

Jerks to right of him,
Anons to left of him,
Ass Holes behind him
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While critics and no-talents fell,
He that had written so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of him,
Left of Geronimo the writer.




Rumple Foreskin

Love it. Thanks Rumple.

Good story. Gave it a 5. Fuck um if they don't like it.

JJ

Thank you.

Eet's a Geronimo!!!!

uh... didn't read the story, but just had to do it. It's a thing.

Erm... WTF?

 

[MaeveoSliabh]

Erm... WTF?

Entitled evolved when the RA discovered the old account. No biggie.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Entitled evolved when the RA discovered the old account. No biggie.

I'm still confused. But then again, that's not too difficult.

 

[MagicaPractica]

Take the good and discard the bad. I put useful comments in the good category but people don't often give those, just whether they liked it or not. I'm going to go read your story in a few.

Update: Enjoyed it thoroughly. Don't know why people said the category spoiled the surprise ending. You knew she was married. Why would you assume he was her husband? Guess it's like the guy who said he can see where my Six Ways to Sunday is heading. All of the things he wrote are nothing I had in mind and have no intention of happening in the stories. Just people making assumptions that may or may not play out. I did find the "ugly beauty" phrase in about the tenth paragraph slightly jarring. Took me out of the story for a minute, IMHO.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Take the good and discard the bad. I put useful comments in the good category but people don't often give those, just whether they liked it or not. I'm going to go read your story in a few.

Update: Enjoyed it thoroughly. Don't know why people said the category spoiled the surprise ending. You knew she was married. Why would you assume he was her husband? Guess it's like the guy who said he can see where my Six Ways to Sunday is heading. All of the things he wrote are nothing I had in mind and have no intention of happening in the stories. Just people making assumptions that may or may not play out. I did find the "ugly beauty" phrase in about the tenth paragraph slightly jarring. Took me out of the story for a minute, IMHO.

thanks. someone mentioned privately that the 'ugly beauty' phrase was poetic... go figure?

i appreciate your time, and i may just reciprocate by checking your Six Ways, too.