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Hi, folks.
Really excited about my first Literotica collaboration. Polar Juice and I are writing. We'd like your feedback. There's a thread for comments. If there's an interest, we might edit the copy and post in the Erotic Coupling section. It has a modest pace and no explicit sex(yet).
We'd like your feedback so we can gauge how to proceed, what to sharpen, edit, eliminate. Below is the link.
http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51539
Thanks.
Polar Juice & Daughter
Really excited about my first Literotica collaboration. Polar Juice and I are writing. We'd like your feedback. There's a thread for comments. If there's an interest, we might edit the copy and post in the Erotic Coupling section. It has a modest pace and no explicit sex(yet).
We'd like your feedback so we can gauge how to proceed, what to sharpen, edit, eliminate. Below is the link.
http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51539
Thanks.
Polar Juice & Daughter
