OOC: The Eye of the Serpent

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This is the OOC thread for a new storyline I have planned. Below you will find the intro to give you some idea of the style, in the vein of Sinbad stories/Jason and the Argonauts, etc.

The role of the alluring Witch Queen of Taliss (booo hissss!) will be taken by Maid of Marvels, whilst I will play a heroic daring-do type captain (huzzah!) of another vessel, the Sea Fox, who is a thorn in her side. Crew for both ships needed! Sign up here :)

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The galley Serpent of the Mist was three days from port, and the smell of the salt ocean breeze was strong in the slavehold as the oars cut a wake in the water. The steady thump, thump, thump of the drum beat out the rythm for the galley slaves working at the oar, every so often interspersed with the sudden crack of a whip. Where a slave fainted from simple exhaustion or hunger and thirst, he was force fed a cup of water from a bucket carried by a scurrying slaveboy and a chunk of broken bread, and helped back onto his oarbench, manacle chains rattling.

The ship was one of many in the large navy of Taliss, and the slaves onboard it a few of thousands who worked at oars, in fields, in deep mines and quarries, whilst more fortunate slaves worked in the homes of the wealthy, but even there they were oft given more than their fare share of toil. Taliss, the Land of the Witch Queen, the matriarchal figurehead of a land which had waged brutal and bloody war many times with its neighbours over the centuries.

Such a war seemed to be brewing again. Already the ambassadors of other kingdoms had struck what bargains they could at the Witch Queens court and returned to their homelands. It was not known why the Witch Queen had been again mustering her forces or to which horizon she had set her dark gaze, but it appeared as if the uneasy peace of the last few decades would be soon be shattered.

Above the dank dark slave hold and oar banks, the galley was perhaps the finest example of the expertise the shipbuilders put into their construction in Taliss you would see. Sleek and menacing, the prow sported a ram that rode just over the waterline capped with a serpentlike scowling face. The great sail, currently furled, was blood red in colour. Sailors went about their business with practised ease, and several soldiers in red surcoats and black-stained chainmail stood silently but watchfully on guard about the deck, hands resting on the hilts of their curved scimitars.
 
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Oh, excellent idea. I like it alot.
I have a character on hand, for the Serpent's crew. Let me know what you think.

Sarage, an egyptian, caught when he was young, and worked as a slave boy, until his skills in battle were discovered. He could either feed royalty their dinners, or go out and kill in wars. He chose the latter, and trained in all the weapons of the modern world.
He wears little armor, except leather skins, and ancient colors of his childhood tribe. He does have a shield though.
Around 26 years old. Over 6 feet tall, lean, black hair and dark brown eyes. He understands the language, but speaks little of it, rather having his sword do the talking.
 
With Maid's approval...

General Solvitur, Lord High Marshall of the Witch Queen of Taliss. Not much is known about Solvitur before he joined the armies of the Witch Queen. What is known is his meteoric rise through the ranks since joining. He mad a reputation for being an apt soldier, and one with a brutal and efficient style. His ascent through the ranks started during one of the numerous border wars. During a battle that as going badly, Solvitur killed his captain and took command. The battle turned quickly from a defeat to a rout, but for the other side. Froma company Solvitur quickly moved to a battalion, then a brigade. A few years later he was a corps commander an under the personal attention of the Witch Queen. Shortly afterward the previous Lord High Marhsall died, and General Solvitur was appointed to the position.

General Solvitur stands tall with broad shoulders and stern features. He has short dark hair and a well-groomed mustache and goatee. His eyes are cold and dark, but tend to flash and burn with angered. Since arriving in the court of the Witch Queen he has adopted a veneer of polish and civility, but maintains an iron grip control over Taliss' armies, navies, and shadowy secret police.
 
Berthed at the island port of Halinth, a notorius place of refuge for pirates and other adventurous seafarers who preferred to align themselves with no one country, some three weeks sea travel from the coast of Taliss, was the Sea Fox. The captain of that sleek vessel was sat upon a barrel on the quay, watching people go about their work, nodding politely to some he recognised as they passed, greeting others with whom he had shared a previous voyage or mug of ale by name.

Jarak was his name, known in many places as the Prince of the Nine Sea's, was a sailor who was nearly a living legend. Fair-haired and with deep blue eyes like the sea's he knew so well, he was dressed in a simple dark leather jerkin, breeches and worn black boots.

At his hip hung a long slender-bladed scimitar, with which he was almost as adept as he was a master navigator, and tucked into his belt were a pair of daggers with which he had won many a coin at throwing contests in taverns. His skin was well tanned from long days beneath the sun. Lithe built but strong set regardless, he stood just shy of six feet tall at his twenty-five summers of age.

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Welcome poohlive and LongshanksSierra :)
Needing some able-bodied and adventurous crew for the Sea Fox.
 
Ok, how's this...

for my character,

Calandra's mother died not long after Calandra was born and her father and brothers raised her. They had taught her to hunt and she was exceptionally skilled at it. She had left home at 17 to travel all over, competing in hunting contests. She wasn't taken seriously at her first few competitions and she had delighted in proving herself worthy to compete. After a couple of years Calandra had grown tired of competing and was considering returning home when she met Jarak. Not being able to pass up a new opportunity for adventure she convinced him to let her join the crew of the Sea Fox. That had been almost a year ago and she hadn't regretted her decision for a minute.

Calandra is about 5'7" with long black hair and hazel eyes. She is very skilled with a bow and arrows and also has some skills with other weapons.
 
Welcome to the story, Calandra.

Don't think you're safe from Melanthe's (boo hiss) clutches just because your aboard the Sea Fox with Mr. Huzzah the Hero-type, Jarak. Queen Melanthe's and General Solvitur's grasps are far-reaching. :D
 
That's right. We're going to have a lot of fun on this adventure. Just wait and see.
 
Thanks for the welcome! Yes, it definitely sounds like it's going to be a good time.
 
Permission to come aboard Captain

Name: Zander
Age: 25
Physical Description: 6’5”, muscular build, black hair pulled into a short ponytail, tanned complexion, green eyes

Brief History: Zander was part of a group of mercenary pirates who worked for the Witch Queen. One of the tasks she sent them out on turned out to be a suicide mission, their one boat against five of the enemy’s boats. All of Zander’s crew mates, including his lover, Aida, were killed. Zander only evaded death because he’d fallen overboard and was thought to have drowned. In the five years since then Zander had been waiting for an opportunity to come against the evil Witch Queen. While he waited he’d become friends with Jarak, the legendary Prince of the Nine Sea’s, and had become one of his right-hand men.

Weapons/Skills: Zander uses a battle axe made out of silver that he got from one of his raids as a pirate. He knows how to use many of the other common weapons but prefers using the battle axe. His specialty is ship to ship fighting.
 
Welcome Calandra (Jenn) Zander (Lostsoul). Looks like we have enough to get the main thread afloat :) so I will post that this weekend. Oh, and don't mind Melanthe, she's all huff. Well, mostly. We'll show her, and her minions. ;)
 
All huff? I thought Melanthe was all hiss.

Looking forward to the opener... but there is no chance that you will prevail. Just give it up. :p
 
Minions?

I wouldn't refer to General Solvitur as a minion. Even 'lackey' or 'henchman' is a little too trite and condescending. Underestimate the Lord High Marshall at your peril! Bwahahahaha!
 
*POKE*

LICKSPITTLES???

C'mere you cute little vibrating Popeye imitation. I'll show you lickspittles. You are FAR too cheeky for your own good. We can't have that. NONONONONO
 
Minions... lickspittles... toadies... underlings... lackies... flunkies... whatever you want to call them Maid ;)

Better stop before I get a spanking.

Hmm... I think I'm missing something...
 
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Hope you guys don't mind a newb joining in but this sounds like fun.

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Olvan came from a small village in the northlands where it's said that the people descended from the ancient giants of yore. True to form Olvan didn't stop growing until he had surpassed 7 feet in height.

Olvan has always had a thirst for adventure and left home early to fight in the witch queen's armies. His skill was impressive but he soon was discharged for being far too compassionate towards the enemy. He eventually made his way towards Halinth where he met up with Jarak, whose exploits he had heard of and admired. He managed to join the crew and has been a mainstay ever since.

Tall and huge, with thick muscles and a stomach that has seen one to many victory celebrations, Olvan has a mop of red hair and a thick beard to match. He is jovial and good natured, a lover of wine, women and the occasional barfight. His command of the common tongue isn't perfect but, then again, Olvan rarely has a thought that requires a great deal of verbosity.
 
Welcome Drinking Cap

The right side? Perhaps. But certainly not the WINNING side. :D

Quoting General Solvitur, if I may... and I may... Bwahahahaha!
 
The Queen has a three day start at sea, but it still isn't going to make it easier for her than for the crew of the Sea Fox. (Okay, that is the ONE time I will say Melanthe doesn't have an advantage. :p )

You're welcome, Lost. Now come and play. Your huzzah captain has posted. ;)
 
Lot of interesting people join up here......what is needed anything special. An interesting time period just not one I have played in before is all. I love a good roleplay.
 
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