Ooooh...Mistress

[christcat69]

This is a new one. Tell me what you think.


Oooh..Mistress
thrashing,
writhing,
quivering,
shuttering,
bucking,
snaking,
dripping...
submitting to you.

Tie me up, tie me down. Do what you will, just fuck me now.-CC69

 

[Rybka]

It is interesting and somewhat descriptive, but I would not call it poetry.

Regards, Rybka

 

[christcat69]

Not poetry?

If you don't think that's poetry, you should hear it in the bedroom and perhaps you would change that opinion.

 

[Rybka]

????

This is a new one. Tell me what you think.

You asked, I answered. Please don't be so defensive.

Regards, Rybka

 

[WickedEve]

I'm sure in the bedroom it's poetry in motion. lol

Someone posted a poem last year that's similar to this one. It was a list poem. Anyone familiar with those? I haven't read anything about them. There was a lot of debate as to whether or not it was truly a poem.

 

[lickmyboot]

Hard to argue what is "a poem" and what is not. Fast and furious--just like I like it. Short and too the point. It's poetry in my book!

 

[christcat69]

lol

Thanks Eve. I think I look at everything as art or poetry, as long as there is feeling put into it.

I want you on all fours, now!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

I'm with Lick...

Why wouldn't it be poetry? And quite good actually. I've got a few list poems of my own. I'll try polish and bring them to the forum.

 

[christcat69]

Thank you Lauren

I'm with Lick...

Why wouldn't it be poetry? And quite good actually. I've got a few list poems of my own. I'll try polish and bring them to the forum.

I'm sure they don't need polishing. I'm glad someone out there liked it.

Thanks again Lauren, Eve and of course, Lick xoxoxo

 

[Merlins Boon]

I think the poem is great. Short poems have always existed, because sometimes, the fewer words you use, the better. Japanese Haiku is a perfect example of how short poems can be great. And list poems can be great because they express emotions in a simple, straight forward manner that everyone can understand.

Escape From Hell

Fighting
Biting
Struggling
Striving
Engaging
Waging
Warring
Raging

Just to get home


Words are nothing more and nothing less than what we are willing to take from them.

 

[smithpeter]

I Speak With a List

I wrote a list poem once but it had more words per line.
I don't care. Put words next to each other or

one
atop
another

and call it a poem or what ever and it is what ever it is. Also wonderful.
How about two word poems?

Thoughtfully,
Fallen.

 

[Angeline]

The ultimate conclusion of this

is one- letter poetry, where the title might be longer than the poem. For example:



Zen Poem

b




Some days everything from the letter "b" to the way the light hits my daughter's hair is poetry to me. I guess that would cover your poem, too Christcat! And Rybka, your poem with the line "tequila mockingbird" was very short and I loved it.

 

[Rybka]

How About. . .

I .

(I red dot. i.e. I read that.)

Regards, Rybka

 

[smithpeter]

poem and tears at closure

The End

(0)

 

[smithpeter]

suspect reason

oh my goodness!!

extreme
subtle
off
on
often
sex
nothing
you
your
neck
thigh
breast
rest
love
that need
it grows and it can not
go away
the need
like inhaling
needing
letting go
laying
on
our
left
side
~
divide

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Lapsus Carnis

Quærens
quem
devoret
hair
eyes
nose
mouth
tongue
skin
nipple
navel
clitoris
lips
moist
breath
pulse
bless
orgasm
ab
æterno

 

[christcat69]

Thanks guys

I'm so happy so many of you responded to this thread. All of you have amazing talent and I loved all of your list poems. Thanks again guys.

I especially enjoyed you poem, Lauren.

I want you on all fours, now!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Re: Thanks guys

I'm so happy so many of you responded to this thread. All of you have amazing talent and I loved all of your list poems. Thanks again guys.

I especially enjoyed you poem, Lauren.

Thank you, Christcat!
I submitted it a few days ago: Lapsus Carnis