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I absolutely loved this story. I've been having this fantasy and others like it for years. Thanks for putting to words what I've never had the courage to. My only criticism: as a man, I would have spent a lot more time in the initial discovery phase. I found myself wanting more vivid descriptions of what it would be like to touch myself as a woman in those first few moments. Other than that, this story was perfect. I hope you expand it and develop it into a novella.
