Oral Addictions

[HandsomeHunk]

Here's an idea......Jack is a young man of maybe 15....he's small in stature but women love his "Paul Newman" blue eyes......but jack has just one problem.......he can't seem to get enough oral sex....he fantasizes about eating pussy all day and night...every female he sees...he day dreams about....his mother, sister, aunt the butchers wife.....his mom's entire bridge club....

Then he finds Lilith......his mothers cousin and she takes him for a wild ride of unbridled oral sex adventures......

 

[Chicklet]

a few questions

1) is 18 young enough for your tastes?

2) is it 100% important that he finally eat out a relative?

I like the angle - there are so many stories about women who want to suck dick, and not so many about men obsessed with pussy. This could be a great Fetish or Incest story.

Chicklet

 

[HandsomeHunk]

Thanks for the feedback.......Jack loves older women...and women just love mothering Jack. When his mothers cousin reads Jacks private journal and learns of his obsession...she then takes Jacks oral fantasies to new hieghts and teaches him the art cunniligous (spelling).

Personally, my favorite way of making love is to orally gratify my partner to climax and then make love to her.....it seems to make for multiple climaxes....

 

[Screaming Grace]

Feeding the family is a nice idea this is from the male POV so maybe a title of Eating your family might work and I must agree with Chicklet 18 is a must.
SG

 

[TrinaT]

Handsome:

I have to agree with the other ladies, 18 is a must here, especially with all the problems with child porn and the internet. I've had to put several blocks on my im's as a result of the "younger" crowd thinking its cool to try and stretch beyond their years. I think it would surprise a good many people as to just how fast you could get snagged. Best to stay legal with 18 and above.

Trina T.

 

[Guest]

Not to mention it's the site's rules and not "just PC"...

 

[Chicklet]

Thanks for the feedback.......Jack loves older women...and women just love mothering Jack. When his mothers cousin reads Jacks private journal and learns of his obsession...she then takes Jacks oral fantasies to new hieghts and teaches him the art cunniligous (spelling).

Personally, my favorite way of making love is to orally gratify my partner to climax and then make love to her.....it seems to make for multiple climaxes....

okay

jack has an obsession

jack has many mother-like-figures - maybe teachers, maybe aunt's, maybe cousins. personally if I wrote the story I'd use a step-mother and step relations because it's incestual enough to keep interest but also not enough incest to gross me out.

jack's mother figures find out about his obsession one way or another.

then what?

what if they get him drunk? maybe they're having a little drinking party at the house that jack lives in, and he comes downstairs. they're playing poker and they invite him to join. they're laughing and giggling and drinking and he (a young man who hasn't had much experience with alchohol) is getting quite loose. then the stupid immature game of truth or dare, or perhaps the women just start asking jack questions, since they're already maybe a little turned on by teasing him? he admits his fetish, and they're delighted to hear. they want to try him out.

okay so do we cross a line? do we have them "take advantage of him" while he's drunk? or do we have them put him to bed, kiss him goodnight, and pretend that they don't know anything about it? option two might make for a longer, more interesting story.

jack wakes up with a bit of a hangover and can't really remember what happened the night before. he certainly doesn't remember telling his "aunt's" about his oral fixation. they don't tell him that morning, nor the next, but perhaps they start to tease him more and more. leaving their soiled panties about, putting a leg up high on a chair to adjust their stockings. cliche'd things like that to drive him wild. then one night one of them comes into his room as he's about to go to sleep, straddling him in the bed, leaning down to whisper huskily into his ear that she wants him to suck her clit, to lick her cunt, to taste her juices. INSTANT HARDON for our little jack.

something like that might work.

 

[TrinaT]

Very good Chicklet. I agree about the step-relation, a little easier for me to swallow too. Realistic enough for Jack to be 18 also.

Trina T.

 

[HandsomeHunk]

I get the idea...our main storey character...Jack has just turned 18....but he's small for his age.....dark hair...killer blue eyes.....he just makes women want to take him to their bossums....

Jacks finds out about oral sex when he finds a girl on girl video tape of his fathers......he's the perfect virgin male......Jack sees his first sexual experience of two women deeply envolved in 69 until they colapse exhausted.....to Jack...that is sex!

Any other ides?

 

[Screaming Grace]

I get the idea...our main storey character...Jack has just turned 18....but he's small for his age.....dark hair...killer blue eyes.....he just makes women want to take him to their bossums....

Jacks finds out about oral sex when he finds a girl on girl video tape of his fathers......he's the perfect virgin male......Jack sees his first sexual experience of two women deeply envolved in 69 until they colapse exhausted.....to Jack...that is sex!

Any other ides?

Sounds good to me an 18 year old virgin, are there such things? SG

 

[Guest]

Of course there are. I know virgins in their mid to late 20s.

 

[Screaming Grace]

Of course there are. I know virgins in their mid to late 20s.

Sorry I was joking. SG

 

[Guest]

Oh.

 

[SeXyGuRLiE6969]

okay

jack has an obsession

jack has many mother-like-figures - maybe teachers, maybe aunt's, maybe cousins. personally if I wrote the story I'd use a step-mother and step relations because it's incestual enough to keep interest but also not enough incest to gross me out.

jack's mother figures find out about his obsession one way or another.

then what?

what if they get him drunk? maybe they're having a little drinking party at the house that jack lives in, and he comes downstairs. they're playing poker and they invite him to join. they're laughing and giggling and drinking and he (a young man who hasn't had much experience with alchohol) is getting quite loose. then the stupid immature game of truth or dare, or perhaps the women just start asking jack questions, since they're already maybe a little turned on by teasing him? he admits his fetish, and they're delighted to hear. they want to try him out.

okay so do we cross a line? do we have them "take advantage of him" while he's drunk? or do we have them put him to bed, kiss him goodnight, and pretend that they don't know anything about it? option two might make for a longer, more interesting story.

jack wakes up with a bit of a hangover and can't really remember what happened the night before. he certainly doesn't remember telling his "aunt's" about his oral fixation. they don't tell him that morning, nor the next, but perhaps they start to tease him more and more. leaving their soiled panties about, putting a leg up high on a chair to adjust their stockings. cliche'd things like that to drive him wild. then one night one of them comes into his room as he's about to go to sleep, straddling him in the bed, leaning down to whisper huskily into his ear that she wants him to suck her clit, to lick her cunt, to taste her juices. INSTANT HARDON for our little jack.

something like that might work.

this sounds very excitin, is somebody actually going to write this story?

 

[HandsomeHunk]

I think I have the storey line.......Jack our oral hero......lives with his mother and Aunt at an all girl private school.

I will write a first draft very soon.

 

[Chicklet]

I think I have the storey line.......Jack our oral hero......lives with his mother and Aunt at an all girl private school.

I will write a first draft very soon.

uhm...okay, so, i have a problem with this. I don't know if you want to hear criticism about your idea here, but the idea of a boy in an "all-girl's-private-school" is sort of hard to swallow. Idea: the mother and aunt are teachers at the private school, they live together away from there. Jack is home from college on a vacation, spring break or something. within walking distance from the school for story purposes, and more realistic.

chicklet

 

[HandsomeHunk]

I love good feedback.....thanks.....I mean it.

Okay, so how's this. Jack's mother is the head mistress at the private all girls school and his Aunt is her secret lover. Jack has just graduated from High School. While living with his very strict father....Jack has never been allowed to date.....so he has run away to find his mother, whom he has not seen in 10 years.

Jack Oral fixations are based upon a dark secret...he thinks!