Opus Equi

[OhMissScarlett]

Viewed twice.

Thus far no flat rejection.

The tension is fucking killing me.

I've got my fingers crossed and am wearing my lucky underwear.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I've got my fingers crossed and am wearing my lucky underwear.

Take it off and give it three lucky whirls around your head?

Shanglan

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Take it off and give it three lucky whirls around your head?

Shanglan

done, but now I can't find them. I hate when that happens.

 

[BlackShanglan]

done, but now I can't find them. I hate when that happens.

Check the ceiling fan?

 

[OhMissScarlett]

Check the ceiling fan?

Thanks. I'll be more careful the next time. If it woulda been a shoe, someone might have died.

 

[minsue]

Viewed twice.

Thus far no flat rejection.

The tension is fucking killing me.

Crossing all feathers for you. I look silly as hell, but it's worth it.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Crossing all feathers for you. I look silly as hell, but it's worth it.

Actually you look amazingly luscious in that AV. I know I've said it before, but it's worth repeating.

Now the story has four views, and still no judgment either way. Someone out there likes to watch me suffer.

Shanglan

 

[rikaaim]

Actually you look amazingly luscious in that AV. I know I've said it before, but it's worth repeating.

Now the story has four views, and still no judgment either way. Someone out there likes to watch me suffer.

Shanglan

Is this the same one I read for you? I'm just curious.

 

[minsue]

Actually you look amazingly luscious in that AV. I know I've said it before, but it's worth repeating.

Now the story has four views, and still no judgment either way. Someone out there likes to watch me suffer.

Shanglan

Thanks, kind horsey

I'd say no judgement yet is a good thing. It's a sign that they're giving it thought instead of summarily rejecting it as against the guidelines.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Is this the same one I read for you? I'm just curious.

That's the one, yes. Revised and minus about 6500 words.

Minsue, I think you are right. I hope so. That or it's just that damned long But surely after about page five they'd ... oh I really must stop. I've been doing this all day.

*hugs* Cheers gosling.

Shanglan

 

[rikaaim]

That's the one, yes. Revised and minus about 6500 words.

Minsue, I think you are right. I hope so. That or it's just that damned long But surely after about page five they'd ... oh I really must stop. I've been doing this all day.

*hugs* Cheers gosling.

Shanglan

Don't worry about it. If they can't see that it's a great story, well then we'll just have to...

I'm sure that they'll see how wonderful it is. Hell, even if it doesn't post, I'm damn glad to have read it. I would also encourage everyone else to read once it IS posted.

Just relax horsey. Everything will be okay...

*gets brush to comb horsey's mane...*

*gets whip to encourage horsey...more like distract...*

 

[BlackShanglan]

Rejected.

For ...

Having paragraphs that are too long.

*goes off to bang head on stable wall*

(It's a good thing, right? Fixable? Or are they just taunting me mercilessly?)

Shanglan

 

[English Lady]

Easily fixable love. It's just a case of cutting your paragraphs down...a few returns here and there!

 

[BlackShanglan]

Chopped up and re-subbed. Now they have their chance to reject it for being repulsive, as opposed to poorly formatted.

Shanglan

 

[minsue]

Chopped up and re-subbed. Now they have their chance to reject it for being repulsive, as opposed to poorly formatted.

Shanglan

*HUGS* If they were going to, I'd guess they'd have done it the first time.

 

[English Lady]

exactly what minsue said.

It's horrid when something gets rejected...happened to me for a lack of punctuation once *L*

It'll be up there soon though I know


(oh and your story is about 2/3 complete )

 

[Pure]

lente, lente, currite noctis equi

 

[BlackShanglan]

I know. *sigh* Less haste, more speed.

You made me smile, Pure. My longer work in draft includes a translation from Latin as part of the seduction of the female lead.

Shanglan

 

[BlackShanglan]

Fuck me.

They E'd it.

Words cannot express.

I can't see it on the new stories list yet, but it's in my user profile.

Will.

 

[carsonshepherd]

Oh my God. !

 

[minsue]

I'd do cartwheels if only I knew how.

http://addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/party/discosmilie.gif

So unbelievably happy for you and proud of you, Shanglan!