(ooc:casting call)Veshnian Desert

DarkThoughts01

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The Veshnian Desert is known for its cruel temperatures and horrible climate to humans,as it is normally glaringly hot and dry or flooded with rain that is piss-warm and feels sticky..
Desert,where nothing grows or lives long.
In the Desert there are now 4 races,they are:
1.Humans-new to the Desert but increasing their poulaiton dramatically,they seek to subvert the "inferior" beings in the Desert and expand themselves,as overpopulation has soared rapidly
2.Veshna-a race of semi-intelligent reptile-like creatures that thrive in the Veshnian desert,hence their names.They have been driven more and more into the worst parts of the Desert or taken as slaves and beasts of burdens for humans.
3.Veshna-ai'Shen-a myth among the Veshna,they ar elike gods,supposedly wielding technologies only dreamed off.They are said to even have weapons that kill in an instant.They supposedly created the Veshna to tend the Desert for them.Supposedly their was a War between themselves and there are now few left.
4.Grenba-shen-a race of tall,thin,fragile creatures colored bright yellows and gold.They escape human expansion because they live in teh sky,using gliders and airships for travel.Water is collected from rain and huge gardens provide their food.They are inclined to leave ground-bound creatures to themselves,but humans have been copying their technology and have started taking to the skies and trying to steal teh Grendba-Shen's airships and technology.
 
I'm interested, though this would be my first ORP. The setting and character types sound interesting - where do you hope to go with it?
 
honestly..anywhere,i tend to le thte story change as it goes along.
Oh and welcome to the ORP message boards:D
 
I think we need to have some type of rudimentary plot, no matter how vague, to start off - any ideas? I'll post some ideas of my own tomorrow ...
 
Plot idea

Here's a possibility ...

A Human-Veshna half-breed, born of a Veshna slavegirl and a wealthy human merchant, sets out to prove his human loyalty by single-handedly capturing a Grenda-shen airship for the humans. However, while he manages to capture a ship and its pilot, the airship crashes in the middle of the desert, where the two of them are accousted by a band of Veshnans who believe that they are the mythical Veshna-ai'Shens.

What do you think? Too Dune-ish? (I was reading that book recently, so your desert setting triggered some elements from the novel in my mind)
 
its alright,iu would have replied sooner but i havent had time to post.
the story was all ready tehe though,the whole point of hte story is that the Veshna and humans hate each-other(besides there completly and utterly different,they wouldnt be able to breed if they wanted to,sorry:( )
The Veshnians hate the humans because the humans are expanding their territory more nadmore and their are too many for the Veshnain to fight with.the plot develops Around the characters you8c reate,such as if i made a Veshnian character He would shape minor or important changes in the story.There isnt really nay one plot its ever changing depending on the character you create,almost anything can happen.
 
sorry if is ounded harsh or anything in ym lasdt post,it was a good idea but it wouldnt work:_(
and lol yeah i understad about Dune lol.

gah i hope people join this,any 1?
 
DarkThoughts01 said:
sorry if is ounded harsh or anything in ym lasdt post,it was a good idea but it wouldnt work:_(
and lol yeah i understad about Dune lol.

gah i hope people join this,any 1?

Nah, no worries dt. I've been busy a bit recently, so I haven't had time to respond.

...so anyone out there? If we're doing this relatively free-form, maybe we should just start IC and see if anyone joins then.
 
shugrs*ya i guess so,i jsut wanted to get maybe 4 or so characters at least though
*bump bump*im jus gonna let peopel see it some more,come on people post!>_<*gets out his inflkatable hammy*don't make me BOP you all*swings it a bit menacingly*
 
This sounds like a good idea. I am willing to join. I hope more people are willing to also.
 
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