Angelus
Wrapped up in Shadow
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Okay, one thing that I have to point out... this is set in 1766 and although there are guns avaliable it would be cool to leave them out.
Oh, and Isolde.... I thought that Diane should have a reason to hate Thomas so much and came up with two, if you don't like them then you can change them.
One is that Thomas and Diane used to be lovers but he kept on thinking and talking about his lost love that she got so angry and bitter at him that she wants to kill him.
The other one is that Diane used to have a family(?) but one night she found the home burning and knew that they were inside. She then saw a figure and it was Thomas so she thought that he lit the fire and blames him for killing her family but she doesn't know that the reason he was there was to try and save them?
Those are just my ideas, if there is something that you can think of by all means do.
Oh, and Isolde.... I thought that Diane should have a reason to hate Thomas so much and came up with two, if you don't like them then you can change them.
One is that Thomas and Diane used to be lovers but he kept on thinking and talking about his lost love that she got so angry and bitter at him that she wants to kill him.
The other one is that Diane used to have a family(?) but one night she found the home burning and knew that they were inside. She then saw a figure and it was Thomas so she thought that he lit the fire and blames him for killing her family but she doesn't know that the reason he was there was to try and save them?
Those are just my ideas, if there is something that you can think of by all means do.