Original Sin...

[Guest]

OOC: This role play is mainly for Ravenloft and myself. We do, however need someone to play Adum. (Looks, etc. can be whatever you'd like.) If you chose the role of Adum, please e-mail Ravenloft or myself. We want this to run as smoothly as possible, and prefere that people who RP with us keep in contact. The time frame is simply in the 1700s, and takes place on/along a large estate along the English Countryside.

There is a young, naive woman, Eva. A wicked, demonic man Azraiel. And a kind, simpler man Adum.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

"Hello pretty one!" Eva heard someone call out. She looked about her small room in the tower, but saw no one. "Eve..." the voice called to her again. "Eve, it is not polite to leave a greeting unanswered!"

"Who's there?" Eva asked the empty room. "Please, show yourself! How else may I greet one if I cannot see him?"

Then she saw him...or an apparition at least. He sat along the edge of her small cot and smiled at her. "Eve, my dear, you look lovely as ever," he spoke to her.

"Spirit?" Eva asked, mainly trying to understand the situation before her. "Spirit, do I know you?"

"Ah, not yet my child, but I hope you will! I hope to know you in the Biblical sense!" he answered. Eva felt her self blush. Never had anyone spoken to her in this manner. As if reading her thoughts, the stranger asked, "And do you like it, my dear Eve?"

Ignoring the queston at hand, Eva asked her own. "Tell me, Spirit, what do you mean by Biblical?

The Spirit returned a question. "You are not familar with the Bible?" he asked. Eva shook her head 'no'. He went on. "Well, my dear...you, like Eve, will open your legs to me as she did to Adam!"

Eva felt herself blushing all the more!

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

The apparition leared at little Eva. It was, it would seem, about to ravish her right where she lay. But for a nock at the door to her room. Looking to the door, both of them, the spirit with a look of mild disdain, and she with shock. Turning quickly to Eva, the spirit spoke quietly but quickly as it leaned in, over her, its eyes mesmerizing her. "On the morrow you will find yourself out in the orchards... Foraging for food... When you are there you will meet a serpent coiled about the branch of an apple tree... Its name shall be Azraiel, and it shall offer to you the finest apple of that tree..." With that another nock came at the door, more urgent, more demanding than the last. "Eva? Do you still sleep? The morning is in full swing!" Came a muffled, mildly concerned male voice from behind the door. Looking back to the door Eva called back. "Adum... Is that you?" She found that she could barely breath. She reluctently turned her eyes back upward. Only to find that the stranger, the spirit was... Gone!

 

[Inkubus]

Sorry for the breach in decorum...

I have read your posts in the past and find you both to be excellent storytellers. I waited patiently to see who would throw their hat into this storyline. Im not sure if you found anyone yet..and I know we were supposed to email you but I wanted to reach you both at the same time. If you find my writing capability adaquate for your story give me a tag.

Ink

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

"Adum... Is that you?" Eva called out, finally catching her breath.

"Adum?" the voice asked. "Why on earth would that young man be up here in the first place?!"

Hearing the demandant voice drained the last of sleep's lingering hold on the girl. "Mum!" she exclaimed, jumping up from her cot. "I hadn't realized it was so late in the morning!"

Eva ran about her small room, dressing for the day as she spoke to the closed door. The visit she had had puzzled her. Was it in fact a real visit? Or had it all been in her head...a lingering of her subconscious? Then his words rang through her mind once more:

"On the morrow you will find yourself out in the orchards... Foraging for food... When you are there you will meet a serpent coiled about the branch of an apple tree... Its name shall be Azraiel, and it shall offer to you the finest apple of that tree..."

What that had meant, she was uncertain. She would most obviously find out after the next sunrise though. Something about its mysteriousness intrigued her. She couldn't help it, but she suddenly felt a longing deep within her loins.

It wasn't until after she heard her name being called out again that she awoke from her trance-like state. "Eva?" the voice called out. "Hey Eva...! Wake up you silly girl!"

She smiled, seeing Adum before her. He had been her friend since childhood, and so far the only thing she had known as a companion. He sat down next to Eva in the open prarie feild...

 

[Inkubus]

Adum

Adum looked upon her with eyes filled with kindness and concern.. "I was calling you, silly... you'll sleep the day away and I thought you were going to help me with the harvest." Adum pondered her flushed appearance and then mentioned "or if your not feeling well I'll forage just enough for a meal and set it out as a picnic if you like?"

 

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Eva Churchill...

Still having trouble shaking the memory of the morning, Eva spoke. "A picnic?" she asked. "Oh yes Adum! That would be wonderful!"

Slowly, the natural color began to return to her face, and she smiled. Once again she was the Eva he had known for years. The Eva he liked when it was unfashionable to accept a friend of the opposite sex. The Eva he was growing to love.

Adum trailed off to the edge where prarie meet forest. It was there that he found a few berries and other fruits. He quickly returned to Eva's side, sitting down once more. She smoothed the length of her skirts out along the grass, offering a table top of sorts for them to use.

Nodding slightly, Adum dropped his findings down on her fanned skirts. "It's not much..." he began.

Eva cut him off before he could finish his thought. "It shall be just fine for only the two of us," she said, picking up a plump, green apple. She looked at its perfect roundness and its vast color. It was almost a shame to eat it. It seemed to have been a beautiful piece of art work brought down to her by the heavens.

Adum took one of the other apples he had picked from the small orchard along this end of the property. He, too, looked at it for a minute, but being a young man, he didn't waste time on sinking his mouth down upon its flesh. After a while, Eva began to eat her apple as well.

The two sat in comfortable silence for most of the evening, talking only when they felt it necessary. Eva enjoyed being with Adum. He made her feel comfortable, safe and warm...

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

Adum and Eva whiled the day away, eventually Adum fell asleep with Eva's head resting on his chest. A whisper came to Eva, she to had drifted to sleep, but a much lighter one. "Eva..." It was so faint that all it did was awaken her. "Eva..." Still so faint that she barely noticed it, but now she was setting up and looking about.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

"Eva..." the voice called to her again.

She sat up, careful not to disturb the sleeping Adum along her side. "Spirit...is that you?" she asked, unafraid. There was something about him...it...that enticed her. She wasn't sure what it was or why it affected her so.

Then she sensed something new. A smell. It was sweet, yet very faint. Eva inhailed deeply through her nose, letting the sweet odor invade her nasal passage. She called out to her new friend once more, "Spirit...are you there? Please answer me."

"Yes Eva," the spirit answered. "It is I. Come to me, my child. Come to me..."

With that, Eva stood in the middle of the prarie. She walked through until she reached the forest's edge. From there she traced the edge, moving further away from the home. "Spirit, please show yourself to me?" she asked.

When she heard no answer, Eva continued to walk. The oder had gotten stronger by now. Once again, Eva inhaled deeping by the nose. The smell was intoxicating! The stonger it got, the more she wanted to see her mysterious friend.

Looking around, Eva found herself in another orchard. This one was much larger than the one that bared green apples. It was the largest on the estate. It held the ever so delicious, red apples.

"Come to me Eva," the spirit commanded. "You're almost there!"

As if in a trance, she made her way into the depths of the orchard. After sveral steps, Eva came upon a Diamond-back coiled in an apple tree. It looked at her, sticking its forked tounge out with a hiss. Slightly startled, Eva was taken aback.

"Hello curious creature," Eva spoke to the serpent. It just looked at her inquisitively. "Are you the one I was sent to meet? Azraiel?"

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

"Yess, that iss a name I have not been called in far too long a time... I am Azraiel, little Eva... Guardian of the tree of carnal knowlege. You have learned my name, therefore the fruit of thiss tree iss yourss to tasste..." All the while the snake spoke, it coiled up around the tree's lowest branch and let its head hang free from its limb, flicking its tongue to taste/scent Eva. Its eyes were mesmerizing, they drew Eva's own in without a fight. Azraiel's tongue flickered once more, the sight of it sent a shiver through Eva's body. Azraiel had Eva effectivly in thrall, but this alone did not please him. Breaking his gaze he hissed again. "Tasste... I offer to you... Only to you... Tasste of the tree'ss knowlege..."

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

Eva reached out to the low branch, the same one Azraiel was coiled to. Her fingers slipped around a firm apple. She held to it for a moment before snapping it off the branch.

"Yesss, that's it!" the serpent exclaimed in delight. While Eva's arm was still extended, he unravled himself from the tree slightly and slowly made his way up her arm. She chucked as the touch of him tickled her arm. If ever a snake could smile, he certainly did! He was quickly gaining the young maiden's trust. That delighted him. He was always uncertain when he approached one in this form.

Eva brought the juicy red apple to her lips, but she hesitated slightly. From somewhere deep in the back of her mind she seemed to be struggling. She wished her spirit friend had been there to help reassure her about Azraiel.

Sensing something was wrong, Azraiel spoke, "Do not fear, my child, for I am a friend of your spirit friend. He sent you to me, had he not?"

Eva nodded at what the serpent said to her. It was, however, true. And, that apple looked so inviting... More so than the green one from yesterday.

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

Coiling the length of his body about Eva's waist and resting his head on her shoulder as he watched her hold the apple to her lips, Azraiel flickered his forked tongue. His tail end was seeking out the length of Eva's thigh, with intentions to curl tightly about it. Azraiel's body was warm, not at all the foolish misconceptions most had of how a snake was supposed to feel like. Warm smooth pebbled flesh snuck in between Eva's legs and quickly pulled taught, into the meat of her filled out right thigh. once more Azraiel's tongue flickered out but this time it touched her neck. It was light against her skin, but struck expertly along the most sensitive spots of her neck.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

Eva felt something twitch deep within her loins the instant the serpant's tongue struck out along her neck. It seemed to smile, in its own way, once her teeth sunk into the apple's flesh.

"Yesss, that's it!" Azraiel exclaimed in excitement. His tail slowly inched its way up her thigh as Eva savored the taste of the apple. Her body tingled from head to toe. Who could have thought that such a simple thing as an apple could bring one such pleasure?

Azraiel's tail slithered higher up her thigh until its tip touched her lips. The only cover they bore was nature's hair. The serpent smiled once again, his tongue slipping past his mouth, as Eva returned to the apple for a second bite.

"That's good, my child, eat...eat it all," he said to her, his head now rested upon the pert flesh of her small breast. As he spoke, his forked tongue slid across her nipple.

Eva cried out from the touch. She had never felt this way before, and she liked it. Azraiel slipped his tail past the folds of her lips now. He had begun to slowly insert himself into her. A soft moan escaped from Eva's lips. Without knowing it, she had dropped the apple.

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel;

As his tail slowly filled Eva below, her knee's grew weak. She found herself easing slowly to the grass. Azraiels stealthy tongue struck her nipple with an upward flick then again as it flitted back into his mouth. His tail only went into her just so far, he was being delicate with her body as she was not his to take, not fully at any rate. But he could give her some pleasure here and now, it was a simple matter. Just refrain from going to deep... Or for that matter... To shallow. So now his head swivled about and caught hold of the unfinished apple. He brought it back to her lips even as his tail eased out of Eva's moistening slit.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

After the serpent withdrew his body from Eva, she sat upright. Azraiel slithered up her leg, then torso, until he was resting upon her shoulders. Once again, his head inches from hers.

"Finish the apple, little one, I shall be able to show you a whole new world from here on out!" he hissed into her ear.

Silently Eva ate as her and the snake sat in the orchard together...



(We can go ahead and jump to a new scene now if you'd still like to play Ink. )

 

[Inkubus]

thanks for the cue...;-)

Adum awoke to find Eva gone, he had dreamed of her , she was moaning but not in pain..it was odd he shook the dream from his addled brain and stood up, he had wasted the day away sleeping, Eva had probably already harvested her share . Adum got to work on the bountiful crops and picked and stored until his body could no longer work...he wondered about Eva... and soon it began to grow dark... he felt he should go look for her.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

"Eva...Eva?!" Adum called out, near the forest.

In a panic, Eva turned to look at Azraiel. He could read her thoughts through her eyes and knew that Adum would be upon them shortly and that she needed him to hide. Thinking as quickly as a serpent could, which was pretty quick mind you, he began to slither back down the length of her torso. "Spread your legsssss child," he hissed.

Eva did as she was told. Soon Azraiel was at her opening again. She was still wet. Good! In the rush they were in, he'd need all the help he could get. His head disappeared between her folds. Quickly his body followed, a bit too quickly, as Eva gasped in sudden pain.

Forgetting to be gentle in their hurried state, Azraiel's body tore through her. He was coming up to her cervix fast! Without stopping, his crashed into it, and with some difficulty managed to slip past that tiny opening. Once again Eva cried out from her displeasure, but more loudly this time.

"Eva?!" Adum was much closer now.

Six inches of Azraiel's body still lay along the outside of Eva. His raddle shook forcefully along the outside of her body. It crashed down upon her clit a few times. This time Eva's cries were of pleasure. It hit her clit one last time before his tail finally slid past her lips.

The serpent did not stop there though. He continued to coil his body into the lower regions of her belly, the homelands of life, until his raddle, too, had slipped beyond her cervix.

"Eva? Ah, there you are!" Finally Adum was by Eva's side. "Finally, I found you," he said to his friend. "Are you okay? Why are you lying here? I heard you cry out!"

Stumbling for words, not knowing what to do or say, Eva allowed Adum to help her stand up. He hadn't noticed the small amount of blood along the front of her flimsy gown. The two walked in silence back to the main house on her parent's estate.

[Edited by Tiggs on 12-19-2000 at 09:19 PM]

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

As Eva walked by Adum's side Azraiel turned about in her womb. It was all she could do to keep from making noise at the new and... Strange sensation... Even now the power of the apple was becoming one with her. She Found herself thinking of sex, sex of every fasion and color. It grew and grew in the forefront of her mind. She tried to push the thoughts back but Azraiel's slightest movement seemed to crash through every attempt she made. "My gift to you little Eva..." She heard in her mind. A moment later she fell to her knee's as a flash of another time and place took hold of her mind. A mongol horde, a young woman, out in the open. It was as though she flashed from person to person. She was the girl, one of the mongols, a person from afar, watching... Then it was over, and she found herself on her knee's with her hands in her hair, pressed against her temples...

 

[Inkubus]

Adum

Adum rushed to Eva's side. He had no idea what to do , she seemed to be in so much pain. Adum lifted her up and carried her to her home. He Did not stop until he had snuck her back to her room. He secretly chided himself for letting her work so hard from now on, Eva would not lift a finger.he only hoped he wasnt to late. He washed her brow and hoped some rest would do her good.

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

Eva's eyelids flickered as she fought her own body for control over them. Sleep was quickly falling upon her now, and she was safe, here, with Adum at her side. She could rest... It would, after all, be for only a moment. Just long enough for her to gain her strength back. Then, she would awake again and her and Adum could do as they wished...
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Once again Eva's mind slipped into the odd images she had seen earlier. With her conscious mind giving way to the unconscious, it was easier for the apple's power to take hold of her...

 

[Ravenloft]

Dream:

As Eva slipped into slumber she began to dream. She thought it was a dream at any rate. Her mind was her own but her body felt... Diferent. She was younger, slender of hip and breast, nature was not kind enough to have graced her with such things. She lay naked on the thick warm pelt of a cave bear, with a second one covering her. She was in a cold, dank cave but the pelts kept her form warmed well enough. A man was coming. He was hunched over, wearing only a pelt that resembled a deer about his waist, it was soiled though, making it hard to tell what it really was. His body was covered in thick hair and his jaw was oddly set, the lower section seemed to extend an inch too far, revealing his lower row of teeth. They were disgusting, the ones he had that is... Yellowed and twisted. His forehead was sloped in an odd manner as well, giving him an almost comical oafish appearence. His eyes turned down to Eva, who was not Eva but was... He saw her as he knew her, so nothing was amiss for him. He came to her and grunted once. Eva looked up at him curious to what it ment. Grunting again and pausing, the man bobbed his head. Again Eva had no idea what he wanted, though it was obvious that he did want something from her. A second later the man reached down and ripped the bear pelt off of her, exposing her naked form to the chill of the cave. He was on her then, pressing a knee between her legs to force them apart, his face inches from hers, his eyes full of driven lust. He tugged at the pelt about his waist and it fell off. She could not see it but she felt this man's cock pressing against her. He grunted in her face, his breath was rank but he still seemed to want some sort of reaction from her...

 

[Guest]

Eva Churchill...

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Eva shot straight up in a sitting position on her cot, for the moment forgetting the pain deep within her belly. Her face, throat, chest, and stomach were coated in her sweat. She panted, trying to catch her breath. Try as she might, she couldn't escape the heaviness of her...her dream!

The sudden noise woke Adum from his slumber too. "Eva, are you alright dear?" he asked her.

Panting, she said, "Y...yes, I think so. I just had a very aweful dream!

 

[Ravenloft]

Azraiel:

Still held in the warm haven of Eva's womb Azraiel stirred. He was quite upset that the woman was not taking to his gift as well as she should. She heard him in her mind. "They are NOT dreams, they are fragments of the past. I give them to you through the power of the apple..." Eva's hand instinctivly went to her slighly enlargened stomach as the thing inside her stirred once more. "If you do not give yourself over to the visions willingly they will force their way into your waking mind..."