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[Darksyde]

Hey guys (and gals)...I was wondering if I should continue on with the story, or go with another set of characters. Any feedback/advice on this/my story would be greatly appreciated.

Oops!!

It's a watersports fetish story...be forewarned!

 

[StolenTurtle]

Go for it!

Hey guys (and gals)...I was wondering if I should continue on with the story, or go with another set of characters. Any feedback/advice on this/my story would be greatly appreciated.

Oops!!

It's a watersports fetish story...be forewarned!

I read your story and though I'm not really into water sports, I think it was really good. I thought the flow of the story was nice (no pun intended) and it was very erotic.

You should create a second part to the story...would be cool to see what she does next with her new found pleasures.

-StolenTurtle

 

[AceStroker]

An interesting scenario on the sidewalk. I agree with turtle, a cliff hanger like this needs a sequel.

 

[Darksyde]

Thanks for the response, folks...I'll work on the story in the next couple of days. I'll try to make it longer and more...interesting.
Writing doesn't come naturally to me, so be patient!
Thanks again!