Opinions wanted

[Reverse_Cowboy]

When I originally started the story "My Daughter The Slut" I had planned on having it involve incest as you can see from the way the first chapter ends if you have read it. (Father and daughter fantasizing about each other while masturbating.)

My proof readers aren't into incest and suggested that I should take the story in another direction. Neither of the 2 following chapters contained any incest and I am currently working on the 4th chapter and I would like to hear peoples opinions on wether or not future chapters should include incest or not.

 

[HornyHenry]

When I originally started the story "My Daughter The Slut" I had planned on having it involve incest as you can see from the way the first chapter ends if you have read it. (Father and daughter fantasizing about each other while masturbating.)

My proof readers aren't into incest and suggested that I should take the story in another direction. Neither of the 2 following chapters contained any incest and I am currently working on the 4th chapter and I would like to hear peoples opinions on wether or not future chapters should include incest or not.

I haven't read it. (A link here would help you.)
However, masturbating while fantasizing about each other is pretty close to incest, but not really there.
I feel that you should consider what category you want the ENTIRE story to appear in. If you start in incest, no one would find the other chapters in a different category.
It sounds like you should put it in a different category and put the remaining chapters there too.
There is nothing wrong with writing about incest here, but you MAY not want to mix it. You might want to write a different story that deals with incest only!
Good luck!

 

[snooper]

... My proof readers aren't into incest and suggested that I should take the story in another direction. ...

"Downsize" your proofreading team and "outsource" to a different shop. They are NOT there to change a story that much.

I don't much care what an author does with a story, but I passionately want to read what the author wants to write, not what a proofreader wants to read. If I don't like a story, that's my loss, not the author's.

Whenever I edit I am careful not to make suggestions of that magnitude, and I sometimes caution authors not to make their work sound like mine!

 

[sirhugs]

seeking more opinions is likely just to confuse you more.

If the people who proofread for you are your friends, and target audience, write to please them, but you must first please yourself.