OOC:PM69, or LAVA and CB's baby

[CelestialBody]

 

[Renegade]

Me again.

Ok let me try this AGAIN. lol If anyone has a problem with me posting here again... uh... blame LavaGoddesss since she told me to! Yeah that's it. lol Here's my character with name and appearance:

Name: Adam(is that ok or would you prefer or more machine type name?)

Appearance: Body is 21 in appearance. Brown eyes. Short dark hair with dark skin and well toned body. Has increased levels of speed and strength. Stands at just over 6'ft tall.

I'll work more on this later. This is just off the top of my head and I'm in a rush(yes that's my excuse lol).

 

[CelestialBody]

 

[Dirk13]

so umm...im in for this thing, it looks pretty damn cool


Name: Vincent
Body: looks 22
Appearance: Brown hair and eyes, nice build, not too muscular, 6 ft. 2 in. tall.

K? K?

 

[CelestialBody]

LAVA-

 

[sex-maniac69]

OOC:

Ok heres my Idea for a character.


Name:B623(Bobby finn)
Blonde Green eyes toned and tan.

He is one of the cyborgs that got away.If its alright with you two.

 

[Phoenix]

Ok I am in

Ok since CB called me in, I decided hey why the hell not. *Warning though I may have gaps between post due to time constrains and my health problems CB you know I am talking about to. So here is my character:

Brodus

Appearance: A 6-3 269lbs African American man. Very cut very well put together. Short shaven black hair with a black goatee. Looks like he is about 24 years old.

History: A former warrior cyborg. He was one of the most dangerous field agents during the earlier war until he was virtually destroyed. What was left of him was used for this cyborg which was used in the PMS69 experiment.

 

[CelestialBody]

Here we go,

 

[CelestialBody]

Hello?

 

[Phoenix]

Uh Celest I need to know a few things about your character. 1) What is her name 2) I need a desciption of what she looks like and 3) What does she shave well yanno. Well maybe not the last one but hey it is a good question. hehe

 

[Phoenix]

So what did ya think

By the way I know my part was a lil harsh Celest, but I figured this would be my characters point of view which may differ from yours. To your character your husband maybe flawless but to the cyborgs he would appear to be a evil pimp. Ah the joys of posting with a opinionate bastard like me

 

[CelestialBody]

Phoenix,

 

[Phoenix]

Well we can say he was following you to Lava were he kidnapped you from the balcony. Yeah yeah that's the ticket. As for the whole arm cannon thing I figure hey he was a cyborg so why not. OH well I just changed it. As for the perception that you were fond of your husband well my character Brodus does not know that yet. As for the name my bad I guess I missed it. Waxxed??!!!! >>>>>>>(J Phoenix has just fainted)

 

[CelestialBody]

 

[Renegade]

Wow

Phoenix, I just have to say that you are doing some great posts in this thread so far. You were always one of the better ones, but here you are showing so much talent. Especialy in your last post to the thread. Just wanted to say you're doing a great job buddy. Keep it up.

 

[Phoenix]

I am just showing and proving

Whew I almost did not think anyone noticed. It all stemmed from the fact that someone on BB said that I was not all that good a writer for a journalism major and the fact that I felt like maybe it was time for me to do a serious character (which I have not done yet at Lit). Basically I am tired of holding back so more often I am gonna show some edgier stuff. I got to say though tonight I just felt like I had something to prove as a serious poster. Woah a coming of age without the evil personality number two what is the world coming to. (personality number two: Hey is that the four horsemen I see up there. Dammit dammit dammit #1 this is all your fault.



BTW: Thanks the praise means a lot to me though seriously. Thank you

 

[Phoenix]

I am just showing and proving

Whew I almost did not think anyone noticed. It all stemmed from the fact that someone on BB said that I was not all that good a writer for a journalism major and the fact that I felt like maybe it was time for me to do a serious character (which I have not done yet at Lit). Basically I am tired of holding back so more often I am gonna show some edgier stuff. I got to say though tonight I just felt like I had something to prove as a serious poster. Woah a coming of age without the evil personality number two what is the world coming to. (personality number two: Hey is that the four horsemen I see up there. Dammit dammit dammit #1 this is all your fault.)



BTW: Thanks the praise means a lot to me though seriously all jokes aside. Thank you.

 

[CelestialBody]

Phoenix

 

[CelestialBody]

LAVA

 

[CelestialBody]

PHoenix

 

[Phoenix]

Watch a Phoenix rant with Trish Stratus reference WOOHOO

Ok y'all here is the deal. Celeste I hope you do not mind me villianizing your husband in the story because Asya just gave me a sick idea to explain how the cyborgs are made so I gotta use it.

And I can not believe y'all like my Mr. Intensity stuff better oh well I guess for this thread I have to put my "class clown" away. But that is OK because I am really getting into this character because some of it stems from my personal life in a way. After all basically I took my feeling of being "used" in the past and cranked it up to such a personal level that the "Brodus" character has replaced JayDen as my fav. ( well not by alot though because the J man is pretty much like how I am in RL).

Am I almost a Guru? WOOHOOO (bad break dancing routine) OWwie I feel on my head again. Note to self: Linebackers can not spin on their heads. Waitaminute Holy Bris Batman! They are planning to spank me. UH uh I got it I want Trish Stratus to take my place for the spanking after all she looks better getting spanked that I do. Ask Renegade. hhehe. Dear lord 500 swats. I got it. UH ................Phoenix is offically retiring at 499 posts. Yup that's it. WOOHOO save my ass from the evil clutches of Literotica. BTW why would you want to spank lil ole me Celeste after all I saved my good stuff for you thread didn't I? Uh oh I see an oncoming tomato. Anyways thanks for the praise now I have to hide in my secret hiding spot known as my basement. Tata you sick bastards everywhere.

BTW hey this is 492 so you know I had to let this one drag a lil

 

[Renegade]

Phoenix

Ah just go play that word game thing in the Gen board and get your 500 posts already! lol But you better be glad that you're getting the Lit spanking at all. I'm already up to 2000 plus posts and I've yet to receive one. I have got some serious catching up to do with that.

 

[CelestialBody]

 

[CelestialBody]

Dirk

 

[Dirk13]

Ok, my guy is the so called 'leader' of a group of cyborgs, that have taken refuge in an old hospital, as seen. My programing is different than them, they have more of our makers, aka your guys husbands, attitudes, to the way they almost hate you at times, then they also have a fealing of love for you. Me, i have broken it so that i don't feal hate for you, or other things they have. I have more human fealings than them, i was the one they had tried to perfect in the end, and in the end, they ultimatily killed themselves or whatever goes on. But i just don't want some things to get out, like what really happened, if it was different, and all that sorta stuff, myself and the others are linked in a way, so that we can talk to eachother, and thats how i tell them what to do. But so far as the seeing, i have cameras up in each of the rooms and halls.

the idea of it is, each of them has the personality of each of the guys, each has the others wife, and they really are their husbands for the short of it, if wanted, we can sorta take a spin off...but we will let that be up to them. They treat you as they were told by them, they were told by each other, aka the husbands meaning, about their wives, and they programed in how they felt about the others, or vis versa, you know they could have their own wives...i'll let ren and phen fig that out.

[Edited by Dirk13 on 01-18-2001 at 08:23 PM]