ImaginativeCouple
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Oliver, Jess and I - Part 1 (My first story)
Hello all. So this is my first attempt at a story of any genre!
My girlfriend and I are quite imaginative with our fantasies, so I figured I'd try and write one.
I wanted some feedback on it, so where else better than the internet?
This is part one of two I guess, I've nearly finished the story and really don't know off the top of my head how far into it this part is.
Anyway, please read, enjoy and feel free to leave all and any feedback in the comments or DM.
Thanks.
P.S. Names have been changed!
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Hello all. So this is my first attempt at a story of any genre!
My girlfriend and I are quite imaginative with our fantasies, so I figured I'd try and write one.
I wanted some feedback on it, so where else better than the internet?
This is part one of two I guess, I've nearly finished the story and really don't know off the top of my head how far into it this part is.
Anyway, please read, enjoy and feel free to leave all and any feedback in the comments or DM.
Thanks.
P.S. Names have been changed!
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[Material prohibited as per forum guidelines. Please post your story on the main website]
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