Older women

[Reshbod]

I am currently working on some stories dealing with older women and younger men. Most of the stories I read on this and other sites dealing with this topic fall into the same overall themes. The stories I am in the process of writing turn some of the more common themes in general erotic stories around. (I hope). I know I would be interested in reading more like this.

1. Woman in her 40's of 50's babysits for young couple, ends up being seduced in sleeping with the husband or joining a 3-some.

2. Hot young cheerleaders mom accidently walks into locker room and ends up being gang banged by coaches or team.

3. Daughters boyfriend/husband sleeps with her mother, who is not an "identical" twin or hotter version of daughter. Rather she is graying, with more of an hourglass shape etc. The usual effects of aging in the real world, but still has something that the daughter misses.

Those are the stories I am currently working on. I would love to hear other ideas along these same lines or if people think these stories are interesting or not.

 

[Axeltheswede]

Sounds like story ideas worth pursuing. There are a few cliches to be avoided when writing older women characters. Many stories focus on how "young" the older woman looks. Call it the 40 but with the face of a 24 year old syndrome. Not very realistic.

I think most readers of the "Mature" category would rather appreciate an older woman for qualities that reflect her age. Things like patience, wisdom, and experience can flesh out a mature character well.

I wouldn't apply the above to your locker room gangbang romp. That is pure fantasy of the first order. Play it for heat, the reader would have to suspend belief going in anyway.

Good luck.

 

[unknown man]

forget

forget the gangbang and go for the straight 1 on 1 sex!

 

[lexium]

Here is a little experience that my add a little realism to your stories of older women.

Have the young guy seeing what he wants to see. Example: A silm waist, curvy hips, ass lifted high in a pair of shorts, smooth shapely legs, pronounced calves leading down to filp-flops. The face is hidden by shoulder length hair, good sized breasts held by a tight fitting bra. The on looker only sees a well developed body, the object of his curiousity, but isn't able to get a look at the face until he has the uncontrolable urge to approach her.

You might not want her to turn out to be ugly, but take notice of the little things that give away her age. Like, the corners of her mouth, and the deepth of her features, hits of gray at the roots of her hair. These things don't take away from a woman's beautiful, they just show how long she has been beautiful.

 

[Tatewaki]

Resurrecting old but interesting post.

*BUMP*

-T

 

[MissTaken]

I have heard comments on other boards and from real life friends, that yes, Mature stories need to have more detail in terms of realistic maturity.

Even if there are descriptions of breasts that dont' stand up proud and tall as they did in her youth.

For our readers, some prefer the reality based story as they can relate more readily with a woman in her 40's who resembles the sweet woman down the road with the post child bearing tummy and saggy breasts.

Give them some hope in their fantasy?

 

[sirhugs]

I agree that more realism would give the stories freshness, but I write as a mature man. Depends who your audience is. I like ideas 1 and 3 the most. Idea 1 could be a couple of stories- seduced by hubby first, then 3some. Or, for a twist, seduced by wife first,, then 3some. Or separately seduced by each withoout other knowing, then 3some in third story.

 

[Chicklet]

Shameless Self Promotion...

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my Mature story...'bout a guy with his Mother-in-Law

Massuse-In-Law

 

[Chicklet]

d'oh

I didn't spell Masseuse right in that link...I apologize

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Shameless Self Promotion...

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my Mature story...'bout a guy with his Mother-in-Law

Massuse-In-Law

a fine story ( non-self promotion). a good example of the need to find fresh angles to avoid being tedious. Familiarity breeds comfort ( how else can Everybody Loves Raymond remain popular?), but excellence demands ingenuity( did you see the er season opener- what other show would slice off an arm like that? Ok, I know, Buffy, but that's on upn...). An example from the movies- " You've got mail " is the same movie as " Sleepless in seattle", but the email twist gives it freshness. Meg Ryan nude would have worked better, but they went PG instead... aw, well.

 

[Chicklet]

why are we talking about movies? i must have missed something?

 

[sirhugs]

why are we talking about movies? i must have missed something?

I was illustrating my point by analogy- most movies, like most good Lit stories , really only use a few basic universally appealing plots or themes. What keeps audiences interested in new ones is the details. Or, as Milton Berle said, there's really only 7 jokes- it's all in how you tell them.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

In the last few days, I downloaded many photos from the internet, showing mature women (aged between 40 to 60).

Even with a not so pretty face, some mature ladies are very erotic.

So, what about this: Maybe this guy (20) dates a girl (between 18-20). She has a pretty face, but only small boobs and a small butt. Overall, she is pretty thin, maybe even skinny. Her mother is about 50. Her face is "normal", and her body is chubby. She has huge, sagged tits and a big fat ass. And this is exactly what the guy likes ... big tits, big ass ...

Also: Maybe the daughter doesn't want to have sex (yet), she wants to wait a little bit younger. But the mother is pretty much the opposite. She loves to suck cock, she likes anal sex, all that stuff. So even though she doesn't look sexy, she likes to have sex.

As an inspiration, I post a picture of one of my favorite mature photo series.

 

[Tatewaki]

I love mature women stories. And mature women for that matter. Sadly, I suck at writing such stories. My first attempt, Stranger on the Shore was a fun story but missed the mark.

Hmmm ... Maybe I'll resurrect another thraed of mine, one dealing with examining Story Genres. Mature would be a good one to take a closer look at.

It can't be all sagging breasts and fat asses that makes guys hard wrt these tales.

-T