OOC: A walk in the dark

Fanged_Death

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Looking for two or more female victims and perhaps a 2nd male accomplice as well

The general plot being the ladies owe a great deal of money to a loan shark and are being coerced into paying it off with the only collateral they have left.

PM me if interested :devil:
 
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Linda Howard

Age 24

Five foot six, 110 pounds dripping wet, a figure that might fill out a swimsuit quite well if she ever wore one, which she wouldn't as she thinks of herself as a proper young lady.


Black hair and brown eyes, a college graduate in business, she's convinced she can use her 4.o average to make herself rich and famous.

Her roommate from college came up with the money and they opened thier first business with great hopes. It soon became evident that Linda had somehow missed a few lessons along the way.

Now the loan is due and they don't have the funds needed or any idea how to repay it without loosing the boutique.

That is until the phone rings and?
 
Hope you don't mind my being your accomplice.

John Brown
Age 30
5ft 11in, Weight: 200lb
Short brown hair, brown eyes, heavy muscular build, Ex-Boxer.
Present occupation debt collector.

Well able to look after himself and his boss after his years in the ring, his boss tells him who has to pay and how much then he goes and collects. His boss keeps him around because he’s never failed on a collection and that’s what keeps his bosses business running.
 
2nd girl

Kammie White (22)

Kammie has long black hair, blue eyes and a tight toned body obtained from years of ballet. Kammie is a spoilt little rich girl at heart her father letting her have her way for years. But since she flunked collage her father has lost patience with her so when she crashes his car and has no where else to turn she goes to the loan shark.
 
Welcome BS, WE and Kammie!

Two Men two women, purrrrrrrrrrfect! We can begin

There is room for ladies if they'd care to join us :devil:

Look for the Link here to the thread if you miss it on the board :)
 
A Walk in the Dark

Thread's up!

and my character's bio

Richard "Boss" Shanus

Six foot tall and lean

Ice Blue eyes and a dark tan

His voice is a deep baritone

He dresses in white suits

The few that have mistaken him for a "dandy" have never made that mistake again, or any other mistake for that matter.

He has three passions in life.

Money

Power

Sex

The last he enjoys perversely but never lets it get in the way of the first two.
 
Desperate

Monique Bardot
32
Red hair
Pale skin
Average breasts
Long legs

Monique is the wife of a , hard working middle class man who owns a restaurant in town. In order to help save expenses in the business, Monique does the bookkeeping. And although she's a good bookkeeper, she has a dark secret. For months she has been skimming some of the resaurant's profits in order to support her gambling habit. She had run up quite a gambling tab and had taken as much out of the restaurant proceeds as she could. There was very little left, not even enough to pay the month's bills.

Unless Monique could find a substantial amount of money, the restaurant would be swimming in debt. The bank no doubt would foreclose on the business. Her huisband would be ruined.

Monique dresses rather well, if not a little too upper class than her true station. She is educated, but very naive in the ways of the world. She was also a bit timid, more of a follower than a leader. She dreaded the thought of the restaurant going under, so she decided to find a sympathetic bank or loan company to see about borrowing the money.

Somehow, she'd figure out how to pay it all back
 
Hi Fanged...

Would like to join your story... thinking that my character is an uncover agent.. working for the government .. she has borrowed money... in order to *get into* the issue.. and now perhaps... her backers... her employers.. have pretty much let her down.. left her out to dry... she is a uncover deer in a den of wolves with no way out.. something along those lines... if that sounds good.. she is after the Boss.. of course... an any of his.. partners....


name: Jensan Surprise
Age: 23
Long dark hair... brilliant ice blue eyes.. much like the Boss's gaze.... exotcially beautiful... intelligent.. and caught in a web that is much deeper.. and much more dangerous than she ever thought .... and has been pretty much abandoned... and is trying to survive in Hell City...



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~ It was late... too late... and she knew she was in trouble.. She had managed to borrow the needed money...nearly 500 thousand dollars... from the *right* people, The Boss. That money had gone to her bosses.. her employers.. the government.... that had been months ago.. many many months ago... and now payment was coming due... coming due to the *Boss*... yet her own government was coming up silent... no money... no communication.. no nothing.. and she was in trouble...

In over her head... with no backup.. and no way out.. what the fuck was she going to do??? ~



Hope you like her.. please let me know...
 
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Ambrosia

Welcome to the party! :D

I love the intrigue and how it makes your character that more dangerous, it will be fun "training" her into her new life. :devil:

I'll work her "entrance into the next post. :rose:
 
Awesome thread--I can't wait to get "a piece" of it!

I will take over the role of Linda Howard, IF need be. wildxfire...just give me the word. Otherwise, I'll create another character if need be.

FD-the thread is a great premise. So far it's great. I look forward to being in it and I definitely am enjoying reading it. Great job!

mya
 
Welcome Mya

I'm glad you're fired up about the thread it seems to be growing and have a lot of energy at present.

I'm looking forward to reading you as well and (ahem) getting a private interview or two with your character.

Fang
 
Thanks Fang. I'm reading along for now and enjoying. I'm ready to come into the thread when it's time. I've had a chance to discuss things with wildxfire also, and it seems we are all on the same page there and I will take over Linda.

Thank you wildxfire for entrusting her to me!
 
That sounds purrfect mya I'm looking forward to it and you joining us.

And speaking of "US" there is a growing number of ladies joining and leading to some confusion.

BullShot and I will be working one by one with each female writer to introduce their characters into the main thread, we'll be staying in contact via PM and "cueing" each as the time comes to join us...

I know it will take some time and hope all are patient as we wish to do justice to each writer who has graciously consented to join us.

Thank you for both that consent and patience ladies, we'll do our best to make sure it's worth it...

Hmmm, to pass the time and stay in contact with us ;) perhaps we could ask each of you what would tittilate you the most to see done to, err, done with your characters?

Fang
 
Hey- are you still looking for female characters for your thread? If so, I have a description I'd be happy to submit. If you've already got enough, it's perfectly understandable.
Thanks!
 
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Maiko_Girl said:
Hey- are you still looking for female characters for your thread? If so, I have a description I'd be happy to submit. If you've already got enough, it's perfectly understandable.
Thanks!

Welcome to the Lit Maiko Girl, I'm pleased your very first post is to our thread and that you'd like to join in.

We (BullShot & I) are about to introduce the next two ladies into the thread and it will be sometime before we're able to write with the next two...if you're still willing at that time please join in with us then...

Until then, read along and enjoy your stay at the Lit!

Fang
 
OK Everyone!

Wanton & Wet and Kammie have done a wonderful job with us and I want to thank them for it :rose:


We're about to add two more sweet writers to the mix, Ambrosia and mya, and with BullShot and my own next post would the two of you please join us as well :kiss:

Again, Thank You Kammie and W&W...for the posts you've already written for us, and the ones to come :devil:

Fang
 
Fanged_Death said:
Welcome to the Lit Maiko Girl, I'm pleased your very first post is to our thread and that you'd like to join in.

We (BullShot & I) are about to introduce the next two ladies into the thread and it will be sometime before we're able to write with the next two...if you're still willing at that time please join in with us then...

Until then, read along and enjoy your stay at the Lit!

Fang

Sounds good. I'm happy to wait a while, just wanted to start poking my head into threads that I found interesting.
I was told to submit a character sheet, so here you go:

Shannon Reed
25
Brown/black hair, down to the middle of her back, wavy
5 feet 4 inches
Tanned skin, small frame
Green eyes

Shannon is extremely strong-willed, expecting everyone to do exactly what she says simply because she says it. But underneath her tough exterior is a girl who is ready to take the right sorts of orders.
Shannon's always been horrible with money, and to get through college took out loan after loan. The loans paid not only for school and a roof over her head, but gave her money that enabled her to party a bit too hard. Since then she's not even bothered with thinking about paying the bills back, happy to pretend they don't exist.
 
Your are welcome MG

BUT all in good time

There are several writers ahead of all of us waiting to join in and it may be sometime before either of us are able to join you in the thread.

Until then

Fang
 
OK...

Update (as if really needed, lol)

Kammie is being thoroughly used and abused by John Brown

Monique has been exposed to the ummm, seedier ;) side of her business deal and is on her way to be-cumming a full fledged employee...

Ambrosia is tending to the business of running her "club" and is soon to be paid a visit by "management"

mya and Jana Lowe have wandered off :confused:

More on the midnight edition... :devil: Til then have fun!
 
BullShot, Kammie, Ambrosia

Wanton and I are to the point where we might all come together in the club, IF you're ready?
 
Celestial Cummings
Widow
Age: 24
Eyes: green
Hair: strawberry-gold
6'2"

A young woman who just has a $100.00 left to her name. She’s starting her life over after the mysterious death of her husband. She’s at the office of Robert Shanus because a man at the local café said he could loan her money till she found a job.

She figures she can get a place to work locally and pay off Shanus with her earnings. She’s a different kind of girl. Easily manipulated, yet in the end... eventually gets tired of it. She tends to go so far, before finally saying enough is enough and takes matters into her own hands.

She carries a lot of baggage with her over the “mystery” of her late husband’s death and she knows there are many questions left unanswered in how she may or may not have played a part in his demise.
 
Welcome Red!

I love your characters name and the mysterious background you've hinted at.

It will be a pleasure writing with you! :rose:
 
Fanged_Death said:
Welcome Red!

I love your characters name and the mysterious background you've hinted at.

It will be a pleasure writing with you! :rose:


Thank you for the opportunity :) I look forward to being corrupted ;)
 
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