One Non Sexual Story need help with

NiteRidder

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Have a non Sexual story I would like to publish here and could use some review assistance with.

Most appreciate of any help.

Have just published my first few stories both erotic and non erotic, and enjoying it.

this one I need help on is entitled-

The Amazing Mr. Burns

It is about a Gentle Giant from the gym world who helps out a weakling and shows some wise guys what respect means. Kind of a fun inspirational thing. No sex in this one.

Just posted my first few stories and enjoying it.

NiteRidder
 
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