Orgasm denial and ruined orgasm as an unplanned event

[tlinher]

A heterosexual couple is having sex. When both are close to orgasm, something is happening and they realize that they will have to stop their fun. . Their excitement pushes them to continue at all costs. Despite the great desire, at some point, they are forced to stop. It turns out that the last movement of the partner (the pulling out of the penis if they are in a missionary position or doggystyle) or lifting of the female body (if she rides) starts an orgasm for one of the participants, while the other remains on the brink of their orgasm.

Possible situations
First - Travel on a train between the towns. Quick sex in the toilet. Unexpected stop of the train. The compulsion to stop is when they hear passengers coming out of the train compartments.
Second - a cheating couple in a house with a large yard and garden in it. They hear the husband/wife coming home by car. The wife/husband says "She usually uses the bathroom downstairs first. We have time to finish our fun." The compulsion to stop is when they hear unexpected coming out from the bathroom.

 

[Carnevil9]

Interesting topic for a story. As a writer, it provides you with an opportunity to explore both pleasure and frustration. The interesting question becomes, what do you provide for the reader? Just frustration? Or do you ultimately provide satisfaction? Either can work, but they would be very different stories. And would provoke very different reactions.

 

[LupusDei]

Reminds me how I introduced one of my girlfriends to my mom.

We were both in university but living with our respective parents (only out of city residents were eligible for dorms, and had to pay for, unless proved poverty) in rather tight flats (hers significantly more crowded, as they took care of a bedridden grandmother). So we were at my mom's.

Girl was a year younger and it had been remarkably slow start, and I had already decided we won't have full on sex that day even before discovered she was indeed a virgin (not that she knew my decision). But I had her naked and had played with her body for something close to two hours when I glanced at the clock and went like, "okay, now get dressed, my mom will be home within fifteen minutes."

And she looked up at me with her blue eyes huge, "do you realize how cruel it is to leave a girl like this?"

I managed not to laugh, and instead said something along the lines "you said you didn't want to met my mother yet." Then I had to try and convince her she doesn't want to lose virginity in a mad rush right fucking now. Then I attempted to go down on her, with she was suddenly uncomfortable with, despite enjoying my kissing her all over previously. I did get there anyway, but it took time we hadn't. Then the doorbell rang.

My mother always rang the doorbell first, she didn't like to unlock the door if she possibly could not. Her getting the keys out of her purse was a production even if she hadn't her hands full with groceries and what not. If she had to, and discover me inside, she would be mad for that alone, and given the situation I had no interest in her being mad by default, madder than she could be anyway. Her jealousy could be motherly, but no less for that.

So, yes, I promptly jumped in my pants and went to let her in. Leaving my girl on my bed in the middle of a gasp.

Mom did have groceries, and of course expected I would take them from her help to move into the kitchen. And, well I think she got the situation assessment fast. Door of my room wasn't normally closed during the day. There must be certain odors, and she had a dog's nose.

But mom got only as far as an raised eyebrow when her silent question was answered very visually -- my girl drifted out, still in a complete daze; she had her dress on, nominally, but it wasn't sitting right and her long blond hair did a cloud impression. I had to play introductions, as nonchalantly as possible for their both benefit. Mom promptly invited the girl to stay for dinner, that could not be refused, and girl had enough sense to not even try.

I took her back into my room and brushed her hair, and discovered she didn't had anything under the dress when tried to finish what I started earlier, with my fingers this time. She was too tense though, so that get nowhere either.

She didn't stay the night. As it was her first official visit that would be pushing it too far, even if I think her mother would be the only of the three women I would have to convince it's a good idea. But when I took her home (to the grandfather's farmhouse, that is) over the weekend, there was no question she belonged in my bed and took her bags to my room directly, without all the silliness with nominal guest room offers some of my previous special guests had to endure.

 

[tlinher]

Interesting topic for a story. As a writer, it provides you with an opportunity to explore both pleasure and frustration. The interesting question becomes, what do you provide for the reader? Just frustration? Or do you ultimately provide satisfaction? Either can work, but they would be very different stories. And would provoke very different reactions.

The main idea in my mind for this scene is "They had the strength and desire to achieve the best, but they only had enough time to get the worst." Тhis is one of the attempts to answer my own question "Is it possible to have ruined/denied orgasm and the strong emotions around it, without using the usual roleplay "master - slave"

 

[Carnevil9]

The main idea in my mind for this scene is "They had the strength and desire to achieve the best, but they only had enough time to get the worst." Тhis is one of the attempts to answer my own question "Is it possible to have ruined/denied orgasm and the strong emotions around it, without using the usual roleplay "master - slave"

I suppose they could take turns teasing and denying each other, but than you could argue it is still master/slave, but with switching roles in the middle.

On the other hand, maybe they could be teasing each other at the same time. They could even make it a competition: first one to orgasm has to buy dinner at a fancy restaurant.

But that wanders away from your "unplanned event" concept into a well planned holding-out context.

 

[sirhugs]

I suppose they could take turns teasing and denying each other, but than you could argue it is still master/slave, but with switching roles in the middle.

On the other hand, maybe they could be teasing each other at the same time. They could even make it a competition: first on to orgasm has to buy dinner at a fancy restaurant.

But that wanders away from your "unplanned event" concept into a well planned holding-out context.

first one to orgasm has to get off in a fancy restaurant.