OOC: The City Time Forgot

CrystallineTears

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OOC:The City Time Forgot


I had an idea for a thread which may or may not turn out to be interesting, only time will tell. Anyone is welcome to join in.

The setting is all mythical, not really anyplace at all. The city of Bah`Lin was hidden deep in the forests by the gods of its people nearly a millenia ago as protection from invading forces who were quickly taking control of the surrounding areas.

Since that time, it has very little contact with the outside world and only those who have been raised and groomed to venture beyond the city are allowed to (or even have a desire to) leave its protective boundaries, and they do so only once a year to travel to nearby cities and villages to trade for those things which are the citizens of Bah'Lin can't produce for themselves. The luck of it is, that the city is blessed with and unending wealth of gold and jewels. They are of course smart enough not to arouse suspicions by trading too much in any one place.

Meanwhile, time has sort of passed the people of Bah'Lin by. They still belive in and worship their gods and actually the gods still at times walk among the people of the city. (Perhaps this was the real reason why they hid the city to begin with. Since without worshippers, gods lose their power) They live a simple life, but are for the most part a trouble free city. Very little if any crime and disease at all. It's almost like a paradise.

My character, Ariana k'Lar is the sort of the ruler of the people, though there is also a council that sees to the day to day workings of the government, as well as their go-between with the gods (whom they call the Ancients). She's young, but well trained for the duties she assumed after the accidental death of her father nto quite a year before.

The beginning of the story takes place as the yearly trading party, led by Ariana's Cousin and dearest friend, is returning. Unbeknownest to the city, they've brought along with them two men from the outside who have (by accident?) stumbled across the cities boundaries as the traders were returning. Little do they know (except of course for the gods and goddesses) that the coming of these two men will forever alter the city and the people, perhaps even destroy.

The thread will need someone to take the characters of Ariana's cousin, the two outsiders, and other various people of the city as well as one or two of the gods or goddesses if you like. The gods and goddesses are more like those of old mythology, not quite all powerful nor are they perfect.

Char Name: Ariana k'Lar
Age: 19
Height/Weight: 5'6" 110 lbs
Description: Darkbrown hair and eyes, well tanned skin. She also bears the symbolic birthmark on the inside of her left wrist (the rising phoenix) that designates her the chosen by the gods to be a ruler over the people.

MiniBackground: Ariana has only recently come to terms with the death of her father, it's not usual that people should die as young as he in Bah'Lin. Because of that, there was much talk afterwards speculating as to whether or not he had perhaps done something to displease the gods. She bears much responsability for a woman of her age and therefore spends little of her time in pursuit of fun as most people her age might. Her position also sets her apart from others her age and most ages, leaving her probably one of the lonliest people in the city of Bah'Lin.

Anyways, that's the basics of the story. If anyone's interested in joining, let me know :)
 
Hi Crystal,

Sounds like an nice plot, just wondering if you ever heard of Brigadune (spelling might not be right). Sounds an awful lot like it!! lol But a good story nonetheless.
I would love to be a part of it, but unsure of where I could fit in. I don't like playing guys roles yet.. lol

Maybe I could be like your advisor? or your servant, like a Lady in Waiting? hehe whatever eh? they're about the same thing. lol
Let me know whatcha think, and then ill post my characters stats!
 
Yes, i've heard of Brigadoone :) I love that story. This idea is sort of a mix between that and the tales of the lost city of gold from Central America. The whole plot is still pretty open, so there are plenty of opportunities. An advisor would be great since the city has a council, or even as one of the goddesses :)
 
I love it, It's all too Cool.

I'll take two Charicters.....

One of the Outside men (Heh, Can you say "Road To El Dorado"??)
And One of the Male Counsil advisors, who is Currently in Love (and the feeling is mutual) With a Female Ancient.

I'll leave it up to you guys to do the rest, I Love the idea BTW! *winks* Good luck! and i'll be waitin!
 
Aphrodite

I'll take the roll of one of the goddess if you like. i am kinda partial to Aphrodite, not terribly powerful, but has infulence. She also loves a bit of mischief. *wink*
 
Welcome aboard Roland and Mistress!

And yes I can say Road to El Dorado ;) But believe or not this was an idea I had written down long before I saw that... It just used to be a desert. I just decided that a forest can have a more mystical quality about it.
 
whoo hoo, its a rollin'!

ME? a Goddess?? well, I never actally thought.. heehee..

Can I make one up?? Hows this sound:

Sabriel, Goddess of the forest/trees/woodland animals.

I kinda watch over the town and the people, as well as the surounding area. So when the other two guys come in, i can be really mad or something! lol

:)
 
Hmmmmm....
Well, I wouldnt miss this thread for anything, it isnt often we get a Newbie who has a great story idea.....

and you two Godesses can fight it out for me. *winks* Just let me know which one of you holds my other charicters heart....
 
Hummm, now let me try and remember the last time i fought for a man...that would be..ummmmmmm....never. lol

I will hold any heart you see fit to put in my keeping

*sweet smile*
 
Mirus Tiriac

Age: 25
Height: 6'2 Weight: 210 lbs
Eyes: Green Hair: Black

Description: A lifelong friend of Ariana, Mirus has long considered her something of a "little sister," while at the same time harboring more intense feelings for her. Now, with the death of her father and her ascension to rulership, he has sworn to protect her from any harm.

Skilled in the arts of war, Mirus is a dangerous opponent either in armed or unarmed combat. He never seeks violence as a first response, though, trusting in Ariana's wisdom to find a better solution. He is completely at her service whenever the need arises, however.

Mirus has a dim view of the outsiders, and would throw them from the gates of the city if Ariana so wished it. He is wise enough to realize what their presence could mean.

So, what do you think?
 
Here's an idea. If it doesn't fit into your vision, no problem :)

The gods hid the city long ago, and still keep their eyes on it in a protective way. But they may not always want to take a personal role in protecting their charges, and sometimes there is no time for intricate plots that affect mortal lives. And so they placed a creature in the forest surrounding the city. This being lives quietly on its own, bothering no one unless someone ignores the warnings and goes hunting or exploring in its area. Its existence is known, but not talked about (bad karma). But if fools stumble upon it, or if the rituals are performed to summon it, woe to those in its path.

After all, every wilderness adventure needs some bad-ass beast in it, but I thought a dinosaur might be TOO much. Let me know what you think about this.
 
captainb

sounds interesting. Yes a dinosaur sounds rather too much, but maybe some sort of mythological creature? one that no one has ever seen before?

Anyways, the idea is definately good.

Crys :)
 
May I Join?

Talen k'Lar
Age: 28
Height: 6'0
Dark hair and eyes

Ariana's cousin returning with the group of traders
 
the Wild

The creature is a manifestation of the dark side of Nature. It has chameleon-like qualities, and it's true form is only seen if it attacks away from anything it can mimic. There might also be a power attached to it which it is not aware of, but which can be activated by the right conditions. Example: if its True Name can be sounded when it attacks, it will answer two questions, or lead you to a desired location... This can be developed as the gods see fit :)
 
Selene

OOC: Hope no one minds that I joined the party ... if so I can disappear if you like!!



Selene

Age: 24
Height: 5'4"
Small frame, long chesnut hair, blue-gray eyes that darken or lighten depending on her mood. A bit on the wood sprite side, loves to swim in the spring and run barefoot through the woods. Has a special kinship with the Wild, brings him offerings of food and pretty things, though she has never actually seen him. Also spends much of her spare time with Femi, asking questions, learning whatever is offered about healing. Secretly infatuated with Talen for years, but far too shy to approach him.
 
Is this thread passing away? Do we need another character to inject some life back into it? I'll pick up a more lively character if the others will come back into the story too.
 
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