OOC: Jack's Smirking Revenge

delphicRENDERER

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Hello all, and as my very first post - I'd like to try and get myself into the thick of it all. I used to RP in my younger years through AOL, but I do not use it anymore. Anyway, wish me luck as I attempt to get my feet wet again.

Anyway, here's the skinny on the story, "Jack's Smirking Revenge". It has much to do with the characters and of the story from the book/movie Fight Club with my own alterations to characters and storyline - hey, even your own (You don't want to play Character X from the movie? Okay, make up your own). The character I will be playing is a schizophrenic who does not have a total grasp on who he really is - much like the Narrator in the book/movie. So I will refer to him as "I", "me" - unless I am refering to this Narrator's other half, and if you know the story, then you guessed it: Tyler Durden.

The Narrator, at his workplace has a strong lust for practically every woman - there is one that he holds dearest to his heart - but here's the thing: his boss seems to have a hold of her heart instead. So his boss is with the woman the Narrator loves, and the Narrator needs to find a way to win her over. He's known her as long as he can remember - around 11 years - since their sophomore year of high school. Forward to now, they are in their late 20s/early 30s - the boss is in his late 40s.

Tyler likes to show up whenever the Narrator begins to feel inferior to his boss, when the Narrator's sense of dignity is out the window. This can be practically anytime as the Narrator is always shy, prude and can never seem to work the courage to speak with the woman he loves - but merely throw her a glance and that occasional smile that seems to interest her - just what is it about him, that kind of thing.

It will all boil down to either the Narrator killing his boss, or coming to terms that he may not be able to steal this woman from him - but rather having to sharing her in some way (to be decided by those who participate).

If you would like to be a part of this, please either e-mail me or PM me. And if you need any further information or clarification on something, feel free to ask! Thanks in advance, and have fun! :D
 
I am claiming the spot of the woman. delphicRENDERER, once your ready to begin, just PM me. I think we still need a boss, if that is even necessary really, lol.
 
I'm not familiar with either the book or movie as I didn't read one or see the other *s*, but I like the sound of the plotline.

If one of you'd care to give me hints and ideas I'd be happy to play the boss.
 
SpringDawn has given me a bit of background Jack/Tyler. It'd help me if I know if his boss is aware that he knows her and how well.
 
Character description

I'm finally getting around to starting to write this thing, lol. Here's a character description ..

Narrator/"Jack": Around 5'11" in height, fair skin, short brown hair that's usually combed back neatly with a short goatee. A slender build, with a few defined muscles underneath the suit he generally wears to work. Light hazel eyes..

Tyler Durden: (Think as Brad Pitt portrayed this character :D) Around same in height, tanned skin, slightly longer hair that's styled many ways - usually spiked up. Flamboyant in choice of apparel. Darker looking eyes..
 
Jack's boss:

Mario Puzo, Italian descent of course. A typical 5'11" tall, 198 pound "Itallian Stallion". A real ladies man and stud and loves telling Jack all about it.

Would still like to know if Jack's aware Mario's SpringDawn's character and how well he knows her?
 
Ahh, thought I forgot something else. ;)

Not really, his boss doesn't know much about Jack's infatuation with the woman. He can sense a spark, but he's not sure. How long Mario's known her is up to you decide, really - but probably a good couple years or so.
 
SpringDawn, I still need a name for Mario's sexy lil play thing so I can post to the story.
 
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Sorry, im in a bit of a rush this evening and can't really post any of the threads im in. Tomorrow, I'll post more then. For a name, go with Elizabeth Watson (Liz for short).
 
Nah, I got some more time, lol.

Elizabeth Watson (Liz for short). Stands about 5'8", 125 lbs., tanned skin from spending days on the beach. Long blond hair, either in a pony tail or wild. 36-25-36 size. Bright blue eyes.
 
Sorry about taking so long....ive had a few busy days...but now I should be ready to go....already posted my first post.
 
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