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[FieryRedhead30]

I am not one to talk back on any comments made to my poetry, But granted everyone has a right to a opinion , which does not hurt my feelings at all. But u know i was introduced to this site. I have enjoyed many stories and many poems on this site as well. My poetry might not be perfect or impressive to anyone. But u know i post most of my stuff to express myself, cause i have that right. And to anyone who dont like i am sorry.But u know feed me all the critiscism u like. I am so ready to take it all on. I am grown woman . I also write some of my poems that sounds stupid to others to express how i feel , cause my man is over in iraq for 2 years and i have to express what i have missed out on for so long. But i am dedicated and still alive. So to all who have enjoyed my stuff ty . But to others who have not , sorry i disappointed your outlook on poets. But i dont do it to impress you. Take care all

 

[twelveoone]

I am not one to talk back on any comments made to my poetry, But granted everyone has a right to a opinion , which does not hurt my feelings at all. But u know i was introduced to this site. I have enjoyed many stories and many poems on this site as well. My poetry might not be perfect or impressive to anyone. But u know i post most of my stuff to express myself, cause i have that right. And to anyone who dont like i am sorry.But u know feed me all the critiscism u like. I am so ready to take it all on. I am grown woman . I also write some of my poems that sounds stupid to others to express how i feel , cause my man is over in iraq for 2 years and i have to express what i have missed out on for so long. But i am dedicated and still alive. So to all who have enjoyed my stuff ty . But to others who have not , sorry i disappointed your outlook on poets. But i dont do it to impress you. Take care all

"My poetry might not be perfect"; is anyone's?
Turn the comments off, I saw what was left, it was uncalled for, nasty.
Take care, yourself, best wishes.

 

[Du Lac]

Sorry you got hit so badly...

I just read the nasty ass note that dead soul left on your poem. This was why I was ranting and raving on the poem academy.... such negative energy thrusting into ones face... a rape!

Ignore it and wish them GREAT SEX girl.. my motto.. what comes around goes around and it seems like they need some release... all that angry nasty energy bottled up in their body... poor soul! You write, do what you do... and post like hell !!!! That is what we are here for thank God no everyone has a sooted soul like that angry person.... and be happy you are not them breeding such hate...

Write girl.. I just read your stuff and I enjoyed it....
Du~

 

[WickedEve]

I read that comment, yesterday. I was very bugged about it. I tried to think of something to leave on your PC, but I couldn't come with an appropriate response at the time. And I didn't leave any feedback for the poem, because I feel it needs quite a bit of work, and I wasn't sure if you wanted to hear that right after that rude comment.

 

[FieryRedhead30]

Thanks for the response

Thank you for the response . I will j ust have to do that , take off the comment part of my poetry. To me this site has let me free off some of my inner desires , which have been bottled up for awhile.I Might be in the nunya stage, but i still crave, need and want. So i will continue to write what i feel and would like to do to my man when he gets home. I cant wait

 

[Angeline]

Thank you for the response . I will j ust have to do that , take off the comment part of my poetry. To me this site has let me free off some of my inner desires , which have been bottled up for awhile.I Might be in the nunya stage, but i still crave, need and want. So i will continue to write what i feel and would like to do to my man when he gets home. I cant wait

Don't worry about what other people say in comments or posts, Fiery. Some people just have issues, you know? If you're happy with what you write, that's all that matters.

Godspeed to your sweetheart--home soon safe and sound with you.

 

[flyguy69]

The irony in that PC drips: to accuse you of "not being nice" because you removed his first rant against you is just ludicrous.

The "back" button of his browser is apparently broken, and a gun placed to his head, forcing him to read poetry he does not care for. Ignore him, Red.

 

[PatCarrington]

there is a huge difference between constructive critcism and ill manners.

i personally feel that rude comments such as this should not be erased, since they say a lot about the person who left them, but nothing about your poetry.

people who spew venom should not be taken to heart. but they should be left on display for others as an example of what not to be.

 

[CharleyH]

there is a huge difference between constructive critcism and ill manners.

i personally feel that rude comments such as this should not be erased, since they say a lot about the person who left them, but nothing about your poetry.

people who spew venom should not be taken to heart. but they should be left on display for others as an example of what not to be.

I agree. Someone wrote me a PC essay about how I am unimaginative and boring, and some sort of a cunt, albeit I have one. LOL Unh, huh, THAT says a lot about my writing. I left it for others to see the absurdity.

(besides, it's a good tactic for eliciting 'feeling sorry for you' votes) lol - joking. :|

 

[PatCarrington]

I agree. Someone wrote me a PC essay about how I am unimaginative and boring, and some sort of a cunt, albeit I have one. LOL Unh, huh, THAT says a lot about my writing. I left it for others to see the absurdity.

(besides, it's a good tactic for eliciting 'feeling sorry for you' votes) lol - joking. :|

the bastard.

you poor girl. i'm all sappy now.

i vote a 5, without even reading the poem.

(how's that for pity?)

 

[CharleyH]

the bastard.

you poor girl. i'm all sappy now.

i vote a 5, without even reading the poem.

(how's that for pity?)

ROFL

 

[PatCarrington]

ROFL

i don't know which story or poem you were referring to charley, but THIS one is blazing.

i gave it a 7.

 

[twelveoone]

there is a huge difference between constructive critcism and ill manners.

i personally feel that rude comments such as this should not be erased, since they say a lot about the person who left them, but nothing about your poetry.

people who spew venom should not be taken to heart. but they should be left on display for others as an example of what not to be.

I think THAT one went way beyond ill manners

 

[PatCarrington]

I think THAT one went way beyond ill manners

i agree. though apparently, there was a previous comment of his that fieryredhead deleted. i did not see that one. if you are telling me that the first one was even worse than the second, i think it might be time for eve to get her bitchslapping toolbox out of the woodshed.

 

[twelveoone]

i agree. though apparently, there was a previous comment of his that fieryredhead deleted. i did not see that one. if you are telling me that the first one was even worse than the second, i think it might be time for eve to get her bitchslapping toolbox out of the woodshed.

I did not see the first, but objecting to her deleting it, WAY, WAY beyond ill manners, I think.

 

[DeepAsleep]

*coughs lightly into his hand and walks away*

~D.A.

 

[PatCarrington]

*coughs lightly into his hand and walks away*

~D.A.

i think 1201 was referring to the troll's objections ( in his second comment ) to fieryredhead deleting his first comment on her poem, not to my suggestion that the comments of trolls might be better off visible for all to see.

does that get you to un-cough, D.A.?

 

[DeepAsleep]

i think 1201 was referring to the troll's objections ( in his second comment ) to fieryredhead deleting his first comment on her poem, not to my suggestion that the comments of trolls might be better off visible for all to see.

does that get you to un-cough, D.A.?

No, but it just might make me chuckle.

I was slightly less than tactful, in my review and was offering my presence for any comments that fieryredhead might like to direct my way, in the interest of, oh.. catharsis, I suppose. Confronting your accusers and all that business.

~Devil's.Advocate.

 

[twelveoone]

i think 1201 was referring to the troll's objections ( in his second comment ) to fieryredhead deleting his first comment on her poem, not to my suggestion that the comments of trolls might be better off visible for all to see.

does that get you to un-cough, D.A.?

I was, sorry if that wasn't clear, thank you Pat.
That comment that was left to fieryredhead really bothered me, if an anonomus troll has the right to leave shit on her doorstep, what presumption, what gives that troll the right to object if the fieryredhead cleans it up.

I was not objecting at all to your suggestion, although I disagree with it.

Seeing that, and the hurt it caused, well it just kind of puts me in an asskicking mood, and maybe I'm not making things clear.

Pat, you are a gentleman, thank you for making that clear to DeepAsleep.

Fiery, I hope the response in this thread, has helped a little. Remember, nobody gets better at writing, by not writing.
Hope your guy gets back from Iraq soon.

 

[FieryRedhead30]

Thank you all

Thank you all for everything u have said. But u know how i look at it. He needs to build a bridge and get over it LOL. But u know if u have gone as long as i have without it, you would want to release a little out on a poem that might not make since to some , but makes a hell alot of since to me. Thank you all again. He is to be home in two weeks and i cant wait. So if u dont hear anything from me in awhile , well u know i am busy L)LOL have a good weekned everyone